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  1. Vita: Accepted!
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  3. Psyga: Looks good for the most part. My only issue is that people shouldn't just have found their powers/gear in their backstories.
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  5. And the arc idea itself looks good (DBZ seems like the kind of thing where main characters dying isn't as big of an issue), although I have to wonder how much the PCs could do in post-Saiyan saga DBZ.
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  7. Clanjos: Accepted!
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  9. Vaultboy: He looks good for the most part, although I'm going to have to reject that power. If I'm reading it correctly, it's...kind of problematic. I get that he doesn't have any offensive ability on his own, but it kind of breaks the challenge of any "boss fight" or "protect x" scenario.
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  11. Also, speaking of Stands, one thing I forgot to mention is that, for the sake of fairness, any "can only be seen by people with x power" situations will include all forms of power.
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  13. I'm not really familiar with either of the series' those arcs are for, but from the sounds of it, the Macross one seems to fall on the irreparable side. Feel free to correct me if I'm misinterpreting things there.
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