My Ideas for fics that may or may not be explored (SPOILERS)

Just ideas to keep in mind for myself.  Nothing much to see here.

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PMD: Brave Adventurers
Originally planned as a fangame for the Explorers of Time, now scrapped because of laziness, may come back as fanfiction.
Pokemon are not limited to 4 moves, but emotion/determination aids in showing their preferred attacks
Based on the JP music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NvEXRkTSdio

Contains (no names planned yet):

Main Characters
Buizel, who is the only known Buizel in the land (yet there are plenty of Floatzel).  Turns out he was artificially created by a group of humans far away from the town hub, on its own island.  Though not a robot, his flesh is man-made.  Has little to no memory of the lab/island he was created in, but remembers waking up, floating on Shuckle, who he then brings to land and saves his life. Although not dark nor edgy about not knowing of his origins, he is missing some emotions that all pokemon share.  Has to be taught some of them.  Lacks a sense of fear as well as unable to understand it, and as such, gets into a pinch when odd are looking against him since he does not turn back.  Has a tendency to easily bond with others, and absolutely hates betrayal.  Strong Willed.

Moves:
Aqua Jet (primary, gets stronger over time/distance traveled.  Brave mode makes attack pierce up to 3 enemies.)
Wide Slash (Secondary, fan-area attack.  Brave mode makes it a 1v1 attack, but does consecutive combos and shoves target back.  Not aligned with any element.)
Whirlpool (Tertiary, spins rapidly and form a whirlpool around him, attacking targets within 1 square of him.  If brave mode, range increases to 2 squares).
Secret Power (An unknown punch, whose element randomizes.  A byproduct of the lab)
Swift (Throws stars like shuriken at targets that don't miss.  Brave mode makes them multiply even more for dakka goodness.  May occasionally throw floatsac instead for explosive results.)
Low Sweep (Trips up a pokemon to slow then down a little.  Brave mode allows use of a team attack with Shuckle, where he kicks the shell towards targets for massive, consecutive damage)

Shuckle, Buizel's friend, who has accompanied him around the time he was created.  Acts almost as his mentor.  The Shuckle came from the same Island as Buizel, but only his shell is manmade after his original shell was destroyed by an unknown force.  Said shell is now rubber-like, and although its defense isn't as good as his first shell, has made him very bouncy, allowing for several ricochet-like attacks and quick escapes.  Knows about Buizel's origin and the lab/island he came from, but doesn't talk about it nor inform his friends, much to Buizel's confusion.  Was the only pokemon in the lab that wasn't human-made.  Very informative, otherwise, and helps Buizel understand emotions that he cannot comprehend/yet to learn.  Discovers that there are a small handful of Human-made pokemon that escaped the lab.  Often lost in thought.

Moves:
Rollout (primary, bounces off walls and makes the attack even more dangerous the longer the move goes on.  From 3rd hit onward, it starts to knock enemies backwards)
Rapid Spin (Secondary.  Attacks enemies 1 square away, and pushes them back, freeing him from binds and hazards.  Reveals hidden traps. Possible thanks to rubber shell.)
Bulk up (Tenses his shell up to embrace for a strong attack)
Curse (Plants himself to the ground and emit an unusual aura that scares off pokemon temporarily.  No effect on Buizel)
Toxic (Tertiary. Sprays poison out of its body onto target, causing damage and bad poison if it hits. Courtesy of the lab.)
Berry Drink (If given a berry, will allow ally to drink from his hole and heal even more)
Withdraw (goes into its shell to prepare for a team attack with Buizel.  Only available when Buizel is under Brave effect)
Ancient Power (If under the influence of drowsiness or brave, will unleash powers of unknown origin to raise rocks and smash onto target.  May make him more powerful/intoxicated.)

Darkrai, previously defeated by Totodile and Pikachu, has lost his memory after taking damage while entering a Dimensional Rift.  He has also gotten significantly smaller in height and size.  On Buizel and Shuckle's first mission, the two encounter one another and Buizel befriends Darkrai, as both do not know where they came from.  Shuckle is suspicious about Darkrai, but after some questioning believes that he does indeed have amnesia, far worse than Buizel.  Buizel invites Darkrai into their team, but the entire town upon seeing him, got scared and became vacant.  Confused, Darkrai looks around, only to be attacked by a villager, who easily overpowers him.  Before the final blow was struck, Buizel intervenes.  It takes some exposition from Pikachu to convince the villager and the town that Darkrai is friendly, though asks Totodile to keep an eye on him in case he gets his memory back.  With that, Darkrai joins the newly formed Team, giving it the name of Team Brave.  Somewhat of a clown.

Moves:
Hypnosis (primary support, puts foes to sleep.  This is the only bit of power he has left before he was defeated.)
Disable (Secondary support, disable a pokemon from using a move. If under Buizel's influence of Brave, disable turns into paralysis.)
Feint Attack (Main attacking move, disappears and appears towards a target to throw a quick punch.  Undodgeable.)
Calm mind (other support, time of being alone prior to encountering Team Brave has given him time to think, clear mind, and boost his ability to support himself)
Focus Blast (charge attack move, with enough calm mind he is able to focus it into a ball of energy, which is launched and detonates to a target, damaging it along with any other target 1 space away of impact.)

Team Charm will be the first team to fully befriend the two characters.  Buizel eventually "befriends" the queen of Team AWD, who is interested in his "brave" mode, to the dismay of the other members.  Unsure if there will be any romance planned.

(Iffy stuff; likely to be removed.  Identified by brackets[])
[Artificially created pokemon must eat every 5 days or they will decompose rapidly into nothing.  Upon not eating for 24 hours, decomposition starts when a quarter of their face/body will turn blue, with veins visible.  On day 3, the left side of the face/body turns red, with veins showing.  On the 5th day, they will scream, and their body decomposes into a liquid state, leaving nothing but "bios" and bones, which eventually combust into fire and ashes. In the lab, this process was done on purpose so that the ash could be used to recycle their creations.
Up until the final day, the artificial pokemon do not feel any ill signals except for what they see on themselves.  Additionally, they do not feel hunger, so they occasionally have to be reminded to eat.  One bite of any food, even a berry, will reset the counter back to 0.]

Ex: http://postimg.org/image/u0fxxxnk9/

Reoccuring Villains/Antagonists/Rivals

Mothim is an adament bug that antagonises buizel on purpose for the sake of being a douche to him.  No one knows why, though.  Strongly defiant.  So defiant that it unleashes his brave mode if he's forced to do something he doesn't want to.
Turns out that he too is an artificial pokemon, and holds a grudge on him for not only being a favorite of one the scientist, but also being the only mon that wasn't "recycled."  He has memories of being in lab, but they are vague.
Moves:
Air Slash
Psychic
Aerial Ace
Silver Wind
Electro Web - Lab byproduct

Brave mode forces him to go melee, changing his move set
Bug Bite
Acrobatics
Thief
Air Cutter
Natural Gift - another byproduct

Ledian is part of Mothim's team and is the brains of the group.  She has villanous crush on Shuckle, much to Mothim's dismay.  Tries to convince Shuckle to become her partner/lover and abandon Buizel.  Is the first to suspect something off about Buizel being a regular pokemon as she compares buizel with mothim's attack behavior.  Thoroughly cunning.
Moves:
Comet Punch - mostly used to make people talk
Bug Buzz
Mach Punch
Safeguard
Roost - quick evade
Protect


a lonely natured slightly-insane Floatzel (based off the one in my pearl playthrough).  Mistakes buizel as one of her children and kidnaps him often.  Has potential to be friendly, but is very overprotective.  Will bash anyone that dares to threaten her "Buizel Boo boo!"  Highly Persistant
Moves:
Crunch
Waterfall
Swift
Surf
Aqua Jet
Ice Punch
Agility - get in, take buizel and get out


A Galvantula that is obsessed with cool.  Often takes items that he thinks are cool, and can be seen wearing shades.  Thinks that brainiacs are not cool, and is rather territorial against them.  As such, Shuckle is forced to deal with him on various occasions.


Synopsis:

Story takes place after Explorers of Time.  Encounters Treasure Town when exploring and searching for food, and upon looking at the entrance to Wigglytuff's Guild, the Diglet/Dugtrio are unable to identify Buizel's feet.  This caused a lot of the guild members to come to the entrance to see this "new" pokemon, including the author's original team from Explorers of Time playthrough (Totodile and Pikachu).  Not surprisingly, Team Skull (Skuntank, Koffing, Zubat) appears later after a few hours, sees Buizel, and decide to challenge him and Shuckle to a fight (Skuntank and Koffing vs Buizel and Shuckle).  Buizel and Shuckle is uninterested, but an attempted sucker punch to the face is blocked, and the fight starts.  It ends up with Skunktank calling Zubat for help, but Team Skull is unable to induce their fear tactics onto the Buizel, and are curbstomped by the duo from a quick aqua jet, wide slash, and rapid spin.  Team Skull swears that it isn't over, but the crowd applauses the both of them.  Buizel is confused, while Shuckle blushes about it.  Wigglytuff is interested in the two and invites them into the guild (more like kidnaps them).  The two can't come up with a name yet, so they hold off on naming their team for later.

Their first assignment is to recruit someone into their Team, and come up with a name for it.  Dugtrio gives them a mission to explore a newly discovered area named "Mystifying Forest" to which Buizel volunteers to go.  From there, the duo learn that the pokemon in these areas are quite hostile, and are forced to fight in order to get deeper in, hoping to find an ally in all of this rage.  Buizel, disappointed, was about to fall back until he trips over an Enigma part, triggering part of the forest to open up into a cave, where they discover a lone pokemon, who goes by the name of Darkrai...


[Major Arcs:

*Introduction: Self Explanatory
*Random Dungeon Exploration: Small story sections.  Friends, enemies, Fun stuff, etc.  Gain more prestige to travel further until Tototdile touches Buizel, causing memories to rush in his head of Buizel in Zero Isle, along with other humans like what Totodile used to be.
*Zero Isle Arc: Discover that this isle is part of 2 islands that have Buizel's origin.  Mew in disguise watches this area for any "unnatural pokemon" to inform other legendaries.  This isle also reunites Buizel with some of the other artificial pokemon that ran about.  The Center is the last part, holding the heart of the lab.  An insane Porygon/Porygon2/PorygonZ guards this area, who will be the big bad of this arc and is responsible for hiding the other half of island.
*Legendary Arc: Discover that the creation of a legendary (Mewtwo) led to the destruction of the lab and island.  Go on journey to find him, but searching for this pokemon catces attention of anti-artificial-mon legendaries.  Meanwhile, Darkrai accidently gets his memory back and is conflicted with following his previous plans and whether to choose to betray his friends or not.
*Arceus/Girantina Arc: Arceus/Girantina is not amused by existence of Buizel, Dialga bringing back totodile, and distortion, and goes primal.]

[Typing Theory:
I'm experimenting with a quick theory for a PMD thing I may/may not do about the effects of how a secondary type differs from a primary type.  Currently I plan that secondary types give same combat and weakness advantages as primary; however, environment-wise secondary types are weaker.  For example, a vanilluxue can live in cold without any problem since it is primairly an ice type, but a sneasel, which is dark/ice, can stay in the cold for a while, but may eventually freeze to death if prolonged; or a water type staying submerged for however long it needs to while pokemon with the secondary type can stay underwater, but not for long periods of time.
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My Naughty Florges: Fertilizing

A third chapter of the Florges series.  Michael, a teenage student at a Pokemon Trainer School, has a problem, with his rather "affectionate" Florges.  In this chapter, he begins to research information about the Florges evolution line, trying to figure out how it all went wrong and if there is a way to stop her advances; however, he will soon learn that the best way to get information is to witness and feel it himself...

This chapter will contain: Sex, female ass play/spanking, Vinejob on penis (1), Minor exhibition (Psychic jacking off penis during class.  Florges sucks on a Spelon berry to base it off on, finish off with eating berry and one strong spicy suck off), and possibly anal.

If needed, add a teasing scene where Florges makes MC grope her ass during a gogoat tour around the mansion and he has to hide it in front of everyone, or have her sit on his lap and grind at his dick with her behind, making him try to hide an erection and a look from a rather curious owner.
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Pokemon Love Stories: The Bad Ends Volume 3 - Prepare to Cry

Mtrainer x FMegaGardevoir will be pushed into here.

Also do that sad lilligant story as well in this one...maybe alter ending if its too depressing for my taste.  I do prefer bittersweet after all.
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Do a thing with female frillish here.  Scenario will be similar to Ash's encounter with it though; MC's first encounter with frillish is fishing competition who likes him and clings on until she's forced to leg go (gotta think of something for that), and then I'll likely follow the direction there that is in the idea bin.  First story to be in third person, so take caution.

Also doing research on moon jellyfish on the side to see if I can implement anything interesting to go along with it.

T'would be nice if the anon that partially did his frillish thing to share his, even if it isn't completed, too.

tormenting moth aside
<WritingIdiot> You're not technically supposed to grant a personality to a third person narrator.
<WritingIdiot> As the narrator is supposed to be impartial, a clear glass window for the reader to see into the story.
<WritingIdiot> However, by use of several adjectives, you can subtly grant your narrator a colorful voice without making it too distracting.
<WritingIdiot> Example
<WritingIdiot>  “Such weakness, such weakness indeed!” Not content with letting the Riolu rest, Feyley reached down and grabbed onto Blue’s collar. His eyes were jarred open as the Mienfoo plopped herself down on his belly, pinning him down with her rear as she raised his torso up by his neck. She leaned her face in close to his, giving the poor Riolu an eyeful of her furious expression
<WritingIdiot> "giving the poor Riolu an eyeful" gives the implication that the narrator thinks that the Riolu is in a pitiable state.
<Unown> I think Feyley is killing poor Blue from awkwardness.
<WritingIdiot> Which colors his voice, and in turns, colors the reader's perceptions of what's going on.
 This is an important tool to use if you want to affect how the reader is going to see some things in the story
<WritingIdiot> "The disgusting scent." vs "The heavenly scent."
<WritingIdiot> You can slather paint on your window, but remember that the third person narrator does not take sides.
<WritingIdiot> Especially if it's omniscient
<WritingIdiot> You can't go

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As a child born with osteoporosis, the doctor performed a special surgery, replacing his brittle bones with the elemental plates (made by Arceus) shaped like bones. Cut to several years later, where said boy is now a TV professional wrestler, fighting against other fighting types in Johto (imagine Generatiov IV).  A surprise attack by Team rocket at his work place invoke the powers of the plates in him, and unlocks the color change ability on his arms.  Punches his way through victory by using the pokemon's move type against them.  Additionally, the awakening of this ability allows him to understand and talk directly to pokemon.  With these new powers, he decides to go on a self-imposed journey to challenge and defeat all legendaries with his bare hands.  He is accompanied by his number one fan, a wild Female Ledian, who may act as his shield (casting reflect, light screen, etc) on his journey to best the best.  Obviously he will not only fight legendaries, as he will have to deal with other pokemon that challenge him or block his way to his goal.

Here is my take on this:

Kid is born with osteroprosis, doctors were about to replace the material of bone, when suddenly a rift in time (caused by Gold when Arceus made an egg of Girantina for him) caused the material to change into elemental plates.  With little time left and the surgery already started, the doctor was forced to improvise, and it worked.  Several years later, the boy, now a young adult, has wrestled and fought against Machops, Machokes, and Machamps, as well as several other fighting types.  A star of his own wrestling show, he has various fans, one of which is a Ledian, who is his "number 1 fan."

Team rocket then attacks, wanting to take the wrestler pokemon for their own use.

Protag is able to fend off some of the pokemon until one of the pokemon used a poison move, which he blocks with his arms.  His arms start to glow purple, but it doesn't hurt.  He then punches out some of the other Team Rocket's pokemon and see that the jabs are poisoning them.  Team rocket, now scared, fire something at him, that stuns him a little, and they run off.  He snaps out of it, and sighs in relief that the attack is over.  The pokemon thank him, and to his surprise, he was able to understand them.  The Ledian gushes over the fact that they can talk to each other properly, however, now there is another problem.  The director notes that Team Rocket made off with all of their money during their flee, and without it, they cannot run the show anymore.  Protag looks at his arms once more, and gets an idea.

He tells the director that he'll take the show on the road, and with these strange arms he recently discovered, he'll challenge, fight, and win against all of the legendaries to bring in the ratings.  He invites the Ledian along, who happily hugs and agrees with him, thus starting the journey.  Of course, there will be more than just legendaries to fight off of.

Protag knows all about fighting type strength and weaknesses, but doesn't know any other typings that much.  Arms are based off of color change, where they must come in contact with an element to become that type.  If needed, he could punch his arms into the ground to have them collect Rock and/or ground typing and whatnot.

Ledian is a wild pokemon that acts as his "shield," using moves like Reflet, Light Screen, and Safeguard to protect him from some attacks.  As a backup move, can use Signal beam to fend off for herself, even if she isn't very powerful.  May also decide to try out Brick Break.
Ledian also harbors a crush on Protag, who is oblivious to it other than see her as her number 1 fan.  She encounters a Jirachi on occasions and wishes to be human for a short time to appeal to him, which works greatly (Ginjika).  Thus, protag has crush on that human form, but is too oblivious to know that it is Ledian...

Whiteney (yes, that gym leader) tags along throughout Johto and Kanto, but doesn't go any farther.  Acts as a character who knows the location of legendaries for protag to take down.  May occasionally flirt with protag, much to Ledian's dismay.

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A reverse nuzlocke taking place in Kanto Region.  MC has pokemon and decides to take the challenge.  Unlike other nuzlockes, his pokemon do not die, but are released on the spot when they are caught, though MC could swear to return to the spot they were released to catch up with them.  The pokemon he defeats, on the other hand, have a much more horrible fate.

As he goes collect badges, there will be mysterious reports of death that seems to follow MC's path, with him starting to notice something off by 5th gym match.

Turns out his presence slowly kills the pokemon that faints, including trainer pokemon.  Meanwhile MC is unaware that he's causing it, up until the bitter end.

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NON POKEMON STORIES START HERE

Magician's Quest: Returning to Times: A fanficiton/Webcomic from an underrated game (Magician's Quest: Mysterious Times)

It has been 3 years since Mothimas, the only human wizard at the Magician's academy, disappeared from the school of magic.  The principal, who decided that they wouldn't be accepting new human students in the academy until Mothimas is found, recently decide to create a service for veteran magician's, to help them suppress their power in order to keep up funds, and to help them get over their violent battles.  From there, a human magician, wearing a red robe with a spider donned onto the top of his masks appears in his office, applying to the Principal's new service.  The student is introduced as a human, to the other student's surprise.   He is silent, though, so rumors spread around suggesting that he is a freak.

Petal (Flower) doesn't believe it and befriends him anyway.  Liked Mothimas, but never told him about it before he disappeared.
Tina (Delinquent Wolf) insults him for his silence. Was in a relationship with Mothimas before he disappeared
TV-20C (TV robot) plays pranks on him. Was good friends with Mothimas before he disappeared
Zoe (Poodle) likes his clothes, and wants a sample of them. Had a small crush on Mothimas before his disappearance
Abigal (Pig) is scared of him.  She saw Mothimas as an Idol for heroism, even after he disappeared.
Eric (Cellphone) likes his mysterious ways. He was best friends with Mothimas before he disappeared.
James (Orange) wants to beat him up.
Barbara (Rose) is interested in him.
Delcy (Apple) likes him.  Mothimas had a crush on her before she moved away
Naomi (Bunny) has mixed thoughts.
Johnson (Chamelion) wants to study him, biology style.
Humprey (Falcon) likes the color of his eyes
Becky (Monkey) doesn't mind the silence, but is still acquaintances with him.
Petra (Doll) doesn't care.

Although he is attacked by a few people v.i.a pranks, he doesn't seem to mind.  Before a group could cast lightning on him, Captain Dot appears and is ready to attack them for their items.  The human magician intervenes, taking a direct sword slash that doesn't even cut his clothes, and return firing with a fireball.  He then quick steps behind and casts burning fire, sending him running away with his pants on fire.  He is victorious, but during the fight, Captain Dot remember the figure as Mothimas, as they both share the same spark from the first time he challenged him.  As he flees, he swears revenge, yelling out his name.  Much to Mothimas's dismay, the students just happen to be behind him, and they all learn that he is the same one that went missing those 3 years.  "This is going to suck..." is his first words since arriving.

Turns out that he disappeared to start his quest to become a hero, to follow his dream that he had when he was in academy.  Remember Luna Online/Luna Plus and the Blue Island.  When the land is finally in peace and service is no longer required (game actually shut down), he comes back as a level 120 necromancer and must find a way to control his magic outside of combat. See character sheet.  High physical defense, but mediocre magic defense.  Big HP.  Unable to dodge magic.  Warms up to people overtime.



Monster Girl Universe Ideas:

In a village lies the village coward, a young man who is easily scared by anything.  People love to scare him, and don't really take him seriously.  That same village also picks out a few heroes each year (identified either by a light from the heavens or chosen from those within the elites by other elites/nobles), who goes out to find and kill the Succubuss Queen, all of which fail and become Incubi themselves, or have a fate even worse than that.
Village Coward has obvious childhood tsundere friend.  She likes him, he thinks she hates him.  She plays the most pranks on him.

One night, an invasion is held by one (seven total, maybe reference to deadly sins) of the Succubus Queen's elites (called Delights), and the heroes chosen this year has already fallen.  So people panic.  Women are jailed to become succubi after the invasion is over and men are forced to have sex on the spot whenever they are caught.  Village Coward stealthily avoids a lot of the Succubi, but before he could get to the edge and escape, is discovered and brought to the Delight.  She then comments on him being honored to become her personal dildo, and as she reaches for his head, he screams and passes out.

He wakes up, feeling normal and fully clothed, but with sore arms and hands.  When he looks at himself though, he's covered in blood, and he's sitting on a bloodily beaten body of the Delight.  She weakly begs him to kill her, but he backs away and onto the floor, scared at the sight that beholds him.  As he looks around, he sees the other Succubi looking at him with fear in their eyes, then proceed to make a hasty retreat, taking the incapacitated elite, who is begging anyone to kill her and put her out of misery.  As they fled, a familiar light shines onto the coward...

Coward refuses the call, but is forced out the village to pursue the Delight and the Queen.  However, Coward is not questing to finish off queen; rather, he goes on a quest to find another hero to do that. With only his pet mantis at his side, he goes off into the world of Monster Girls.

However, a few steps outside and he discovers a Succubus, who admires his carnage of the night and wants him to beat her like that.  As such, he is now being followed by a masochistic Succubus, who tries to tempt him into slapping/spanking/pummeling her for gratification.

Tsundere girl follows him sometime later, worried that the succubus will do things to him.

Interestingly, no human or monster girl has ever seen the Succubus Queen in person, as either one or several of the Succubus Delights seem to take her place.

Characters:

Village Coward is a coward; scared of almost everything, especially succubus and monsters.  Somehow bloodily beats up a Succubus Delight, and is on a quest to find a hero to finish the job.
The only thing he isn't scared of, for some reason, is bugs.  As such, when the mantis he carried along his journey turned into a monster girl, he doesn't scream in fear of it; rather, he treats her like his best friend, much to the dismay of Tsundere girl.  Also doesn't overly panic towards other bug-like monster girls.
Turns out that Village Coward is able to manifest his fear into his fist to smash into someone.  The more fear he develops, the stronger the power.  Essentially, he beats his fear into someone else, identified by a shrieking sound (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RAcXAmLCtdg&feature=share&list=FL9CJVowyN_i861rCehjcMxg&index=26 skip to 5:20 for referece).
As a coward, he has no qualms about abandoning those that he is afraid of.
Eventually discovers that he inherits this power from his father, an alchemist who has learned to manifest emotion into the physical world.
Prior to the adventure, his pet mantis was his only true friend, even if it didn't talk or did friend things.

Masochistic Succubus girl saw how coward beat up the queen, and fapped quite vigorously to it.  She "fell in love with his carnage" and is actively trying to get him to spank her, beat her, and other kinky stuff.  Protag may or may not do those things to keep her in check in fear of getting raped by her.  Doesn't care about his fear of everything unless it gets in the way of her advances.
Overtime, she develops to be more loyal to coward than to the Succubus Queen or her Delights.

Mantis girl was created from his pet Mantis.  As the protag isn't afraid of bugs, Succubus thought of something to get past his fear by (somehow having sex) with said mantis.  She too, is loyal to coward for caring/feeding her as a nymph, and teaches him further stealth strategies to avoid being detected by other monster girl species, including masking scent, camoflauge construction, and other sneaky plans.  Falls in love with him.

Tsundere girl is cowards "childhood friend."  She likes him, but is mean to him.  When she discovers that a succubus is following him, she gives chase, in fear that she may take him away for good.  Attempts to confess to him, but confession falls flat to him, as he is too scared to believe it.  Realizing this, she tries to treat him better, but is too late when he abandons her with a group of feral succubi.
Will likely make a comeback, but not sure if it will be friend or foe.


jp's thoughts of this idea:

>I'm a tremendous asskicker who has succeeded where all trained and divinely blessed heroes have failed for decades if not centuries
>Even though I'm a total coward
>I beat the final boss before the story even really begins
There's some novel stuff in there but most is relies too much on gap moe and trying to be wacky. Plus I always have a bone to pick with people who just have everything fall into their lap.
You'll probably pick up some readers if you do it well, just not me. Not my kind of story.

>promising start
>alright MC
>Sort of nice power
>Mantis best friend
>haremshit
Ehh, I might pick up the first chapter or so to test the water

I already hate the MC and want him to die. Sounds pretty generic so far, ie some average or below average guy who is actually really special and can't be hurt by anything, would have been nice like 20 years ago before it was in everything. Childhood friend sounds more like the shitty modern day tsundere that beats the shit out of MC within an inch of his life but then says she loves him so I already hate her. Story line sounds kind of generic in that there's a bunch of heros that go up against the main villain, who were literally chosen by the gods, yet all of them fail but somehow this little faggot, whos father just so happened to be an amazing guy yet nobody knows him, is able to do what probably hundreds of 100 times his strength couldn't. All in all I'd say no, think up a completely different idea because this one is played out as fuck and already makes me hate several of the characters.

You're combining generic shounen bullshit with sex/haremshit.
Think hard on this.

I'd read it. Only one complaint, tsun a shit.

Right off the bat, this sounds like MGQ 2.0.
Your coward MC sounds way too much like a Mary-sue. If you wanna balance that out, don't make him too much of a chickenshit coward, and heavily tone down any super-power usage in the beginning. The character has to grow, and that can't happen with what you got right now.
The "Warriors Chosen By God" thing sounds stupid and only reinforces the MGQ 2 feel. Why not make it more grounded? Warriors could be chosen by something fallible, like a political leader.
On that note, don't have every single fucking hero that's been sent out fail. If this has been happening for centuries, there should be gains and losses on both sides.
For the Succubus Queen? Don't have the MC encounter her til the end, if at all. If you want him to fight something before escaping the village, have him encounter a mid-ranked succubus, like a Commander for the Queen or something similar.
Drop the harem shit. It's too prevalent and it gets boring quick. Love triangles aren't bad though, but there needs to be a single winner in the end.
All in all, if you want to write this thing? Tone everything the fuck down. Your characters would benefit greatly and become a bit more well-rounded and relateable, instead of being a troop of walking cliches and and rigid personality types.

How does one avoid creating a haremshit fic in monster girl verse where there are horny devils and females everywhere?
MGs put demon energy into a guy when they take spirit energy out. Demon energy marks you as "owned" and starts to incubize you. The rest is just society/law. It's super-taboo to steal another's husbandu, according to KC.
This one is the official KC explanation. Demonic energy in a guy is like a wedding ring. It lets everyone know you're taken. Technically nothing is "forcing" a girl not to try and steal you anyways, other than the huge societal taboo (and one would assume punishment or laws, but it's not clarified).

I think there are several ideas you could use in that type of universe.
1) When the MG claims you, you get her scent on you and keeps other MGs away.
2) special rings like the ones issued in the MGC canon that let people know you have a mate.
3) most MGs don't like sharing, so if you are in a harem route, it was your own damn fault.
I would like to think that MGs would try their hardest to attract you, but once you have made up your mind they sort of start leaving you alone.
I am not sure if that helped

You're marked by the energy signature of your monster waifu, making you less appealing to most other monsters. Harems can still happen but they almost always need to be a childhood friend deal or for the man to take the initiative.
Bicorns are natural harem makers so avoid those. Beelzebubs like the taste of "tainted" men and will either entice other monsters to have their way with her husband or make advances or claimed men. Be careful if you intend to feature those two.
Lamias, dragons and oomukade are all highly possessive creatures. Cases like the echidna from Fallen Maidens are very rare.

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Alternate Monster Girl Idea
"Studies have shown that if you desensitize your captive wasps to your fingers and hands from an early stage, they will become used to you and not react in an aggressive manor. And, when workers come, the queen's body language around you will influence the workers' behavior too."

A college student (modern time) is performing an experiment with this quote for his senior project in biology.  He is a loyal volunteer at a nature center, where the owner grants him permission to use some of the new wasp/bee/hornets nests they have to try it out, just so as long as they don't have to pay for any accidents that he might get into.

A few days ago he locked himself away for intensive studying for a midterm exam (60 fucking percent of the grade why) and he removed himself from technology and the outside during that time.  Guess he prefers the traditional way of studying: cram.

When he finally resurfaces and goes to the nature center in his car, someone jumps onto his path and he accidently hits it.  He goes out to apologize and sees a Mosquito girl getting up from the ground and slapping him for interrupting her flight.  She then flies away.  MC does a spit take, thinking that all that craming has him seeing things.

Of course the first thing he sees when he comes out is a stinger to his neck...

Without spoiling too much, I thought of having monstergirls appearing based on the evolution chain (for simplicity, plants -> insects -> reptiles/fish -> mammals) throughout the length of the story. The student would have to deal with trying to protect his project from failure due to mortality outside of natural causes. Well, that's only one of a couple of problems, and thats not even the biggest one...




Madoka Magika OC needz
Two twincestrous (one-sided) peeps get involved with becoming a magical girl/boy.  One would transform into a cannon, that the latter would equip and use to blast away foes.  The other transforms into a shield to protect others if necessary.

Soul Jems are based off of yin and yang symbols (may switch into fertility symbol)

Background History
...gotta think up of something




Touhou thingz to satisfy my old want of a harem-comedy - might be gary stuish, gotta fix:
On earth year 2124, a teen (last name is Kandorv), serving in the army, is walking on a destroyed path, coming back from his failed mission of saving the human race.  In 4 years, one monster (Cabel, humanoidish eldric abomination) has summoned up an army and wiped out humankind.  Although he fought to save people, it was all for naught, and they all died.  Unable to handle his failure, he walks out and falls to the ground and submits (eyes closed), awaiting for the horde of monsters to finish him off.

As he waits, he falls asleep, and then he wakes up, finds himself in a grassy field.

He looks around and enters a forest, where Marisa Crashes-into-hello towards the MC.  Curious, she walks with him and explains that the land he is in is called Gensokyo.  Have encounter with angry Yuuka, who misfires laser and seems to hit MC.  Mc actually dodges and is at higher ground, now sporting a rather blue, metallic suit of armor.  He retributes by firing energy blasts back at her along with his own laser, which fends off Yuuka for now.

Marisa is impressed.
With the knowledge that this land is yet to be even reached by Cabel, he is determined that the human race is saved...

...until he finds his way to the town, filled with women only.  Someone explains that a certain "border-controlling" youkai has taken all of the men from the land to satisfy her lust, leaving him as the only male human left in the entire land.  He now also has to go on a quest to find another male human to help save and repopulate Earth to its former glory, hoping to not break his vow of no sex.

Background history

In 2124, many supernatural beings have revealed themselves to be real, but thanks to negotations, live peacefully with humans.
Ex: Vampires/youkai get blood-payments for blood donors, various alternative food sources outside of human eating, etc.
Therefore, MC isn't surprised that youkai exists, but rather that they take the form of females.

And then he came and killed everyone to collect their souls for energy, Cabel.

With a special sawed off shotgun as his main weapon along with his pitchfork, he kills people and summons an army to help him kill faster for souls.
Army gives MC last mission, save the human race

During Cabel invasion, many human lives were lost due to humans falling into their desires.  MC was almost attacked by female woman who feared the end of humanity, wanting to mate with him to save it, but ends up being her death wish as she is lured into a trap, killing her along with other people.  MC vows no sex after that (virgin).

Characters to be involved

MC - A teenager with yellow eyes and white/gray hair.  When he was 6 years old, he gave himself to the military to save his parents from execution for crossing into military territory.  Hasn't seen them since.  Approaching 7, he was looking through old military weapons and gears and came across a blue orb that when touched, manifested into a blue suit of armor (will provide link for appearance).  military personal freak out, but are interested, as other soldiers that put on said armor had their skin burned inside out, yet MC shows no side effect.  Traveled in U.S. and Japan, and is thus influenced by both cultures.

MC's Suit runs using plasma energy.  Balance mode can fire plasma shots, missiles, lasers, and beams with two arm cannons (balance generally uses one, two would make him stop moving).  Can also form beam swords/whips for necessary melee combat, or smack foes with arm cannon, making a satisfying PANG sound.  Has jets on feet, used for flying, boosting, and for performing powerful jet-kicks.  Has two concealed jets in back part of suit for even more boosting speed.  May occasionally fire a beam through his helmet.  Can block/shrug off some attacks on physical/magic side, but cannot take consecutive damage.

Plasma Suit comes in 3 modes: Offense (Purple), Balance (Blue), and Defensive (Red).

Defensive suit can tank a lot of damage and burst back weaponfire based on absorbed damage.  Can project a plasma shield to protect allies.  However, when not absorbing damage, it does minimal damage, limited to only plasma blasts and arm cannon melees.  Only extremely powerful attacks can break its defense.

Offensive Suit grants massive dakka potential by firing all weapons at once (missiles, blasts, lasers) and being highly agile.  Beam Swords become lances for drilling into enemies.  However, this makes plasma skin extremely vulnerable to damage.  Even one bullet from a small fairy is enough to likely destroy the armor.

Signs of excessive damage are sparks, leaks of yellow plasma, or even missing plates of armor.  If suit takes enough damage, it will force MC into a ground, where it will then explode and shatter the armor into pieces.  It will take 30 minutes-1 hour to re-equip the armor.  When not using a suit, MC is agile and can use CQC learned from military training to fight some foes and stall for time.

Suit is extremely frail to lightning, regardless of mode.  When shocked, MC stays there, frozen and in shock for 3 seconds.  If shocked for over 15 seconds, the suit goes into overdrive, making the MC yell out and his armor explode, launching him in the air.  Has a good chance at knocking him out, too.

Note that the MC eventually gets the ability to push the summoning object into his chest, allowing him full control as to when to change into armor suit.  Even when not equipped, the suit has provided passive benefits to the MC, such as ignoring and/or deflecting certain abilities of youkai back at them when inactive.  It also provided health benefits at the cost of slowing his aging process, essentially doubling his lifespan (although he is 15, his mind is technically 24 years old).

Behavior-wise, MC is cautious in new areas, but is friendly once he gets used to it.  Hates betrayal, invokes wrath.
Plan on MC falling for either Nitori and/or Patchouli.  Marisa is another option, but she openly invades his personal space to flirt with him.