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R*Novice Review: _____Logic_____

Jul 4th, 2015
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  1. Novice Review:
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  3. Your plot still needs a bit of work before it can rank up,
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  5. The terrain is okay, and i like the variation of blocks that youve used, like Dutty said. It might be good to add more levels to it, but for now youre fine.
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  7. The middle tower looks good, and has a decent amount of detail. However, the smaller houses on the sides are a bit awkward. Easy with the slabs on the roof. Unless theyre used for detail, it might be better just to not have them there x3
  8. Try putting more layers in your houses as well, to create a sense of depth and deepness to the build.
  9. With detailing, try to use something other than anvils and glass. Its not much of detailing, more as filling the empty space. So really work your best on that!
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  11. Your dead trees are cool, but theyre all generally the same size and shape. Try to give them more variation and mix them up a bit. Also, having nether brick in the trees, as well as having it in the terrain looks a little off, so work on that as well :)
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  13. Hope this helps!
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