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- Hello! Im TheScottie and i will be reviewing you!
- The review is split into three parts, Structure, Organics and Terrain.
- Structure. So your houses are very nice, I think you should add one or two more though and closer to make it feel more like a Village or Town. Using this image I suggest adding some small Stalls as well as shown http://gyazo.com/c00be8778e70e3613bb11affc5e1fcb0
- This just adds a better atmosphere to the build and makes it more realistic. Now The Bigger Structure. It is very cut off, Possibly making a nice winding path from the village to the gates would add a nice touch of realism to it. http://gyazo.com/6d34cae68fbd72ef5dc98fee9bd9f603 Now in this section here. I really want to see you adding some sort of castle structure instead of just a blank space. I love the walls, but you need some sort of real structure behind it like a big castle.
- Terrain. SO the terrain is not very good. The top where the castle walls are is completely flat, It needs Some sort of Height variation to make it passable. I would also really suggest re trying you Pallet, The Contrasts do not mix well at all. I really think you should go with a more Green pallet, Not using Obsidian or Mycelium. Those colors do not work well for a decent grass pallet and overall lower the look of the plot alot.
- Organics. Going back to the pallet, the trees are way to lively to be in such a dead pallet of grass, that is another reason to making the grass pallet more alive. I'd also like to see some more trees, Searching https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCLUKySjsOfU9jcjYyFJWk2A
- and watching his tutorial on how to make nice trees is a good idea. His Tutorials are very straight forward and easy to understand. Also maybe adding some sort of birds or something to add a more organic touch as well.
- MainPoints.
- Changing the Grass Pallet
- Adding More Height Variety to the terrain
- Adding a large castle structure behind the walls.
- Adding more Houses and other small structures.
- Making the trees better
- Adding some more variety of organics.
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