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Rizon chat log. For AF~

Feb 3rd, 2014
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  1. <lyrafag> Like I've said before, the whole story up until now was both A) written post-by-post without any prior thought, and B) fueled by all my teenage angsty bullshit over the past few weeks.
  2. <lyrafag> I'm trying to pre-write most of it now, to go back and edit several times and ensure that it's of a higher quality than it was.
  3. <lyrafag> If I were to post right now, it would take 34 separate replies to the thread.
  4. <Trixiefag> holy shit
  5. <applefag> prewriting is the devil's workshop
  6. <lyrafag> ^
  7. <Obzedat> Nigga' damn.
  8. <lyrafag> I'm figuring that out as i go, af.
  9. <applefag> if you're not writing by the seat of your pants you're not living
  10. <ImSleepy_Lap> Screw it... Going to sleep. ralk to you guys later. Highlight all the good stuff from the irc for me, okay?
  11. <applefag> novels are for people with a purpose, am i right or am i right?
  12. <Obzedat> Alright Sleeps. Sleep tight nigger.
  13. <lyrafag> It's lost all of the "magic" that it had once before (by, Sleepy!); it's all coming out as a chore rather than as something fun now.
  14. <applefag> night, sleeps
  15. <lyrafag> And it's REALLY fucking bad.
  16. <applefag> so then end it and write something new, lf
  17. <Trixiefag> bye sleeps
  18. <applefag> that or kill your entire queue and start over
  19. <lyrafag> I'm thinking that's what i'm to do, AF.
  20. <Trixiefag> The end it or the start over?
  21. <lyrafag> But then I feel shitty, because this is probably 20+ hours worth of writing.
  22. <applefag> lf, if you can't let go of something you don't like, then something's up
  23. <Nope> Dude
  24. <Obzedat> Don't let it be a chore LF, above all do it for your own personal enjoyment.
  25. <Nope> If you have 20+ hrs of writing done
  26. <lyrafag> Well, I don't dislike the story itself; LSauce is one of the best things I've written.
  27. <Nope> But DON'T like it...
  28. <fronkthegronk> If you don't like doing it, drop it.
  29. <fronkthegronk> Maybe come back later.
  30. <Nope> and you want to restart...
  31. <applefag> everybody has false starts and regrets
  32. <lyrafag> The first half, especially the second half of the first half, was pretty good (in my own opinion).
  33. <Nope> at LEAST pastebin it for us fags.
  34. <lyrafag> And I would really like to just keep that ball right on rolling.
  35. <applefag> throw up what you have in a paste, and then start with a clean page
  36. <lyrafag> Aw, hell naw.
  37. <Trixiefag> You could always split up what you've written to the end of where you liked it, and just start over from where you thought the quality began to decline
  38. <applefag> then you can choose from there whether you're done with lf for a while or forever or not
  39. <Nope> plox
  40. <lyrafag> Nobody's seeing the new shit.
  41. <Nope> PLOX
  42. <lyrafag> it's REALLY bad.
  43. <lyrafag> It's just me rambling a lot.
  44. <applefag> err, done with lyrasauce
  45. <Nope> I DGAF
  46. <Nope> GIMME
  47. <applefag> then kill it, just don't let its presence bring you down
  48. <lyrafag> It's all correct and shit, but I refuse to stain the name of something worthwhile with that shiiiiit.
  49. <lyrafag> >delete
  50. <lyrafag> Sorry, nope.
  51. <Nope> D:
  52. <Nope> YPU
  53. <Nope> WHAT AHVY YOU DONE
  54. <lyrafag> I'm going to give it a "carpe-diem" attitude and just keep it going as I was before.
  55. <Nope> Oh well
  56. <Trixiefag> Good on you LF. It's never good when you write and it's not something you enjoy
  57. <Nope> whatever floats ur boat man
  58. <lyrafag> Because I want to continue the story for sure... But not like that. :<
  59. <Nope> okey
  60. <Nope> but..
  61. <TheRealDubsman> Do it, LF.
  62. <Nehem> know the feel
  63. <lyrafag> In which case?
  64. <Trixiefag> We'll be right here if you need any help with it, as well.
  65. <lyrafag> LET'S FUCKING WRITE SOME SHIT
  66. <Nope> could you at least tell us what happened?
  67. <Nehem> what tf said
  68. * Obzedat_ (qwebirc@Rizon-B0D4A774.socal.res.rr.com) has joined
  69. <Trixiefag> LES DO IIIT
  70. <Nope> LEROOOOOOOOOOOOOY
  71. <Trixiefag> >inb4 bulk biceps
  72. <Obzedat_> Rizon.
  73. <Nope> JEEEEEEEEEEEEEEENKINS
  74. <Nope> To soon?
  75. <Nope> Sorry
  76. <Nope> ;|
  77. <Trixiefag> >too soon
  78. <Trixiefag> >meme from 2005
  79. <lyrafag> Nope, I will share what happened.
  80. <Obzedat_> LF. Use the work you have done as a basis, then start from the point you wanted to continue from and start having fun with the writing.
  81. <TheRealDubsman> BULKMANIA
  82. <Nope> *GASP*
  83. <Nope> *SQUEE*
  84. <Nope> X3
  85. <fronkthegronk> :B
  86. <Obzedat_> If it becomes a chore, step back. You should be finding enjoyment by doing your story instead of frustration.
  87. * Obzedat has quit (Ping timeout: 240 seconds)
  88. * trebortaergeht has quit (Killed (NickServ (GHOST command used by trebortest)))
  89. <lyrafag> Long story short, Lyra cried with Anon for a long time; Anon got in trouble at work, and had to go hardcore parkour with his job to keep making money.
  90. * trebortest (~trebortes@B99D8B8:28115E7E:CE0DF4D2:IP) has joined
  91. <Obzedat_> Well then.
  92. <Nope> ..and that was like 30 posts worth?
  93. <lyrafag> Lyra had quickly grown dependent on him (I forget the name for when this happens IRL),
  94. <applefag> wait for him to finish nope, jesus
  95. <Nope> Stockholm Syndrome?
  96. <lyrafag> and suffered from hardcore seperation anxiety throughout which progressively got worse and worse.
  97. <lyrafag> Not Stockholm, but some kinda syndrome.
  98. <Nope> >Isee
  99. <lyrafag> The thing Anon grabbed from the pawn shop was a handheld harp, much like the one on her cutie mark (you can tell where that's going).
  100. <trebortest> http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dependent_personality_disorder
  101. <lyrafag> He starts building her up with (thanks, trebor) music, helping her to become more independent as she gets better and better at all sorts of human-world instruments.
  102. <Nope> Yes, that sounds like it.
  103. <lyrafag> That all culminates in something badass that I won't reveal (yet). ;p
  104. <lyrafag> BUT
  105. <lyrafag> that's all going on while the edgy plot thickens.
  106. <Nope> >Blades
  107. <lyrafag> Anon goes back to the pawn shop to continue his investigation of the murder of the neckbeard.
  108. <Nope> >Tfw you immediately think of your katana
  109. <Nope> >that you named Octave
  110. <Nope> ._.
  111. <lyrafag> Anon discovers something that matches up canonically with the other stories thus far, essentially being that the OP's organization is..
  112. <applefag> microsoft was behind it all
  113. <lyrafag> Well, I guess I'm not going to pursue this after all, so I'll tell you.
  114. <applefag> who woulda guessed!
  115. <Trixiefag> >inb4 hasbro
  116. <fronkthegronk> HASBROOOOOOOOOOO
  117. <applefag> bill gates is op, and has infinite money to throw at an interdimensional portal
  118. <applefag> it all checks out
  119. <lyrafag> It turns out that the OP was backed by some type of demonic figure, arguably Satan or some shit like that; the deals made were deals with the Devil.
  120. <Trixiefag> I thought souls had to be involved when he did stuff like that?
  121. <lyrafag> Exactly, TF.
  122. <Nope> I
  123. <Nope> KNEW
  124. <Nope> IT
  125. <Nope> remember back, way way back
  126. <lyrafag> The person's soul, when the deal is made, is split from their body.
  127. <lyrafag> Torn into two peices.
  128. <lyrafag> One stays in the anon..
  129. <Obzedat_> Crossroads Demon.
  130. <lyrafag> And the other becomes the pony whom he's receieved.
  131. <lyrafag> *recieved.
  132. <lyrafag> *RECEIVED.
  133. <Obzedat_> Interesting idea.
  134. <Trixiefag> interesting, and well-thought out, but I wouldn't adopt as headcanon
  135. <Trixiefag> Go on
  136. <applefag> does anon die if the pony dies
  137. <Nehem> Hm, nice
  138. <applefag> because that would've fucked lyra up
  139. <lyrafag> The reason the pony forcibly falls in love is because it's really just yourself, reflecting both our vanity as humans as well as the desire of the soul to remain close to itself.
  140. <lyrafag> It explains why AJ didn't remember the old episode-- Anon hadn't seen it yet when the deal was made.
  141. <applefag> >using applesack as applefacts
  142. <Trixiefag> well, that's where my story would fall out of the canon part of the theory
  143. <applefag> top lel
  144. <lyrafag> It would explain how, thus far, every pony has managed to sympathize with the OP's situation when they've found out about the deal.
  145. <lyrafag> *the Anon's situation.
  146. <applefag> >implying
  147. <Obzedat_> It is very well thought out LF.
  148. <applefag> aj hasn't been told about the thread yet you know
  149. <lyrafag> Because you've justified yourself to yourself, and the pony is just a part of yourself.
  150. <Obzedat_> I was just going to go with the idea of the pones being from alternate timelines.
  151. <TheRealDubsman> Luna doesn't even know about My Little Pony yet. Lawl.
  152. <lyrafag> But Lyra had been, Chrysalis had been, and Fancy had been.
  153. <Nope> So... when Anon becomes depressed with himself, the pony becomes depressed with themselves, too? AND towards Anon?
  154. <lyrafag> not necessarily.
  155. <Nope> okey
  156. <Trixiefag> >tfw your story is completely out of the loop because of the way you started
  157. <lyrafag> They ARE two different entities, but closely linked;
  158. <Nope> Also, Dubs?
  159. <lyrafag> if one would see the logic of a situation, so would the other.
  160. <TheRealDubsman> Mmmm
  161. <treborphone> non of you realize it yet, but all of your stories areactually happening in another universe. i am projecting them into your minds. unfortunatly, the process slowly causes brain damage. thats why all of you keep getting writers block
  162. <Nope> Cliffhangers kill me>
  163. <Trixiefag> FUCKIN' TREBOR
  164. <Trixiefag> THOSE BLOCKS HURT
  165. <TheRealDubsman> Good.
  166. applefag_ (~brick@453A9F8:716DD1A6:15167B35:IP) has joined
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