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  1. Player Book:
  2. Chapter 2 Skills: Weird Spacing in general. Sometimes there are whole lines after subfields, other times the spacing between varies with font. Intentional?
  3. -pg15-16-Spacing between paragraphs changes under the subfields.
  4. -pg19- Why does the text under Sway become so small towards the end? Under sports, sprint has an extra space before it, which is a little awkward.
  5. -pg20- Another odd space after Decieve and Persona.
  6. -pg26- Nonproficiency Risk for Medic is spaced one line away from the others.
  7. Chapter 3 Tumbling Down:
  8. -pg38-Granduer's Rank 4 is not adjusted with the rest of the text.
  9. Chapter 6 Character Creation:
  10. -pg80-Step 5: Evangelions no longer have a total of 2500 XP to offer. (The new average is somewhere around 520).
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  13. GM Book
  14. -pg12- Evangelion typeZero --> Evangelion Type Zero?
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  17. General: Should we put a note in the Player's Guide that there's no OD in this Beta? How about a general set of guidleines for what we hope to recieve in terms of feedback? Better to include it in the document than just the release methinks.
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