Mod:
Timing: Change offset to 30473

Map:
00:30:473 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Start here with some one-and-a-half beat sliders instead. This will give the player some sense of rhythm and help build intensity.

00:34:262 (7) - New combo. If you're going to start mapping to half beats afterwards, make this a half beat slider. Not doing so makes the rhythm really weird to play.

00:35:525 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,1,2) - Would highly recommend doing half beat sliders here instead, having whole beat sliders here takes a lot from the flow. Add new combos.

00:44:209 (11) - Example of how half beat sliders play much better here.

00:43:104 (6) - Change to half beat slider. (In the blank spaces left by changing slider lengths, add circles, this will change the spacing of your notes, though.)

00:50:367 (12) - Delete this. Leaving a pause here is okay. (People with low HP will get FUCKED but that's the melody you wanted to map to)

01:02:367 (2) - Delete.

01:02:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Replace this section by mapping to full beats instead, starting at the first note in this section. That is, assuming it's the barks you're mapping to.

01:07:736 (3) - Make this slider a full beat in length.

01:08:209 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3) - Follow the previous rhythm for the rest of the section.

01:12:473 (2,3,4) - Yeah, like what you did here.

02:20:525 (1,2,3,4) - Remove first note.

02:21:867 (12) - Remove.

02:52:183 (7,8,9,1,2,3) - This should just be singles.

02:54:157 (3) - Move 1 tick earlier.

02:54:709 (4) - Make this two beats long, with a reverse arrow. That is, make a one beat long slider, then just add a reverse arrow.

03:10:104 (5,6) - Move both one tick later.

03:15:473 (5) - Make one tick longer.

03:33:157 (11,12,13) - Not focusing on aesthetics in this mod, but make this line up better.

04:01:262 (14) - Don't have it spiral like that, just make it longer some other direction.

04:16:894 (2,3,4) - Remove.

04:17:367 (5) - Since this doesn't want to fit on the screen and is a softer part of the song, you might want to reduce the SV here.

04:28:104 (4,5) - Make these more arc shaped.

04:31:894 (13) - Like this.

04:33:157 (14) - Make this arc shaped too. Could be a big straight line too, if you want.

04:38:051 (4) - This needs an extra half beat in between the second note of it and the last, so use slider - circle - slider like you did right before it. Also, it this slider should be one tick shorter.

04:42:157 (5) - Remove.

04:47:999 (17) - There's temporal space between this note and the last, so there should be spacial... space too.

04:48:788 (2) - Isn't there a little something... missing after this note?

04:49:420 (3) - After completing the previous combo, start a new one here.

04:50:209 (6) - Remove.

04:50:841 (8) - Uhhh... better shaped slider please? Reverse arrow slider for 4 beats.

04:53:288 (12) - Move one tick earlier.

04:53:367 (12) - Don't reversr arrow and add two beats afterwards instead.

04:57:157 (1,2,3) - This.

04:58:420 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^ Use this pattern for this instead.

05:01:499 (12) - New combo.

05:03:630 (19) - Remove.