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- Hey there! :3
- I would give you a full plot review, but honestly all three sections (terrain, organics and structure) need major work. Firstly, you have no terrain; you kept it all flat grass. Secondly, you spawned a bunch of trees - we only accept hand built! And lastly, you built a giant cake - we don't accept 3D 'pixelart' like this - referring to builds of in game animals/food 2d/3d version. We accept organics of animals, but they have to show really good organic skills.
- You also had no structure on this plot; a building/bridge/structure of some kind needs to be here, especially if you lack in the other departments.
- Good luck!
- - Dutty :3
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