Harvest December proposed changes
Chapter 11
121:2 And only I will remain by your side.
That's the price of a life.
121:-2 Joined bubble -> Just for the moment, / it'll be fine if you compensate for what I lack.
Next bubble -> ...what you lack?
122:2 bubble -> Then I will make ya into a god of the mountain, immortal like I am.
123:2 A god in human form must be killed / before it loses power.
Next bubble -> On the verge of death, this remaining power will transfer to the new god.
Next bubble -> This power and dominion will be yers, Masaki.
124:2 grant the harvest -> yield the harvest
129:2 First bubble -> Ya will be killed.
129:3 A life given like that is worthless!
130:1, 2 change -> change him [check please]
130:3 worthless -> momentary
131:-1 bubble -> You're choosing something you hate so much.
132:2 joined bubble -> You understand / what power and time are worth. / And you value neither, Masaki. [this is what the VN script says, but we should stick to the manga so feel free to deny these changes]
133:2 bow down -> give in
134:1 you can change -> that can be changed
134:-1 [the VN would be "will be the god to steal you away!"]
Chapter 12
142:-1 she stole me... -> hmm this is tricky
We have: Yuki stole him from Shiro with the intensity of her will, which Shiro wished to kill. Her will denied shiro, and deny (or wish to kill) Shiro for stealing Masaki away and trying to change him. Does this help with the translation of the line?