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Aug 4th, 2015
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  1. Hi, _SolarHeat_
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  3. Your plot isn't quite ready for a rank, so here is your review!
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  5. - Terrain - What is Terrain? Terrain is anything from hills, mountains, cliffs, and ravines. There are many more examples of terrain as well! - Your plot has terrain, but could use some more. There are some larger areas of just grass and flowers, that could have larger hills/mountains in its place.
  6. - Structure - What is Structure? Structure is the buildings on a plot from towers, to houses, to market stalls! - Structure is present on the plot, but needs work. There is no depth. Depth is multiple layers in the structure (mostly the walls). To add depth use blocks like stairs, slabs, fence, trapdoors, buttons, etc. The roof of your structure is very strange as well, I'd suggest you create a more normal looking roof, that fits more with the structure, and is less awkward.
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  8. Good Luck,
  9. Lena
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