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- Homura's Revenge #6 [Proofread]
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- Line 56: Besides, didn't Mami use to look after you too?
- Line 66: Whatever, we're both after that black-haired girl, anyhow. (Both with and without the comma before "anyhow" would work, I think.)
- Line 79: I don't want to team up with anybody either.. (Unless "nobody" was intentionally bad grammar)
- Line 86: Erm... Kyouko, right?
- Line 98: Honestly... I don't get her at all.
- Line 224: But isn't fighting two-on-one unfair?
- Line 228: Hey, you took the whole box! You're supposed to take only one!!
- Line 245: Them teaming up was outside of my expectations...
- Line 246: Sakura Kyouko... whom last time I assumed was Miki Sayaka's rival, tried to save her instead...
- Line 251: What if them teaming up was Kyubey's plan...
- Line 274: Did something happen to Miki-san...
- Line 324: So if she shuts out the pain, isn't she nearly invincible?
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