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R*Novice Review: Gold_

Jun 28th, 2015
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  1. Novice Review:
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  3. Great plot so far, but theres some stuff i want you to work on before you can rank up!
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  5. Your terrain is good and i like how its supported by pillars. The sandy bit at the bottom could use a little work but thats an easy fix! I also like the details on the terrain in form of the vines.
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  7. There should definitely be more organics in the plot as well. The seaweed in the water is a cool idea, but it seems very similar to a plot next to yours :p so try and be unique with your organics.
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  9. Last thing is depth and detailing in your structure. Its a good start but it needs more to it. Try adding something above it to make it less flat and uniform. Additionally, there needs to be more depth and detail to your structure. You seem to know what youre doing so i wont bother explaining it, but still i do need to mention it x3
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  11. Other than that, good luck!
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