So how do I rewrite this then?

if ncftp -u"$FTPU" -p"$FTPP" $FTPS<<EOF
mkdir $FTPD
mkdir $FTPD/$NOW
cd $FTPD/$NOW
lcd $BACKUP
mput *
quit
EOF

### Find out if ftp backup failed or not ###
; then
 rm -f $BACKUP/*
else