The Carnival of Doom

The air was still, anticipating the carnival opening, it was just one minute left, everyone rushed inside. There was lots of things, a Ferris wheel, a circus, tons of rides! There was so much to do, I decided to start off with the Cloud Cart, it was a very boring ride, but suddenly the ride went off course, taking me into a cave.. Quickly I tried to jump off, but a cage surrounded the cart. I shouted at the man who was incharge of the ride, but he couldn't hear. With relief it started reversing, taking me back to the start of the ride to get off, I was suspicious, but thought it was just a mistake..
  I decided, after a good twenty-five minutes of thinking to try out another ride, the "haunted" house, open entering it seemed not scary, in the very slightest. Then the lights started going on and off. I could see a shredder faintly moving to me. Then a man was lying, nearly dead saying in a weak voice, "Turn..back..you won't make it..." thinking it was all part of the ride, I continued on - going through a dark tunnel now. The ride stopped, and launched me out, I was in the circus.
  "Argh... Where am I?" a mysterious man walked up to me.
"Why are you here?" He said, with a subtle angriness to his tone.
"I-I just wanted to go to the carnival.
"Well," he said with a sly, evil looking smile, "The show is just about to begin." 257
A clown started doing amazing tricks, backflips, juggling and more. Then a tightrope walker began walking with throwing knifes in his hand, I grew slightly more weary. Then he threw one at the wall, breaking it down, and damaging the cart tracks of the behind rides, could that be the cause? The show continued, the mysterious man  told me to throw a pie, I didn't want to, but I did. The tightrope walker got angry, and threw a knife next to me, knowing it wouldn't hit - like a warning shot.
"You best not do that again," he said grimly.
I nodded my head slightly, then a clown came out from the curtain - he didn't look so friendly, he had sharp nails, a very creepy face and had a creepy stare. Was this really the fabulous fair everyone was talking about?
"Release the Tiger" the mysterious man shouted.
It jumped out the cage, angrily and attempted to take the tightrope walker off the rope, but couldn't reach.
I wanted to run for it about now, but the door had three chains and a code to open it up.
The mysterious man said, "The show will end shortly, enjoy it while you can" he said, in a quiet voice, "Release the Lion" he shouted even louder, but instead it just proceeded to have  a nap.
"That's it, I gotta get out of here, before it's too late.." I thought.
I ran for the hole in the wall made by the dagger, and sprinted out It at full speed, then ran to the Ferris wheel and ducked down, out of sight.
"Phew," I sighed, "They'll never find me here"
There was an amazing view, you could see the magnificent navy sea, the dazzling islands with boats going in and out, the men climbing up the Ferris wheel to get me...
"Wait what? They're coming to get me" I whispered, so they couldn't hear me. "Check every cart" the mysterious man ordered.
I could tell they would find me, I dashed onto the most terrifying ride in the whole place - the wrist breaker, but I just couldn't lose them, and now that I went on the ride - I think it might literally be 'The Wrist Breaker'. It rose up, and up, higher than the Ferris wheel. Then it stopped, sideways. Then suddenly it zoomed straight down - it almost made me sick! -
  I didn't know what to do, but it was so obvious - just go out of the carnival. An alarm went off saying, "Non-Payer, Non-Payer" over and over, but I just left £30 on the desk on the way out, hoping it'd go off. They didn't dare follow me out. On the sign for the amusement park it stated "Fastastique Carnivale CLOSED". I was so silly, I didn't even read the sign.. It was just an abandoned carnival.
I decided after all the excitement I'd try it out, and went on a ride to calm me down. It was fantastic, but it was closed, so I didn't have enough time to go on much. The next day the "Fantastique Carnivale" was blocked off with boulders, it seemed mysterious, yet I'd been inside it - and never to go back again.
-The Carnival Of Doom, by Jack1605.