tama: Yes.
You too, papa, take care so you don't catch a summer cold.
Thanks for calling even though you're busy.
grandma: You'll miss your train if you don't leave soon.
*tama: Oh, no!																							*
mom: Here's your lunch.
I packed a lot of kinpira-style burdock.
tama: Thanks! Well then papa, I'm hanging up.
Yes! I love you, papa!
See you later!

sign: Precision machinery.
tama: It's July, so I'm wearing my summer uniform.
I could talk to my dad before leaving,
my lunch has lots of kinpira burdock in it,
_the train's horoscope said I'm very lucky today,							(do trains have their own horoscopes? Or is she just talking about a horoscope she read on the train?)
and the sun feels good, too.
teru: Good morning, Tamatama-chan!
tama: Good morning!
tama: Eh? Why are you here?
Why did I high-five you so naturally?
teru: Ah, I'm so glad you remember me!
tama: Erm, Teru-san, was it?																			(added honorific)
teru: Correct! How's everyone in your club?
tama: Club?
teru: Dead fish eyes - Sunlight deficit - Shuttle run club.
I said it in one breath!
I did it, Shiina!
_shii: This club was the previous president, Teru-senpai's, idea.										(grammar check)
tama: Ah, I see! Teru-senpai is Teru-san!										(added honorific, changed order to match how it's spoken)
teru: Oh? I didn't tell you?
tama: They did say you were in college...
*teru: Your summer uniform looked so fresh that I turned into school-uniform Teru-san again.		(added honorific)*
I played that game the SNS club just released, Tamatama-kun.
tama: Eh, really?
If I look back at the pictures I drew, there are many parts that I feel embarrassed about.			(grammar check)
This friend of mine, Haa-chan, is so good, too. I have to do my best.
teru: I see. Are you going to be in the summer fair?
*tama: Yes. We're adapting one of Seki-senpai's old stories.							(changed wording)
But my part is progressing slowly...
teru: Then how about you change your hairstyle for a change of pace?
tama: Eh? When did you-
teru: I'm going to sneak into school and loiter about.
_tama: Wait! Wait, wait! My hair gets messy if I don't hold it down.					(maybe "tie it up" since she's talking about how she had the ribbon?)
teru: Is that so? Never mind, never mind!
tama: It's embarrassing. Maybe I should wear a hairband like Teru-senpai.
A normal one, without cat ears.
teru: I'm not wearing a cat-eared hairband today.
tama: A real one!?

teru: I'll go for a stroll around here during class.
tama: What an odd person...
seki: Hm? That hair...
tama: Seki-senpai.
What's the matter?
seki: It's nothing.
Did you change your image, Honda-san? Your hair's pretty.						(changed honorific to -san, because that's what she says)
_mob0: Hey, isn't that...
mob1: She looks different, but she's pretty!
mob2: Is that a first-year?
mob3: Probably higher.
tama: What should I do... It's embarrassing.
It's embarrassing, but somehow it feels so good!
tama: I wonder if my senpais are in the cafeteria...
Oh, it's Haa-chan.
haa: What's that, did you change your image?
We had tests the other day,
but you failed because you were drawing instead of studying,
_so you resolved that you had to change your attitude.							(it sounds like she says "first year" in there, but that's all I can pick out)
Is that it?
tama: You're right about the first half.
haa: I knew it had to be something like that.
If Honda Tamaki is drawing right now, this is no time for be to be studying.
haa: Murakami-senpai is teaching us about the novel's engine. What do we do about the illustrations?
tama: Illustrations...
haa: If I had to say, drawing old men is your specialty.												(spell check)
tama: Will I be fine? Since you're so good, Haa-chan, perhaps you should draw...
teru: Is that all the passion you have for drawing old men?
If you want to get better, draw something so dumbfoundingly ardent that it'll leave me speechless!		(grammar check)
[NOTE TO EDITOR: There she goes with her rural dialect~non.]
tama: I'll do my best!
haa: Wai- I didn't say that right now!
teru: I'm a secret admirer of the SNS club who just walked by.
I'm a first year student, name's Teru. Nice to meet you.					(is she speaking strangely here?  I'd think "First year student, Teru." would be more normal.)
haa: Same as me, then. Nice to meet you											(the "Me too" made it sound like she was repeating herself, so I changed it to "Nice to meet you."
tama: Teru-san's in the first year of college.									(sounds like "You mean first year of college, right, Teru-san?")
haa: This girl here, for someone who's drawing pictures to go with Iris-sensei's scenario,			(spell check)
she doesn't have enough pride, so I was trying to encourage her.
tama: That's not-
teru: I see...
In order for her to portray Ayachi's sense accurately,
_she needs to build up a thorough world view.									(something about understanding the novel's world building, or the world inside Aya's mind maybe? I don't know.)
_But in order to do that, her perception must be in sync with the vibrations she receives.			(spell check)
haa: I think we can get along.
_tama: I feel like I'm being badmouthed.

teru: I have to leave now. I'm looking forward to your new work.
tama: Aren't you going to meet the others?
teru: It's embarrassing, so I'll pass. Send my regards to Shiinan and the rest.
tama: She really came just yo play around.
haa: Is "Shiinan" Murakami-senpai? Isn't it rude for a first-year to speak of the SNS club president like that?
Even if you're not a club member, you should address your upperclassmen with respect.
tama: I think Haa-chan's even ruder than that to Seki-senpai, though.
teru: It seems my kouhais are giving their best. I don't need to meet Shiinan to know that she's keeping our promise.
shii: Honda-san, can I have that computer for a moment? I want to retrieve some old files.			(added honorific)
tama: Of course! Sorry for borrowing it all the time.
_haa: Can't you make them more expressive? They're too bland.
tama: I'm trying my best! I got some advice from Seki-senpai earlier too.
haa: That glasses girl? Well, it's important to have a non-creative person's opinion.
tama: She's so hard on Seki-senpai.
haa: That computer has really high specs, so learn to use it well.
shii: It's a model from a few years ago, and I have another laptop for myself.
tama: By the way, is it okay for you to hang around here if you're not a member yet?			(spell check, since I'm pretty sure she didn't say "hand around here")
haa: Today's an exception!
seki: Sorry for the wait.
haa: Ah, Iris-sensei!
_tama: [INAUDIBLE]													(there's definitely a "sugoii" in there, followed by "wa kushushu"? I'd guess it's either "what an amazing change" talking about Haa, or "what an amazing aura" talking about Seki.  Probably the later)
_shii: Aya's unexpectedly into it.
seki: Thank you for your message. You told me you'd be coming, just as promised.			(spell check)
haa: Yes! Since sensei insisted that I do so.												(rephrased)
shii: She needs to disguise herself as Iris-sensei after all.								(grammar check)
tama: She got a message earlier and left in a hurry.
haa: I was so nervous today thinking I'd get to meet you.
I re-drew all the faces in my history textbook as yours.
seki: All of them, huh?
shii: Do you want some sweets, Honda-san? We have bean jam cakes.							(added honorific)
tama: Can I use this computer?
shii: Go ahead. I grabbed the files I needed.
tama: Oh, the folder the president opened earlier is still open.
shii: Alt+F4 Alt+F4 Alt+F4 Alt+F4
tama: Ah, erm, what was that?
haa: How do you usually think up your stories, sensei?
*seki: With my daily feelings of yearning, I suppose.
I take my various meetings and partings, and the uproars and wonders that fill my daily life, and weave them into words. That's all.	(changed to "weave" since I don't think you use "yarn" as a verb.  Also, this line should probably be cut in two.)
haa: Wonderful...
I read your other works from your days in the literature club. I was deeply moved!
seki: I'm happy to hear that.
haa: Why did you quite the literature club?
seki: I felt it was going to become stale. In the all-too-peaceful literature club, I would spiral down into monotony-
haa: But you said your life was filled with uproar...
seki: I meant I was so used to the literature club's uproar it was the same as nothing to me.
haa: Oh, I see!
shii: It's a total mess.																(reworded to be grammatically correct)
tama: She's bothering Seki-senpai.
shii: I'd say she's enjoying it.
*tama: Isn't it a bit weird to be so clingy? They're not lovers.
haa: This book is so fresh!
_seki: I took some risks with that one. As a creator, you have to broaden your horizon.
haa: So your personal experiences, like the people you meet, are very important?
Speaking of which, how do you get along with that senpai with the glasses?
seki: How...?
haa: These glasses...
I see!
You discipline her harshly!
rest: Why doesn't she figure it out!?
tama: Haa-chan, you're digressing! You had something to consult with Seki- Iris-senpai.
haa: That's right.
I can't think of a composition for this scene's illustration.
Could you draw me a rough reference picture?
shii: Hey, Aya! You put a drawing of yours as the website's background without asking!			(reworded)
What's this frightful picture?
seki: It's Fujikawa-san.																		(added honorific)
*kayo: What part of it?
seki: W- well, if it's just drawing, it should be no problem...
shii: Wait! Sensei already prepared a rough picture for that scene.
haa: How quick!
shii: Ah, that's the wrong one! This is a picture of Iris-sensei disciplining the glasses girl!
seki: Just when did you make that?
haa: It's already this late... I'm sorry, Iris-sensei, I got absorbed in our talk.
seki: It's fine, it's fine. Thanks for today.
haa: It's me who's very thankful for today!
tama: These bean cakes really cling to your hands, right, president?
shii: Yes, they're very sticky.
*tama: I've been to a doujin market with Iris-san, you know.									(added honorific)
haa: So what? You're nowhere near as zealous about sensei's work as me.						(rephrased)
tama: Between me and Haa-chan, who is better at drawing, senpai?
haa: That's obviously me. Right, sensei?
tama: Which one do you like better?
both: It's me, right?
kayo: I just got here, but is that...
a lovers' dispute? It's past the soap opera's timeslot.										(reworded as I think it makes it clearer)
shii: It's a two-hour special.

seki: She finally left...
tama: I'm so tired. I got carried away competing with her.
shii: Honda-san.																			(added honorific)
I said it before, but I think it's not good to compete over your qualities.					(grammar check)
You have your own style.
tama: We all have our own characteristics, but I want to get better on top of that.			(rephrased)
Do you think it doesn't matter who is drawing?
I want to draw better than I did for our last game. Is that wrong?
kayo: Ah, you made her cry.
seki: Sorry, Honda-san. Pay no mind to this.												(added honorific)
tama: I'm leaving for today!
seki: Wait, Honda-san!																		(added honorific)
tama: Excuse me!
tama: I took it out on the president.
I guess I'm really frustrated over this.

tama: I have to cool myself down.
It was my fault, right?
I dropped the president's computer!
Is it fine?
The screen's completely black!
It's just in standby, right?
But wait, one of the lights is on.
I broke it!
teru: Now you've done it, Tamatama-chan.			(this sounds more harsh than what her tone implies to me, maybe "Looks like you broke it," or something?
tama: Teru-san...																		(added honorific, added ellipsis)
Wh- what should I do?
teru: There's nothing you can do but apologize to Shiinan.
tama: Can you come with me? I yelled at the president earlier.
tama: It's mine.
sign: Go for it!
teru: Keep it together, president.

shii: I get the feeling I'm being followed.
tama: How should I apologize...
shii: I couldn't talk it out with Honda-san properly back there.						(added honorific)
Today's not my day. I'll just go home and study for-
tama: President!
shii: I'm home, mom.
literallykuroko: Welcome back, Shiina. You brought a friend?
shii: Yes, she's a kouhai from my club.
This is my mom. She's a programmer, so she mostly works from home.
tama: I'm Honda Tamaki, pleased to meet you.
mom: Pleased to meet you. Shiina only brings female friends home...
_Are there no rumors about her and some boy?
shii: Of course there aren't. I'm not interested in that.
*mom: I'll be working inside, make yourself at home.									(rephrased)
Stay for the night if you'd like!
tama: Thanks, but I won't be that long.
mom: I have no problem if it's with another girl, though.
When they were small, she told Ayame-chan that when they grew up they'd marry-
shii: Just go back to work!
I swear, mom...																			(rephrased)
tama: If it's your mother's wish, I'll do anything.
I did something that I need you to forgive me for, no matter what!
shii: No, no, you don't have to do anything.
shii: So, what do you want me to forgive?
tama: You see...
shii: Was that too harsh a way to put it?
Erm, I'm sorry about that thing in the clubroom. I lost my composure.
tama: No, it was not your fault. It's me who's sorry, I lashed out at you.
both: This is awkward.
tama: Well...
shii: What bad timing, right?																(rephrased)
tama: Right...
seki: Hi!
tama: Seki-senpai.
seki: Hm? Honda-san, what happened?																	(added honorific)
shii: That's what I should ask you. What's with that look?
seki: You see, my youngest brother starts crying when he sees me like this.
*I don't have make-up cleaner at home, so I thought I'd borrow yours.
seki: By the way, Honda-san, why are you here?													(added honorific)
tama: I had something to talk about with the president.											(grammar check)
seki: I see. You did sort of have a fight back there.
I understand that you tend to get heated up in from of Haa-chan,
but our president here as always been too timid too.
It'd be more fitting of her role if she were more assertive with her kouhais.
shii: If you keep bringing up the past I'll stop removing your make-up.
seki: Whoa, gross!
*tama: So asymmetric!																			(spell check)
seki: I'll do it myself! I'm borrowing your bathroom!
tama: Ah, Seki-senpai-
President!
I'm sorry! I broke it!
shii: Broke it? My laptop, you mean?
tama: I dropped it after I left the clubroom.
It's a very good computer, and you have important files in it, right?
shii: Not really, I have a backup.
sign: Coming out of power-saving mode...
shii: It had just run out of battery.														(grammar check)
tama: I'm so glad...
*shii: You worry too much.
[NOTE TO EDITOR: shit, what do you call that thing where you lose your strength after being relieved from a lot of tension?]
*tama: Oh, I'm sorry, it seems my strength has left me.													*
shii: Are you alright? Do your legs hurt or something?
tama: You worry too much.
I wish I had a bigger sister like you.
You're so level-headed, president. And cute too.
shii: No, I'm too pessimistic and lack confidence.
_And I'm not cute...
tama: Not at all. You're kind and look after your kouhais.
You always give it your best. I think you're wonderful.
haa: Good evening!
Honda Tamaki, what are you doing here?
tama: What about you, Haa-chan?
haa: Murakami-senpai's been teaching me how to write a game script for the past few days.
tama: The president?
haa: But it may have been fate to meet you here.
Honda Tamaki, there's something I want us to do.
We're going to make some serious progress in the game we're making.
tama: Now?
haa: End-of-term test are coming up, and I'll find it hard to make time for it.				(changed period to comma)
So let's do as much as we can while we can.
tama: What's this all of a sudden? I have some drawings that I need to spend time coloring.
haa: Do that now.
I'll lend you my spare graphics tablet.
See if you can impress me with your results.
shii: Don't think of it as a contest, think of our schedule too.
You say something too, Aya.
seki: To think I'd meet you again! This may be fate, too.
shii: Why did you put the make-up on?
haa: Ah, Iris-sensei!
tama: Alright, I'm not going to lose!
haa: Don't forget what I taught you the other day.
shii: Really now, don't think of it as a contest...
*mom: What's all the fuss about? Don't go making too much of a ruckus just because you're young.		(rephrased)
shii: Mom, sorry about doing this in the middle of the night.											(rephrased)
mom: Just before a release, you have to take it easy to make it through.		(is she really saying "take it easy"? a fridge full of energy drinks doesn't really fit that idea)
Drinks and food are taken care of, so work to your hearts' content!										(grammar check)
I'll bring out some sleeping bags. Feel free to use the bath too.
rest: Thank you very much!
shii: Hang on a moment! You're all assuming we're having a sleepover, but this is my room!

shii: Well, I'm mostly done teaching Haa-chan about game scripts anyway.
As long as we make it for the summer fair, there's nothing wrong with some hard training.
teru: The next club president is... first year class three, Murakami Shiina!
shii: But, I...
*seki: Can Shii really lead other members?																*
teru: Shiinan is considerate of others and she's good at looking at the big picture.
Keep the SNS club lively from now on. About ten times as lively.
shii: That bar's too high!
teru: It's a promise.
shii: A promise?
tama: President, can you come take a look at this motion?
shii: Yes, I'm coming.
shii: Ten times... Is it about this much?

haa: Nee-san.
iino: You little...
tama: I can't accept that.
seki: It's because we do that that we can take pride in our life.
teru: See, you found it. The reason why you draw.
sign: Are you troubled, young lady?