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- Original greentext
- http://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/45196353/#q45204936
- Goddamn it, now I can't stop imagining the makeout session suddenly stopping so he could work on painting a nature scene for an hour, until he suddenly gets tongue-whipped out of the blue
- >YFW no tall, muscular, dominant, and somewhat cruel tiefling GF
- >YFW she doesn't love to bully and dominate you
- >YFW you won her over with your beautiful nature scenes
- >YFW she doesn't love bullying you while you work, teasing you with her long tongue, seeing how long it takes her to break your concentration as it snakes down your clothes
- >YFW if you take too long she'll vore you add her own crude (and often lewd) "improvements" to your art while you're in there
- Vore just ain't my fetish, man. The rest of that is pretty nice though.
- And besides, if it was me being swallowed, how would this affect the art?
- >Vore just ain't my fetish, man. The rest of that is pretty nice though.
- I just included it as a joke and to link it back to the other greentext, ignore it if you with, honestly felt a bit awkward how I worded it
- >And besides, if it was me being swallowed, how would this affect the art?
- She takes advantage of your incapasitation to add her own touches
- >she spits you back out
- >among all the crude and lewd drawings there's an I LOVE YOU written in big letters
- >she vehemently denies writing it but seems happy you noticed it
- Pretty much
- >You realize it's ruined
- >The clashing colors, the amateurish doodles, the big smear where she inadvertently pressed her chest into it
- >You should never let it see the light of day
- >So you surprise her by hanging it up in the hallway so it's the first thing she sees
- >You got the most intensive full body tongue and belly job that night
- Went from lewd greentext story to a relationship between painter and his tiefling girlfriend, with him letting her indulge in her weird fetishes (she probably can't help wanting to occasionally swallow somebody; it's hardly her fault that he rmother was a vore-succubus).
- So in that case it isn't actually a fetish - it's just part of who she is, almost like a biological prerogative. In accepting that, he's done more for her than anyone else would - even the best of them would probably ask her to quit that weird mouth fetish and ask why she can't just be more normal, and the relationship would blaze apart in a bunch of insecurity and hurt feelings.
- But this painter guy has managed to steal her heart just by being himself. She's not willing to admit it yet, since she's been hurt before when she tried to commit, but it's practically in the bag. Or stomach, I guess.
- Eh, if she still finds it pleasurable it can be a fetish, just one with some biological backing (like a girl with sensitive tits loving having her breasts played with)
- if we're talking high fantasy (and we probably are, because tieflings and succubi)
- >Ring of Sustenance
- >Ring of Acid Resistance
- >Belt of Regeneration
- >can stay in as long as necessary to get her off and/or tired of it
- >bonus points for not wearing anything else
- >>Ring of Acid Resistance
- >>Belt of Regeneration
- >Implying her vorecubuss heritage doesn't let her have control over her stomach
- >Implying she'd digest you
- >>can stay in as long as necessary to get her off and/or tired of it
- >Implying she'd ever get tired of it
- If her mother was a vore-succubus, who was her presumably mortal father, and more importantly what happened to him? I can see that story being very short, very tragic or very cute, depending on how it turned out.
- If her mother was a Succubus that would make her an Alu-Fiend and not a Tiefling though. Tieflings are less than half-blooded.
- Grandfather/great-grandfather, then. Somewhere along the line somebody had a kid with a vorecubus.
- >Grandfather/great-grandfather
- That's what I would do if I were to write it.
- Being immortal, the succubus would still be around, so I'd have to decide whether to make her be an antagonistic presence in the Tiefling girl's life in some way, or just have her be out of the picture entirely, leaving the Tiefling to question the exact nature of her powers and her urge to devour people alive.
- The first option gives a lot more lee-way for vore and non-vore shenanigans, but the second option would make the Tiefling a more interesting character.
- Now I want to see somebody write a serie of stories based on this concept.
- I've always preferred my smut to come with a good plot.
- Second one is better for drama, but the first sounds like it could have great potential for comedy.
- Too bad this thread is about to hit bump limit so the story probably won't be developed further.
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