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  1. Agua line:
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  3. Something that actually looks like an iguana, mainly something not out of 20's olympics...
  4. 5/15/2013 2:49 PM View respondent's answers
  5. 3rd evo just looks out of place for a water type, needs to be more streamline at least and lose some of the scale pads
  6. 5/15/2013 2:01 PM View respondent's answers
  7. I still don't like the color of the salt and thought the white was fine, but it doesn't look terrible. The only bad thing is it resembles Samurott's shells and just isn't as appealing to me. While I also don't like the current design as much as older ones, it's good enough to be put in the game.
  8. 5/15/2013 11:12 AM View respondent's answers
  9. Faggots response but it really doesn't feel like a water type yet. Maybe a bigger empathasis on it's shark nature? Gills? More fins?
  10. 5/15/2013 11:07 AM View respondent's answers
  11. Aguanaut is one of my favourite pokemon in the dex by far! I liked the original design a lot and through the vast redesigns, one was even better but the current one is taking the things too south. I think it should be less bulky. The salt doesn't look like salt and I just don't see what was wrong with the original design. Two prevos are ok.
  12. 5/15/2013 6:17 AM View respondent's answers
  13. Aguanaut doesn't fit in, can't the guy who redesign flairees do this?
  14. 5/15/2013 12:11 AM View respondent's answers
  15. The last form is great, but the first two leave a lot to be desired.
  16. 5/14/2013 6:33 PM View respondent's answers
  17. He does not fit with the others, should be a little more friendlier looking, Aguade could get a little make over in the same vein as Kidling, to give him more personality
  18. 5/14/2013 1:09 PM View respondent's answers
  19. Last evolution looks like a water type Emboar.
  20. 5/14/2013 11:36 AM View respondent's answers
  21. Second evolution looks like ass cheeks compared to the first and last.
  22. 5/14/2013 12:34 AM View respondent's answers
  23. The second evolutions legs look like he's wearing hammer pants
  24. 5/13/2013 7:55 PM View respondent's answers
  25. Make the colors more unified, or just change the middle stage blues. Otherwise I'd say they're pretty good. Not amazing/perfect but still gameworthy.
  26. 5/13/2013 4:00 PM View respondent's answers
  27. I like the newer rendition of this line
  28. 5/13/2013 3:03 PM View respondent's answers
  29. Second evo needs to be sized up, both prevos need to change to show final evo coming. Colors need to be changed, reminds me too much of the Oshawott line right now. ESPECIALLY middle evo.
  30. 5/13/2013 7:24 AM View respondent's answers
  31. the first two's (especially 1st stage) nose salt is extremely awkward.
  32. 5/13/2013 5:43 AM View respondent's answers
  33. Make the second stage look a bit bigger, so there is less of a jump between 2 and 3.
  34. 5/12/2013 9:08 AM View respondent's answers
  35. The colors of the 1st to adjusted to the last stage.
  36. 5/12/2013 4:58 AM View respondent's answers
  37. We are making our game ... so what is the point of making another Feraligatr ? For fuck sake we can use any animal in the word. We should cull it and make something new.
  38. 5/12/2013 4:57 AM View respondent's answers
  39. it's too human-looking it needs a more nidoking-like bodyshape and it's ready
  40. 5/12/2013 4:47 AM View respondent's answers
  41. I know I'm probably at odds with the majority but I would like to see a final stage that is less obviously fighting type. As for the prevos, I feel like there needs to be more focus on redesigning them as well. As it is, even if the final evo was perfect, I wouldn't vote this line in, as I feel the whole line is not up to par.
  42. 5/12/2013 1:23 AM View respondent's answers
  43. Baranaut is wonderful, the two starters need to be tweaked a little more. Giving the baby bigger eyes, or making the middle evo a different color scheme.
  44. 5/11/2013 10:10 PM View respondent's answers
  45. That aguanaut is entirely too anthropomorphic, and really generic looking to boot. It's machoke with a bigger crest and a longer tail.
  46. 5/11/2013 10:00 PM View respondent's answers
  47. I miss the Iguana-head final evo.
  48. 5/11/2013 6:39 PM View respondent's answers
  49. Final form giving the finger. Maybe some spiker salt on the final form tail and arms
  50. 5/11/2013 3:44 PM View respondent's answers
  51. Tan colored armor/fur on final evo is overkill, reduce or remove
  52. 5/11/2013 1:55 PM View respondent's answers
  53. The lower half of the middle evolution seems underdeveloped. With a bit more art there this should be game-ready.
  54. 5/11/2013 1:50 PM View respondent's answers
  55. The first evo shouldn't be wearing a mask that looks like a fox/rabbit head. The second evo should be a bit bulkier up top to detract from looking like a croconaw clone. Final evo looks badass, no real complaints
  56. 5/11/2013 10:22 AM View respondent's answers
  57. The second and third evo seem too similar... I like the idea but at the same time, having salt as the armour is really hard to put across. As mentioned before, it just looks like ice or snow... The final evos tail doesn't help this fact as it looks like a christmas tree.
  58. 5/11/2013 8:25 AM View respondent's answers
  59. I personally liked the beginning artwork for the starters, "HUR DUR JUST GET BIGGUR" be damned.
  60. 5/11/2013 7:17 AM View respondent's answers
  61. Baraguade is a little too humanoid. They need more lizard, something the other lines did better.
  62. 5/11/2013 4:23 AM View respondent's answers
  63. The 1st stage pokemon should have longer arms, lel. It looks a bit odd. Other than that, the line's pretty good!
  64. 5/10/2013 10:05 PM View respondent's answers
  65. I need to see those colors match up.
  66. 5/10/2013 9:44 PM View respondent's answers
  67. Aguanaut looks like a water type Emboar. Making him huge to get the fighting typing across was lazy. It can be subtle
  68. 5/10/2013 9:44 PM View respondent's answers
  69. Middle evo should be taller.
  70. 5/10/2013 8:31 PM View respondent's answers
  71. Cull solacari.
  72. 5/10/2013 7:09 PM View respondent's answers
  73. Inconsistent. 2nd evo should look muscular if the final is official
  74. 5/10/2013 7:06 PM View respondent's answers
  75. redesigning middle stage, everything else is perfect.
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  80. First Flairees:
  81. dislike the horns of 3rd form in particular. colors of the first form should maybe be tweaked a bit.
  82. 5/15/2013 5:43 PM View respondent's answers
  83. full evo not intimidating enough
  84. 5/15/2013 4:25 PM View respondent's answers
  85. The Final evo needs to continue the trend of getting darker. Make it's horns black and slim it up. Basically, make it intimidating.
  86. 5/15/2013 2:49 PM View respondent's answers
  87. 2nd evo needs some cream wool in order to follow 1st evo design. 1st evo, try chaning the cream and brown around and reduce the size of the eyes
  88. 5/15/2013 2:01 PM View respondent's answers
  89. The black horned design is probably the best
  90. 5/15/2013 11:12 AM View respondent's answers
  91. Just an idea but would be great if it was ever taken back to looking more like a sheep if the female and male would have different evos.
  92. 5/15/2013 11:07 AM View respondent's answers
  93. the final stage does not look "final" enough. it needs to be more majestic and powerful looking
  94. 5/14/2013 9:08 PM View respondent's answers
  95. They final evo is still looks very young.
  96. 5/14/2013 8:00 PM View respondent's answers
  97. The horns on the final evolution could use a redo.
  98. 5/14/2013 12:34 AM View respondent's answers
  99. The hooves on the final evolution should definitely be rockier looking. The prevo looks horrible and should be scrapped entirely. The one that was in the demo was perfect.
  100. 5/13/2013 7:55 PM View respondent's answers
  101. The color jump from first to second stage is too big, so the 2nd stage feels kind of out of place. Love the design otherwise though. I think one of the main things is the horns/hooves going from orange to being rock so suddenly. Think the leg on the final stage could be worked on to look less flimsy though.
  102. 5/13/2013 4:00 PM View respondent's answers
  103. horns just a little bit sharper, the rest is great
  104. 5/13/2013 3:33 PM View respondent's answers
  105. Final evo needs to seem more epic, mouth looks toothless, first stage doesn't look like it matches.
  106. 5/13/2013 7:24 AM View respondent's answers
  107. The horns of the last evolution. I think they are too overdesigned. You should get rid of the side ones at least. Or you can try helix like horns.
  108. 5/13/2013 4:38 AM View respondent's answers
  109. Body proportions are kinda fucked up. The eyes and head are too big with respect to the body.
  110. 5/12/2013 1:19 PM View respondent's answers
  111. I prefer the other one
  112. 5/12/2013 1:00 PM View respondent's answers
  113. I love love LOVE te final evo design. I just want to see parts of it tweaked to make it seem more "final evo". Making it bigger/taller, changing the eyes, etc
  114. 5/12/2013 12:52 PM View respondent's answers
  115. final evo's face looks a little scrunchy
  116. 5/12/2013 10:30 AM View respondent's answers
  117. I do not like how the 2nd stage has nothing of the light colors that the 1st stage has. The 3rd stage does have some of it. Also, the chin of the 3rd stage looks really bad. Too square.
  118. 5/12/2013 4:58 AM View respondent's answers
  119. final evo ... We had cool fire horns and now we have Emboar ...
  120. 5/12/2013 4:57 AM View respondent's answers
  121. I love the prevos, they shouldn't be changed at all! As for Flairees, I would like it to seem larger and more imposing - you can start by getting rid of the rock cutiemark. I also dislike the extra set of horns on the side of the face, perhaps we could go back to the original ram horns. I do like that this Flairees has a much more goat-like body, as opposed to the weird cinched waist of the previous design, the face is also an improvement.
  122. 5/12/2013 1:23 AM View respondent's answers
  123. The final evolution needs to look like a third stage starter (fiercer, bigger). it seems way too close to the second evo as well.
  124. 5/11/2013 10:16 PM View respondent's answers
  125. The evo is so close to perfect! If I HAD to make an adjustment, I'd make him less squatty and make it more apparant that the bulk is from muscle and not fluff. Also get rid of one set of horns by removing the bottom one or making the horns more ramlike.
  126. 5/11/2013 10:10 PM View respondent's answers
  127. HOOVES ON FIRE
  128. 5/11/2013 9:47 PM View respondent's answers
  129. Obsidian horns in this style.
  130. 5/11/2013 6:39 PM View respondent's answers
  131. Modify Horns
  132. 5/11/2013 1:55 PM View respondent's answers
  133. The last stage need to look more like a last stage. Remove one pair of horns, make it look more imposing and it's game ready for me.
  134. 5/11/2013 12:34 PM View respondent's answers
  135. I miss the old final evo. In my opinion it was much better... this one looks too cuddly for a final evo.
  136. 5/11/2013 8:25 AM View respondent's answers
  137. Once again, the original art is FAR superior.
  138. 5/11/2013 7:17 AM View respondent's answers
  139. Flairees looks like a fluffy dog with down's. Needs more power, less fluff, WAY better face.
  140. 5/11/2013 4:23 AM View respondent's answers
  141. I'm personally a fan of the current final stage's horns and face, though I know some people don't like it. I think it's the position of the final stage's head looks off (like it's pulled it's head back, and that it's "beard" is actually its chest. I think a few "pose edits" could save the final stage.
  142. 5/11/2013 3:55 AM View respondent's answers
  143. I like the other final evo better
  144. 5/11/2013 1:19 AM View respondent's answers
  145. horns, head, ruffles
  146. 5/10/2013 11:26 PM View respondent's answers
  147. I really like the concept. The final evo should be less "over designed", imo. Maybe make it thinner and curl the top horns a little? I love the first two pokemon, though.
  148. 5/10/2013 10:05 PM View respondent's answers
  149. Cull solacari.
  150. 5/10/2013 7:09 PM View respondent's answers
  151. Waiting for runoff survey
  152. 5/10/2013 7:03 PM View respondent's answers
  153. 1st and 2nd stage are perfect, 3rd needs to look more intimidating and more like an evolution, right now it doesn't look that much different.
  154. 5/10/2013 6:50 PM View respondent's answers
  155. This isn't the current design. Also, proportions are all wrong on the final.
  156. 5/10/2013 6:48 PM View respondent's answers
  157. Final evo needs to be more menacing
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  161. 2nd Flairees:
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  163. I think this 3rd stage is better than the other ones, but the designs of all three stages need to be tweaked so they "flow" better I guess.
  164. 5/15/2013 5:43 PM View respondent's answers
  165. Just a bit more line constancy. Maybe have more rocky feet on the middle evo.
  166. 5/15/2013 4:50 PM View respondent's answers
  167. Great idea for the final evo; it just needs to be polished up and given some better art and I think we have a winner.
  168. 5/15/2013 2:49 PM View respondent's answers
  169. Make first stage match final stage's color scheme?
  170. 5/15/2013 11:12 AM View respondent's answers
  171. Would like to see the stone hoofs implemented into final design
  172. 5/15/2013 11:07 AM View respondent's answers
  173. The Evo should have the mane of the middle stage. Colour scheme is horrible
  174. 5/15/2013 12:11 AM View respondent's answers
  175. Color is needs adjustment.
  176. 5/14/2013 8:00 PM View respondent's answers
  177. How to ruin a good line in 1 simple step, ignore the first two stages and try to make the badass goat that does not look like a goat
  178. 5/14/2013 1:09 PM View respondent's answers
  179. 3edgy5me
  180. 5/14/2013 12:34 AM View respondent's answers
  181. getting warmer
  182. 5/13/2013 7:55 PM View respondent's answers
  183. I like everything about the final stage but the colors. The black is nice and I prefer it to the design in 2, but I don't like the red. The horns orange>grey>black progression doesn't seem quite as forced though, which I like. So pretty much 2 with the blacks and single set of horns like this one.
  184. 5/13/2013 4:00 PM View respondent's answers
  185. Last evo has completely different personality, too grim, doesn't match
  186. 5/13/2013 7:24 AM View respondent's answers
  187. You should make them more similar, but they are good.
  188. 5/13/2013 4:38 AM View respondent's answers
  189. The last one sticks out like a sore thumb
  190. 5/12/2013 9:34 PM View respondent's answers
  191. Second needs to flow into the third better
  192. 5/12/2013 1:00 PM View respondent's answers
  193. 2 edgy 4 m3
  194. 5/12/2013 10:30 AM View respondent's answers
  195. The colors hould be unified in the whole line. There's too much difference now.
  196. 5/12/2013 4:58 AM View respondent's answers
  197. Prevos are good, the final design is inferior to other redesigns.
  198. 5/12/2013 1:23 AM View respondent's answers
  199. Last evo doesn't look like it belongs.
  200. 5/11/2013 10:24 PM View respondent's answers
  201. Give it EXPRESSION, change the colors so they aren't incredibly dull (even throw in some white fur accents or grey on the rocks).
  202. 5/11/2013 10:10 PM View respondent's answers
  203. HOOVES ON FIRE
  204. 5/11/2013 9:47 PM View respondent's answers
  205. ... but not this one.
  206. 5/11/2013 6:39 PM View respondent's answers
  207. I don't like the colors at all on this one. The face isn't really good and it lacks a pokémon feel.
  208. 5/11/2013 12:34 PM View respondent's answers
  209. Just a bit more line constancy. Maybe have more rocky feet on the middle evo.
  210. 5/11/2013 11:20 AM View respondent's answers
  211. This one is much better
  212. 5/11/2013 8:25 AM View respondent's answers
  213. SO MUCH MEH
  214. 5/11/2013 7:17 AM View respondent's answers
  215. Colors are off, the face needs some work as it loses all character from the first 2, a little bland
  216. 5/11/2013 4:23 AM View respondent's answers
  217. The final stage doesn't really match the mid. May just be cause of the artstyle though.
  218. 5/11/2013 3:55 AM View respondent's answers
  219. I like the other final evo better.
  220. 5/11/2013 1:19 AM View respondent's answers
  221. fix final evos eyes
  222. 5/10/2013 11:26 PM View respondent's answers
  223. I think the final evo's aesthetics aren't that great as compared to the first one.
  224. 5/10/2013 10:05 PM View respondent's answers
  225. Obivously need some minor changes to match up the art styles, but my favorite by far.
  226. 5/10/2013 9:44 PM View respondent's answers
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  231. 3rd Flairees:
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  233. Just a bit more line constancy. Maybe more rocky'ness on the evo and chance the horns on the middle evo to match the final evo.
  234. 5/15/2013 4:50 PM View respondent's answers
  235. I would be fine with this, but I'd like to see the horns retain their rocky nature ie: obsidian
  236. 5/15/2013 2:49 PM View respondent's answers
  237. Too much fire not enough rock. Too different from Mid-stage.
  238. 5/15/2013 11:12 AM View respondent's answers
  239. Just an idea but would be great if it was ever taken back to looking more like a sheep if the female and male would have different evos.
  240. 5/15/2013 11:07 AM View respondent's answers
  241. Where are the rocks? it does away with the increasing chest fluffiness and the rock horns instead of improving on it...
  242. 5/14/2013 1:09 PM View respondent's answers
  243. More complex design on the third evolution.
  244. 5/14/2013 12:34 AM View respondent's answers
  245. Prevo needs to be redone. Final evolution is almost perfect, but doesn't look like its rock type at all.
  246. 5/13/2013 7:55 PM View respondent's answers
  247. Getting closer with the blacks, but don't like the horns and the reds aren't any different.
  248. 5/13/2013 4:00 PM View respondent's answers
  249. There needs to be something which makes the third stage a rock type.
  250. 5/13/2013 3:04 PM View respondent's answers
  251. rock horns one is better
  252. 5/13/2013 5:43 AM View respondent's answers
  253. Doesn't fit with the second evolution.
  254. 5/12/2013 9:34 PM View respondent's answers
  255. Just a worst drawing of the first one
  256. 5/12/2013 1:00 PM View respondent's answers
  257. I really like this one but I like the horns from the original more.
  258. 5/12/2013 12:52 PM View respondent's answers
  259. Prevos are good, I feel like the final design is a step backwards. I dislike the cinched waist this Flairees has, it looks weird on the anatomy of a goat because goats actually have rather large bellies, it also does not fit with the prevos. I also dislike the material the horns are made out of. If we must go with this design it will need to be redrawn so that the body is actually in proportion; as it stands the body is way too long.
  260. 5/12/2013 1:23 AM View respondent's answers
  261. Last evo doesn't incorporate the rock type aspect.
  262. 5/11/2013 10:24 PM View respondent's answers
  263. Change black to grey, add rocks so it looks like a /rock type, make the torso less rectangular - wait I just described the evo in question 2.
  264. 5/11/2013 10:10 PM View respondent's answers
  265. Flairees is still kind of immature-looking.
  266. 5/11/2013 10:00 PM View respondent's answers
  267. HOOVES ON FIRE
  268. 5/11/2013 9:47 PM View respondent's answers
  269. Bleh.
  270. 5/11/2013 6:39 PM View respondent's answers
  271. Maybe a rock like carapace on the front
  272. 5/11/2013 3:44 PM View respondent's answers
  273. Sameline.jpg
  274. 5/11/2013 1:50 PM View respondent's answers
  275. It's too long and it lacks the rock aspect. I liked when it had belly fur, too.
  276. 5/11/2013 12:34 PM View respondent's answers
  277. Just a bit more line constancy. Maybe more rocky'ness on the evo and chance the horns on the middle evo to match the final evo.
  278. 5/11/2013 11:20 AM View respondent's answers
  279. it's like you don't even WANT me to pick a starter other than florabi, I'm not a fan of grass types, but COME OOON, don't force the choice on me...
  280. 5/11/2013 7:17 AM View respondent's answers
  281. There is not enough rock in the Flairees design. It seems to lose that typing.
  282. 5/11/2013 7:07 AM View respondent's answers
  283. Face is still trash
  284. 5/11/2013 4:23 AM View respondent's answers
  285. I prefer the horns of thr other final stage (the first in this survey), and the rocks on it's body. However, this art shows where the problems of the head position lies. It looks like it has no neck. If we "fix its pose" here, it can be incorporated into other designs.
  286. 5/11/2013 3:55 AM View respondent's answers
  287. Yup, this is the one.
  288. 5/11/2013 1:19 AM View respondent's answers
  289. if this oen fix middle stage
  290. 5/10/2013 11:26 PM View respondent's answers
  291. I like this, but it's hard to grasp the concept of it being Rock/Fire. Add some rocks to it, maybe?
  292. 5/10/2013 10:05 PM View respondent's answers
  293. Flaires need more flair (for lack of a better term). His design seems barren of the detail that Q3 boasts.
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