CageCreeper's Aspirant Review

Hey there! :3

Very good and original concept for your plot, I like it. I assume its based from a scene from Avatar, judging from the fight in the air, but I could be mistaken, I'm not familiar with Avatar! However, there are some things that need improving.

Firstly, terrain. I know that you are basing it off of a scene from a series, but there are things that still need to be changed from the creative side of things. Your terrain is good, but there needs to be more of it. You have too much space occupied by water, because you haven't really included too much on the water space you have. You do have some boats, but there's still a large open area. I like the volcano a lot, though! You have a nice blend of blocks, like with how you've distributed the coal blocks in with the stone/cobblestone.

Secondly, organics. You have one above the water, which has nice detailing. I can tell this is obviously from the series, although I really don't know much about it! From what I do know, this character has really shaggy fur, and you've represented this well with the stairs! The belly needs to be a little more organics though. Just add some slabs on the inside of it, to create a rounder appearance. You could have some more organics on the plot, however. Maybe something way up in the sky?

Lastly, structure. Your staircase leading up the side of the plot to the buildings, and the buildings themselves are really nice! Lovely oriental theme with the Avatar scene, and nice looking detail. You are, however, going to need way more structure than this. To pass to the next rank, you're going to need some larger structure - you can keep with the oriental style, but unfortunately you may need to steer away from the scene you're trying to portray. That being said, it's still nice to have something that's 'based off of' a scene, instead of a direct copy. If anything it shows a lot more creativity!
Also, your boats are far too simple and lacking too much detailing on the sides.
Type "/plot visit DaKing_ 1" and check out his boat he built for his plot. Notice the blocks he used, plus his sails and the organic-ness of them. Organic-ness is now a word, I promise. I wouldn't use clay for the boats main block, if I were you. I think it's best to stick with wood!

Good luck!
- Dutty :3