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- < by one a and crunched down o nthem.
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- > by one and crunched down on them.
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- < aquairum." We got on the subway at Ogikubo. The reason Himari wanted to
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- > aquarium." We got on the subway at Ogikubo. The reason Himari wanted to
- 326c326
- < Sunshine International Aquairum was packed. Families, couples, groups of
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- > Sunshine International Aquarium was packed. Families, couples, groups of
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- < present today. How about that?" I said as cheerfuly as possible.
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- > present today. How about that?" I said as cheerfully as possible.
- 569,570c569,570
- < Since the ambulance had alREADY BEEN CALLED, YOU NEED TO GET TO THE
- < HOSPITAL ASAP. Someone said. It wasn't really far away. It was probably
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- > Since the ambulance had already been called, you need to get to the
- > hospital ASAP. Someone said. It wasn't really far away. It was probably
- 746c746
- < shoulder. The warmth that hand was better proof than anything that she was
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- > shoulder. The warmth of that hand was better proof than anything that she was
- 749c749
- < "You're right, I am overreacting." I laughed awkardly, forcing my mouth
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- > "You're right, I am overreacting." I laughed awkwardly, forcing my mouth
- 755c755
- < It was Kanba. He had a sever expression on his face as he looked at the
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- > It was Kanba. He had a severe expression on his face as he looked at the
- 779c779
- < What do we do? This is the morgue and Himari died once. Kanba definately
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- > What do we do? This is the morgue and Himari died once. Kanba definitely
- 895c895
- < I paniced and looked at the clock on the wall, there's no way I could get
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- > I panicked and looked at the clock on the wall, there's no way I could get
- 906c906
- < "I'm off!" I started smiling unconciously. Ah, I thought, this must be
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- > "I'm off!" I started smiling unconsciously. Ah, I thought, this must be
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- < matter anymore. I looked up at the clear white autumn sky, I cheerfuly
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- > matter anymore. I looked up at the clear white autumn sky, I cheerfully
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- < embryogenisis in a voice like he's chanting a sutra.
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- > embryogenesis in a voice like he's chanting a sutra.
- 1014c1014
- < The girl in the middle Yamashita was talking with her hair in a bob
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- > The girl in the middle Yamashita was talking about with her hair in a bob
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- < accept me inspite of that. I'm not that brave.
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- > accept me in spite of that. I'm not that brave.
- 1037c1037
- < I was about to go through subway gate when I touched my pants pocket and
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- > I was about to go through the subway gate when I touched my pants pocket and
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- < turned around and there a plump little penguin was looking at me with it's
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- > turned around and there a plump little penguin was looking at me with its
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- < For a while, I just stared at the penguin like creature. People just
- < walked passed us not seeming to notice a thing.
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- > For a while, I just stared at the penguin-like creature. People just
- > walked past us not seeming to notice a thing.
- 1091c1091
- < When I left the super market, it was dark outside and rain was starting to
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- > When I left the supermarket, it was dark outside and rain was starting to
- 1101c1101
- < mother and child as they left the super market.
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- > mother and child as they left the supermarket.
- 1115c1115
- < I looked down at the penguin. My eyes met it's more or less expressionless
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- > I looked down at the penguin. My eyes met its more or less expressionless
- 1134c1134
- < like the one that had been following me, blinking it's little, black eyes.
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- > like the one that had been following me, blinking its little, black eyes.
- 1283c1283
- < rhythm swelled again. It louder than I ever thought possible and just as I
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- > rhythm swelled again. It was louder than I ever thought possible and just as I
- 1298c1298
- < "I am not your sister. I have come from destination of your fate."
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- > "I am not your sister. I have come from the destination of your fate."
- 1321c1321
- < over-the-top rhythm that matched not-Himari were getting further away. I
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- > over-the-top rhythm that matched not-Himari was getting further away. I
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- < Before long, Himari smoothly pulled out a shining "somthing" from deep
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- > Before long, Himari smoothly pulled out a shining "something" from deep
- 1351c1351
- < dissappeared into another dimension.
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- > disappeared into another dimension.
- 1357c1357
- < drip of the kitchen faucet at night was strangely noticable. Shoma was
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- > drip of the kitchen faucet at night was strangely noticeable. Shoma was
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- < Kanba got up carefuly as to not wake his brother, and took a deep breath.
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- > Kanba got up carefully as to not wake his brother, and took a deep breath.
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- < Why are we born? If it's only to be born, age, and grow old, just passing
- < the earnestly passing the days until we die, is it some kind of grand
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- > Why are we born? If it's only to be born, age, and grow old, just
- > earnestly passing the days until we die, is it some kind of grand
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