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FoodLovingPanda

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Mar 3rd, 2015
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  1. Hi there
  2. My name is FoodLovingPanda and i will be reviewing you
  3. This review will be divided into three sections: Terrain, Organics and Structure and I will explain each section separately, so let us begin.
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  5. TERRAIN:
  6. You have made the water really sloppy. The water level needs to be much higher in order for you ship to be able to sail properly. Also the wave formation around the ship should be visible as well. When a ship sails it leaves a trail of waves.
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  8. ORGANICS:
  9. You certainly dont have trouble with adding depth to your organics (sails in this case) however you have made the sail extremely big for the mast that you have on your plot and the bottom of the sail is to flat. Also your ship does not need two triangular sails. Whenever you are building you need to take proportion into account as well.
  10. Another thing.... when making trees dont use Notch trees as a model you base yours off.
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  12. STRUCTURE:
  13. when making ship hull dont use the v shape to make the bottom of the ship but rather try to make it tear shaped. The best way to make this type of ships is to always have a tear shape in you mind when building and connecting those shapes to make the hull.
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  15. Since you are still a spark i would suggest you clear your plot and start over as it is really hard to make a ship on such a small plot. Wait until you are blaze at least.
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  17. Have fun building
  18. -FoodLovingPanda
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