[SFW]
**2:56 - Dodge/Error: Lit. "It won't die even if you killed it." One of those Japanese phrases that sounds retarded in direct translation. While this interpretation is rather creative, it completely changes the meaning of this line. It should be something like "It won't stay dead even if you killed it."
*10:30 - Error (minor): "...I have to charge you to take a look at him", "...You need money to have him examined". / That's just the first step. This line shows that a) Everything is about money. b) futility of his actions, that even if he gave 10,000 yen, his gramps wouldn't have been saved.
*11:06 - Error (minor): "Let's find a house of our own right now!" / Sounds retarded without "of our own". Maybe it would've worked with "Let's go get a house right now!" to keep it short.

[WhyNot]
**2:56 - Dodge/Error: Lit. "It won't die even if you killed it." One of those Japanese phrases that sounds retarded in direct translation. While this interpretation is rather creative, it completely changes the meaning of this line. It should be something like "It won't stay dead even if you killed it."
*5:50 - Missing line (minor, unimportant): "Should've known!"
*10:30 - Error (minor): "...I have to charge you to take a look at him", "...You need money to have him examined". / That's just the first step. This line shows that a) Everything is about money. b) futility of his actions, that even if he gave 10,000 yen, his gramps wouldn't have been saved.
*11:06 - Error (minor): "Let's find a house of our own right now!" / Missing "right now".

[Hadena]
**2:56 - Dodge/Error: Lit. "It won't die even if you killed it." One of those Japanese phrases that sounds retarded in direct translation. While this interpretation is rather creative, it completely changes the meaning of this line. It should be something like "It won't stay dead even if you killed it."
*10:30 - Error (minor): "...I have to charge you to take a look at him", "...You need money to have him examined". / That's just the first step. This line shows that a) Everything is about money. b) futility of his actions, that even if he gave 10,000 yen, his gramps wouldn't have been saved.
*11:06 - Error (minor): "Let's find a house of our own right now!" / Sounds retarded without "of our own". Maybe it would've worked with "Let's go get a house right now!" to keep it short.