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Tayter_Kat

Chaosalright311

Jul 13th, 2015
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  1. Hello Chaosalright311, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your initiate plot....
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from houses to towers to barns. Your house is good, but it is lacking depth. Depth is the layers within a building/structure wall. You can add depth to a structure by adding trap doors, fences, slabs, stairs, and buttons. This will make your build more interesting.
  5. Terrain:
  6. This is anything involving the ground, like cliffs and hills. You have some good terrain, bit there are a bit of flat areas around your plot. try adding more craters and hills to fix this!
  7. Organics:
  8. This is anything living, like trees and animals. You have some good trees, but they are lacking some leaves. Maybe throw a bit on the tree, but make sure it is proportional with the trunk and branches.
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  10. Good Luck<3
  11. Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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