DiscussionFromPlagarizedSCP

Sad Xiao 26 Apr 2012, 22:43 GMT
You fucked up the image.
And didn't even bother to put in proper describing text.
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Further Deconstruction
Sad Xiao 26 Apr 2012, 22:46 GMT
Also, to note:

-The redacted voltage lock is from another object's SCP. Good going with originality;
-REDACTIONS in the BAD places;
-A grain elevator that makes you go insane and all possessed and that shit? Seriously?

This article has been poorly though out - the concept was poor, the execution was worse.
Downvoted.

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Re: Further Deconstruction
maninahat 26 Apr 2012, 22:50 GMT
I admit I took the locking mechanism from another SCP, wholesale. Is the organisation not permitted to use the same lock for more than one SCP? Seems inefficient to only use one type of lock once.

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Re: Further Deconstruction
Sad Xiao 26 Apr 2012, 22:51 GMT
In regards to that, at least (somewhere) attribute that to the original author, because all Foundation material is under a Creative Commons license.

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Re: Further Deconstruction
maninahat 26 Apr 2012, 22:55 GMT
How would I go about making the attribution?

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maninahat 26 Apr 2012, 22:47 GMT
I thought I had to save before adding the image. it's my first SCP, so I'm still learning.

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Sad Xiao 26 Apr 2012, 22:54 GMT
This is what a sandbox is for.

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Scantron 26 Apr 2012, 22:47 GMT
This could be good, with some expansion of the concept and elaboration on the individual parts. Talk to someone who knows their shit to get a good idea of what would happen if someone were stretched like that, I guarantee you'll find something horrifying that you could expand on.

I'd say this thing's main problem at the time is that it feels rushed, like you're trying to get the concept out before your pen runs out of ink. Look it over, write more things to clarify and expand on what you have. If that sounds redundant, it's because I like to reinforce the concept.

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Roget 26 Apr 2012, 22:49 GMT
Talk to chat before ya post next time, they'll help ya out

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