Stars in the Sky (Proofread)

>"I can't shake this feeling that something bad is going to happen," the minty blue-colored mare said.
>"There's nothing to worry about. Trust me."
>"What if this condition that I have doesn't go away?" she sobs.
>"Somep0ny will help you on the other side. I promise."
>The minty colored p0ne closes its eyes and becomes enveloped in darkness
>A magic aura surrounds her as she slowly starts to levitate from the ground
>The p0ne that is using the magic begins to cry as she begins to recite the magical words to cast the spell
>The ground starts to shake and woodland creatures flee the area
>The stars above start to shape a perfect circle around the mint p0ne
>Beams of light shine down on her
>The p0ne casting the spell looked away from the blinding lights
>As she turned back, not a trace of the mint p0ne was to be found....
"One day I'll come for you and we will live together again, my dear Lyra..."
>Heavy tears fall as the p0ne retreats to the town in the most darkest of shadows

>You see a bright shining star up above
>"If only you were here.."
>The star seemed closer and closer until it hit the ground
>With various scenarios running through your head, you decide to check it out
>You can see that it didn't leave much of a mark on the ground, but a black residue surrounds the fresh little crater
>Knowing that it can possibly be an alien of some sort, or just a rock from space, you take a closer look at what was in the hole
>....
>It took your eyes a while to adjust to the darkness
>Is... it's a p0ne?
>You see that it's still breathing, but it seemed faint
>You look left and right to check for any witnesses
>You take off your coat and lift the creature into your arms and carry it home.
>You made it home without anyone seeing the p0ne
>You enter your house and flicked on the lights and see that, to your surprise, the p0ne was of a strange color
>"A blueish minty lookin' p0ne?" you murmur to yourself
>You set strange looking thing on the couch and venture to the kitchen to make some tea.
>After a couple of hours of staring at the p0ne, it begins to move and slowly opens its eyes
"W-where...?"
>You give it a smile and say, "Don't worry, you're safe."
>It faintly smiled before falling back to sleep.
>"I wonder where this deranged little thing came from? Well, I suppose that can wait. Time to clean things up for when it regains consciousness"
>Thoughts run through your head like a speeding bullet
>two or so hours of sprucing up the place you retreated to the bedroom
>Before you drift off into sleep you hear a faint sound, it sounded like the p0ne was...sniffling.
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>The next morning you hear the sound of the smoke alarm
>Wide-eyed, you hurry to the kitchen
>You see the minty p0ne trying to cook waffles
>More like burned tires
>"Whoa!? What in the falling stars is going on in here?"
>It looked at you uncertainly
>It was mouthing words, but you couldn't understand them
>It stopped everything it was doing and then trotted toward you
>An aura slowly surrounds its horn
>You feel a tugging sensation on your body
>Your body moves on its own and before you knew it you were kneeling down to meet its height
>The minty p0ne looked at you for a short moment and said something
>Then, it swiftly kisses you for a short, but seemingly long, moment
>The p0ne broke the kiss off and you didn't know how or what to feel
>This was your first kiss
>It begins to speak
I'm sorry, I really am. The words-well, you can't-it's just. Well, the thing is, uh....I had to kiss you to speak the same as you!
>Guessing from the voice it's a "she"
>"..."
>She looks around trying not to make any kind of contact with your eyes while blushing
>You clear your throat
>"Well, I WAS going to make breakfast, but since you destroyed all of my cheese and batter.. I suppose it's time to go to the grocery store"
>A little tick tock from from your internal brain started to go off until you realized
>"Oh, crud! You can talk?! B-BU-BUT!...mph mph MMMph"
>Her horn glows again and your mouth suddenly shuts. p