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  1. 1.Overall Good, Like the use of a pose. it isn’t just the basic habbo figure.
  2. Outfit works well together.
  3. The eyes are BAD they stand out for the wrong reasons. they are too bright and it doesn’t fit in with the rest of the image.
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  6. 2. Very cute outfit. I LOVE the bow! Could of been a little more adventurous with the outfit choice.
  7. There is no edits too the head shot. and the lipstick on the first image is too light and looks wrong.
  8. the make up needs to be darker.
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  10. 3. Are you a drug addict? those eyes are just off. get some sleep. The outfit is overall good although
  11. the shoes don’t match the outfit. maybe black/grey shoes would work better.
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  13. 4. ok, NO NO NO! the first image is too zoomed out, I’m distracted by the background instead of focusing on the model. The outfit is very similar too model 2, lets have more creativity please.
  14. second photo= The smile is awful. Hi chucky.
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  16. 5.The outfit isn’t placed on the model correctly, you can tell its too big. also is that mud on her face?
  17. Second image is very similar too the first, try a different angle in future. and wipe that dirt off your face.
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