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rosalinda316

Darkest_Hour plot deny

Jul 6th, 2015
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  1. Hello rosalinda316 here, I'll be reviewing your plot today.
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  3. Terrain: I like the mixed colors in your terrain and can only suggest maybe making a few more hills and valleys, especially in the flat section. You should also work on making the terrain around your waterfall more realistic. You should also add depth to your lake (making it dip down with varied blocks mixed into the stone).
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  5. Structure: Your house is good, although your roof is a bit odd. Maybe consider using a different style of roof?
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  7. Organics: Your trees could use some work too. Look up plutouthere on youtube for great tutorials. Mostly right now your trees appear to have nice trunks but no real branch systems, just blobs of leaves.
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  9. Good luck on your next submission!
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