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  1. Neue Green Chapter 14:
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  3. Note: As always, I kept honorifics due to consistency with the previous chapters, though I am not a fan of them. Additionally, English is not my first language. Feel free to correct inconsistencies or phrasing that sounds "iffy"
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  5. Big Note regarding Chapter: I messed up big time in my previous translation. The name of the "mastermind" asshole reporter is "Akutoku". This should be fixed for chapter 13 and I am sorry for that slight (I was in a hurry to finish). That said, IIRC it only affected the side note at the end of the chapter).
  6. With that out of the way, let's crack on.
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  8. Page 1:
  9. 1-0 (left) The true nature of the dark gossip surrounding the idols...
  10. 1-1 This Akutoku reporter is known for targeting idols just before he writes an article about them being involved in a scandal.
  11. 1-2 His specialty is blowing incidents out of proportion via fabrications
  12. 1-3 He's well-known and hated amongst idols for his reputation
  13. 1-4 Be careful, Ryou. If you show him an opening I have no idea what kind of hoax he'll create about you
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  15. Page 2:
  16. 2-0 These two have no tact
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  18. Page 3:
  19. 3-1 You mean the infamous Akutoku?
  20. You've been working together with that bastard?
  21. 3-2 You're just telling us this so we keep our mouths shut about your hidden room, aren't you?
  22. 3-3 Hiih! No! I'm really not! It's just...
  23. 3-4 I was supposed to meet him today so...
  24. 3-5 He may have even arrived by now...
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  26. Page 4:
  27. 4-1 He's there! He really was there!
  28. 4-2 He was probably recording our conversation! All of it!
  29. 4-3 Wh- What did you say!?
  30. 4-4 If we don't catch him here and now I have no idea what kind of story he'll spin all of this into...!!
  31. 4-5 That guess is quite right...
  32. 4-6 However,
  33. 4-7 You don't get into this business unless you know how to make a swift escape...
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  35. Page 5:
  36. 5-1 However, it seems I have an interesting new story to write about
  37. 5-2 Hehe...
  38. 5-3 Kyah..!
  39. 5-4 Eh..
  40. 5-6 Seriously
  41. 5-7 You should know that this is no track & field stadium
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  43. Page 6:
  44. 6-1 "Running in the hallways forbidden"
  45. 6-2 Agh..! Let me..
  46. 6-3 Just let me go...!!
  47. 6-4 That I cannot do.
  48. 6-5 Get him secluded until further notice, he's under suspicion of trespassing
  49. Make sure to carefully check all of his belongings
  50. 6-6 Yes!
  51. 6-7 Why is Takeda-san...?
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  53. Page 7:
  54. 7-1 Why... well, that should be my line
  55. Why were you both chasing after him?
  56. 7-2 Has he harmed you in some way?
  57. 7-3 Ah... yeah...
  58. 7-4 It's not like I'm interested in gossip, however
  59. Lately, there's been something bothering me
  60. 7-5 To the point I could not ignore it. I had to check up on it.
  61. 7-6 That reporter has been working together with one of our directors after reaching an understanding
  62. 7-7 They've been taking advantage of the problems we've had here lately
  63. 7-8 And making profit in the process.
  64. 7-9 That said, you have no business meddling with this affair
  65. Got it?
  66. 7-10 Right
  67. 7-11 Takeda-san! Thank you so much! You saved us there...!
  68. 7-12 If he'd gotten away who knows what kind of things he'd have written about us...
  69. 7-13 ...
  70. 7-14 Speaking of which
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  72. Page 8
  73. 8-1 I've also been doing some investigation on your persona and I've heard quite a few tales
  74. 8-2 Yumeko Sakurai-kun, you
  75. 8-3 Up until now, in order to win, you've been attacking your rival idols
  76. and used them as stepping stones towards your goals
  77. 8-4 Huh...
  78. 8-5 Th- That is...
  79. 8-6 I'm sorry.
  80. 8-7 But I cannot acknowledge someone using that kind of foul play to win
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  82. Page 9:
  83. 9-1 There is no way I could ever invite you on to Old Whistle
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  85. Page 10:
  86. 10-1 (small) No...
  87. 10-2 (small) That can't...
  88. 10-3 ...Wa-
  89. 10-4 Wait a second!
  90. 10-5 Even if her rivals were... that would not necessarily mean it was Yumeko-chan...!
  91. 10-6 Enough with this.
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  93. Page 11:
  94. 11-1 Yumeko-cha...
  95. 11-2 Please excuse me!!
  96. 11-3 (small) *panting sounds* Haa...
  97. 11-4 (small) Yume...
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  99. Page 12:
  100. 12-1 Get away!!
  101. 12-2 Why...
  102. 12-3 I've been going in a straight line to victory all this time
  103. 12-4 To win I had to deal with dozens and hundreds of other girls...
  104. I desperately... desperately gave everything I had and yet
  105. 12-5 All of the things I've done... have they been that horrible...?
  106. 12-6 Were they really that unfair...?
  107. I didn't actually steal anything from them...
  108. 12-7 Was it really...
  109. 12-8 that unfair...?
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  111. Page 13:
  112. 13-1 Let me wipe your tears
  113. 13-2 Stop
  114. 13-3 Don't touch me!
  115. 13-4 What does it mean to you...
  116. 13-5 I don't need your kindness...
  117. 13-6 Everyone around you is a top idol
  118. Do you know how frustrating it is to see them pass their auditions one after another...
  119. 13-7 You have been blessed with famous costars...
  120. 13-8 You are
  121. 13-9 The greatest coward I have ever met...
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  123. Page 14:
  124. 14-1 It's over...
  125. 14-2 I have no reason to continue as an idol.
  126. 14-3 I have no need...
  127. 14-4 (background) Wait...
  128. 14-5 For dreams
  129. 14-6 If I didn't have those emotions
  130. 14-7 (background) Don't...
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  132. Page 15:
  133. 15-1 Dreams are something
  134. 15-2 That should not
  135. 15-3 Yumeko-chan!!
  136. 15-4 Let go!
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  138. Page 16:
  139. 16-1 Listen!!
  140. 16-2 I'll go change his mind
  141. I'll talk it over with Takeda-san!
  142. 16-3 I won't let your dream just die like that so please!!
  143. 16-4 Don't tell me you are going to abandon it like that!
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  145. Page 18:
  146. 18-1 --urts..
  147. 18-2 You're hurting me...
  148. 18-3 Ah!
  149. 18-4 Sorry...
  150. 18-5 Please...
  151. 18-6 Please give me some time...
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  153. Page 19:
  154. 19-1 To think it over... you say?
  155. 19-2 I believe that Yumeko-chan's abilities are genuine
  156. 19-3 You can't just disregard all of her effort like that...
  157. 19-4 She would not let herself lose until her dream of being invited on to Old Whistle was granted.
  158. 19-5 She could not have gotten this far only by cheating
  159. 19-6 All of her efforts and talents...
  160. 19-7 I am aware of them
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  162. Page 20:
  163. 20-1 "In order to fulfill one's own dreams, one must act selfishly"
  164. True enough, people who aim high tend to think that way
  165. 20-2 And that they need to do whatever it takes to get there
  166. 20-3 Then...!
  167. 20-4 However, to go as far as to harm people
  168. 20-5 I can't imagine anyone more despicable
  169. 20-6 But let's assume that I reconsider
  170. 20-7 It would not change a thing about the people who have already been hurt
  171. 20-8 The "Old Whistle" is a program where people's hearts are appeased through music
  172. 20-9 And I would not want people to put up with a song based on deceit
  173. 20-10 Something you of all people
  174. 20-11 Should be quite familiar with, right?
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  176. Page 21:
  177. 21-1 Akizuki-kun you are...
  178. 21-2 a guy, aren't you?
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  180. Page 22:
  181. 22-1 ...You're right
  182. 22-2 Hoho, you just admitted it straight on.
  183. 22-3 That's quite gallant on your part
  184. 22-4 How and when did you...?
  185. 22-5 The first time I saw you on TV actually
  186. Your body proportions and your stamina in contrast with your voice tonality always felt odd to me
  187. 22-6 Not to mention your body build didn't feel like it belonged to a girl...
  188. You had a unique constitution and were unusually shy about showing off for your age
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  190. Page 23:
  191. 23-1 Why do you pose as a girl?
  192. 23-2 Do you enjoy deceiving everyone?
  193. 23-3 That's not it!
  194. 23-4 It was... an idea the company president came up with...
  195. That I should tackle this as a girl...
  196. 23-5 What I truly wanted, was to debut as a male idol...
  197. 23-6 So you genuinely want to become a man?
  198. 23-7 Of course!
  199. 23-8 I was promised that if I were to land a hit as a female idol, I would be allowed to then do so as a guy...
  200. 23-9 But it seems to me that you've already become a top idol.
  201. 23-10 Yet you have continued working as a female.
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  203. Page 24:
  204. 24-1 Why aren't you chasing your own dreams?
  205. 24-2 That's because..
  206. The president and... all the fans who have been cheering for me until now...
  207. 24-3 I feel like... I would be betraying them...
  208. 24-4 So you are going to live on for the rest of your life as a girl for their sake?
  209. 24-5 Th-
  210. 24-6 That's not...
  211. 24-7 If you are unable chase your own dreams
  212. 24-8 Your attempts to defend the dreams of someone else
  213. feel forced and unnatural
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  215. Page 25:
  216. 25-1 Before I worry about someone else's dreams
  217. I should first start with my own...
  218. 25-2 Is that what you are trying to tell me?
  219. 25-3 Exactly
  220. 25-4 If you can't do that then there is no way you'll be able to convince anyone else
  221. 25-5 Understood
  222. 25-6 I will have a chat with my president.
  223. 25-7 About what I need to do...
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  225. Page 26:
  226. 26-1 It's all been building up to this moment
  227. 26-2 It's time to drop the pretense and acknowledge what my dream was from the beginning.
  228. 26-3 I'll take back my dream
  229. 26-4 Together with Yumeko-chan's dream!!
  230. 26-5 (overlay) The last step he's been hiding from!
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