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That_girl77 review 3

Jul 10th, 2015
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  1. Aloha, my name is Swurlin and today I will be reviewing your plot!
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  3. I cant rank you up just yet, but trust me you are close!
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  5. Try make the trees a little more different than each other, trees in real life are random and have branches and leaves in random places, they are not confined to a certain style. Try including branches and more variation to spice them up a bit.
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  7. Your roof looks a little weird too, try making it more continuous instead of it randomly dipping in and out, the style you are going for looks nice, but just smooth it out and it will look good!
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  9. Good luck and if you have any questions or need more help feel free to contact either me in game or one of the other build team members or moderators, happy building!
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