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->The sun in shining over Vale's town square today as people rush back and forth across a wide courtyard lined with shops of every variety.
+>The sun in shining over Vale's town square as people rush back and forth across a wide courtyard lined with shops of every variety.
 >A fussy girl is being dragged through the crowd by her hand towards a shop in the corner of the courtyard.
-"No, Daddy! I don't want to go! I wanna go to the Velvet Boutique and talk to the people there! This isn't fair!"
+"No, Daddy! I don't want to go! I wanna go back to the Velvet Boutique and talk to the people there! This isn't fair!"
 >The father stops and looks over his shoulder at the small child trying to pull away from his grasp and heaves a sigh.
->He turns around and kneels down to her level. The massive bags under his eyes underlie a sense of immense exhaustion as he looks at his fidgety little girl.
+>He turns around and kneels down to her level. The massive bags under his eyes underlie a sense of immense exhaustion as he looks at his fidgety daughter.
-"Coco.. You need to do this just to humor me... You just got accepted to Signal! That's a pretty bid deal, Kiddo. And if you're going to go, then this is something you should think about. Just go in with me for a few minutes..?"
+"Coco.. You just need to humor me... You just got accepted to Signal! That's a pretty bid deal, Kiddo. And if you're going to go, then this is something you should think about. Just go in with me for a few minutes..?"
 >Coco purses her lips and looks away from her father.
-"I don't want to go to Signal! I only got in because of you. I don't want to be a hunter! Why can't I just wear nice clothes?"
+"I don't even want to go to Signal! I only got in because of you. I never said I wanted to be a huntress!
 >The man shifts a little from one side to another.
 "I might have helped a little.. But the teachers told me that they saw a lot of potential when they talked to you. You managed to impress them quite a bit despite being so against wanting to go. And besides.. Being a huntress is a big important job, and some really cool people besides your dad trained to be one!"
 >Coco glares over her sunglasses at her father. Giving a confusing angry puppy dog look.
 "Okay, kiddo, I'll make a deal with you. Come in with me for five minutes. If you behave then i'll take you back to the shop. Sound fair?"
 >The little girl crosses her arms and looks away.
 "Fine..."
 >Coco and her father start walking towards the back corner of the square.
 "Here we are!"
->Massive lettering in the window reads "Vale Arms and Ammunition: The diamond standard for protection."
+>The two approach a small brick front store with a purple awning.
 >Massive lettering in the crystal clear window reads "Vale Arms and Ammunition: The diamond standard for protection."
->The second Coco enters the store, she can't help but grimace as she looks at the firearms mounted on the walls.
+
 >The second Coco enters the store she can't help but grimace as she looks at the firearms mounted on the walls.
 >Her attention then moves to the glass display cases holding hundreds of handguns.
 >Drab and muted colors everywhere: dirty grays and dingy browns as far as the eye can see.
-"Mr. Adel! Welcome back. It's been quite a while. What bring you around today?"
+
 "Mr. Adel! Welcome back. It's been quite a while. What brings you around today?"
-"Afternoon, This one just got accepted into Signal. And we just stopped by so she would start thinking of ideas for weapon. Say hi, Coco."
+
 "Afternoon! This one just got accepted into Signal. And we just stopped to see if anything catches her eye. Say hi, Coco."
 >He looks down to Coco and smiles.
 "Well congratulations. You must be very proud of yourself."
 >Coco crosses her arms and sneers, turning away from the shop keep.
->Coco is pulls away from the shop keep and looks over the entire collection.
+
 >Coco is guided away from the shop keep and to looks over his collection.
 >Shotguns, swords, rifles, a huge variety of pole arms, the shop appeared to have it all.
->The little girl heaves a disappointed sigh.
+
 >She eventually just gives up and just looks towards the ground in hopes of fooling her dad into thinking she's looking.
 >Was this the kind of stuff she'd have to use if she was a huntress?
 "See anything you like, Kiddo?"
 >Coco glares back at her father, disapproving of his forced upbeat tone.
 "Alright Coco.. Lets get out of here. Just let me buy something."
 >Mr. Adel grabs a few boxes of ammo from a shelf and approaches the shopkeeper again.
 "That's all, Mr. Adel? You couldn't find anything for Little Missy over here?"
 "Not today. We were just here in hopes that she gets a few ideas for weapons if she goes to Signal.
 "Is that so?"
 >The shop keep looks down to Coco and gives her a friendly look.
 "Why is everything you have in here so ugly!?"
 >That friendly look turns immediately to surprise.
->Mr. Adel forces his lips into a tight smile as he looks over to the shop keep who looks at him awkwardly.
+
 >Mr. Adel forces his lips into a tight smile as he looks over to the shop keep who looks back at him awkwardly.
 >The shop keep pauses for a second and looks down at the pouting Coco.
 "So.. You're looking for something more... Flashy and stylish?"
-"huh.. Wait here for a moment. I think I have something in mind.
+
 "Huh.. Wait here for a moment. I think I have something in mind.
 >The Shopkeep walks to the other end of the display case and picks up the phone.
 >Coco's father immediately turns to Coco and kneels back down to her level and angrily whispers to her.
 "Coco! What were you thinking? I don't care if you're less than thrilled to be here. That's no excuse to be so rude!"
 "I don't care! I never wanted to come here. And I can't help it if everything he sells looks so ugly.."
-"Well you can forget going to La-"
+
 "Well you can forget going back to-"
 >He hears the shop keep hangs up the phone and start back towards him. Stopping him mid-sentence as he straightens himself and faces the keep.
 "I'm so sorry.. She's still a little-"
 "Please. Don't worry about it."
 >He turns to Coco and smirks slightly.
 "You're looking for something more.. fashionable, right? Why don't you come back here with me?"
 >The shopkeeper opens the door to behind the counter and gestures for Coco and her father to come to the back.
 >Mr. Adel follow the shop keep to the back of the store.
 >Machining equipment, work benches, drawing boards, and a cork few cork boards line the walls.
 "When did you start doing custom orders? You never mentioned having a mod shop back here.
-"Oh. the vast majority of this stuff isn't mine."
+
 "Oh the vast majority of this stuff isn't mine."
 >He inserts the key in the slot, unlocks the door to what sounds like a tune of 9 locks with the single key, and pulls the door open.
 "It's my wife's. Now lets find out if this stuff is more your style."
 >Coco peers into the room and slowly enters.
 >Her eyes light up in glee as she enters the room and sees what's inside.
 >The walls are lined with intricate and beautifully colored weapons.
 >She rushes over to a white and sky blue pike. Hand-done engravings run up the pole and onto the blade.
->A pair of dark green and brown gauntlets with runes carved around the wrist.
+
 >A pair of dark green and brown gauntlets with runes carved around the wrist and knuckles
 >Suddenly all Coco can thing of is how each weapon can go with various clothes from her incredibly diverse wardrobe.
 >Coco peers upward and her mind goes completely blank.
 >Mounted to the wall above her is a full sized Machine gun.
->The Engraving on the side reads "From Lana with love," with a pair of lips next to it.
+
 >The Engraving on the side reads "From Lana, with love," with a pair of lips next to it.
 "Yeah.. She made that one just for me. It's gorgeous isn't it?"
 >Coco turns around and loops at the man with amazement and nods.
 >Footsteps echo from the hallway leading to the door, and someone shouts something.
 "It's a damn shame it hasn't seen the light of day in months!!"
 >A feminine figure approaches the room and leans against the doorway.
 >Coco stares at the doorway in amazement.
 >A pair of red high heels with a gold broach in the front.
 >Hip-hugging black pencil skirt.
-"M-M-Miss Lana..?"
+
 "M-M-Miss Velveteen?..?"
-She walks over to Coco with a friendly smile, looking down to her.
+
 She walks over to Coco with a friendly smile, looking down to her.
 "Did you.. Really make all of these?"
 >The beauty nods
 "But.. How..? I thought you only did clothing!"
 "I learned when I was training to be a Huntress.
 "YOU were a huntress?! But.. I thought.."
 >Lana cocks her brow and smiles a little wider.
 "That clothes was all I never did? Not at all."
 >Coco looks across the room, still unable to take in all the masterpieces surrounding her.
 "Listen Coco, I used to be a lot like you once. All I wanted was model and live life in the limelight. Go to boutiques and shop. Talk with the owners about the newest trends. And when I was forced to Signal, I was miserable.
 >The little girl looks up to her, awestruck.
 "How though? What'd you do to make it better?"
-"I became determined to make the best of it. When I met a certain boy who had a skill for invention and smithing things started turning around. I learned how to design weapons and fight grimm with elegance. After I graduated, we both opened shop to sell our wares."
+
 "I became determined to make the best of it. When I met a certain boy who had a skill for invention and smithing things started turning around. I learned how to design weapons and fight grimm with elegance. After we graduated and spent a few years as a professional huntress, we both opened shop to sell our wares."
 >Coco takes a moment to pick her jaw up from the ground and start looks down, nervous.
 "And.. Do you think.. I could ever be like you?"
-"When you come into my shop, you radiate boundless confidence in yourself. If you bring that same unyielding confidence to being a huntress, I have no doubt that you can.
+
->Coco's eyes are alight with happiness as the huntress rights herself.
+"When you come into my shop, you radiate boundless confidence in yourself. If you bring that same unyielding confidence to being a huntress, I have no doubt that you can."
 >Coco's eyes are alight with happiness as the huntress rights herself.
 >