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 Manga Time Kirara Magica
 Volume 4 Serial
 
 Homura's Revenge #4
 by Golden Pe Done
 
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-* Sayaka will be a magical girl-!?
+
 ---1---
 
 * Sayaka is a magical girl-!?
 
 :  You can really grant any wish, right...?
 :  Rest assured, your prayer will be heard.
 :  I can even avenge Mami-san too?
 :  Revenge?
 
-:  ... You'll soon know.
+
 :  But you mean Akemi Homura?  That, I don't know.
 
 :  ... You'll know soon.
-Like the one I admire
+
-There's no way I would regret this.
+
 
 There's No Way I'd Regret This-
 Just like the one I admire.
 
 Homura's Revenge
 Mahou Shoujo Madoka Magica
 Golde Pe Done
 #4
 
 ---3---
 
 :  Mami-san...
 
 :  Madoka?
 
 :  If you don't hurry up and eat, you'll be late to school.
 
-:  Homura-chan is probably used to this already...
+
 
 :  - This isn't as painful as the first time.
 :  Homura-chan is probably used to this by now...
 
 ---4---
 
 :  ...
 
 :  It's all cause of her...
-:  If that transfer student didn't show up suddenly, Mami-san won't have died.
+
 :  Eh?
 
 :  If that transfer student didn't show up all the sudden, Mami-san won't be dead.
-:  No.
+
 ---5---
 
 :  No
 
 :  That's not true!
 :  Sayaka-chan!!
 
-:  Mami-san would have defeated that Witch!
+
 
 :  If she... didn't just barge in.
-:  Homura-chan wanted to save Mami-san...
+:  Mami-san would have beaten that Witch!
 
-:  But her interference was one of the reasons that Mami-san lost.
+
 :  Homura-chan tried to save her...
 
 :  But her interference was one of the reasons for Mami's defeat.
 
 :  What!
 
-:  Homura-chan tried really hard to save Mami-san!!
+
 
-:  How do you know, Madoka?
+
-:  She's just another magical girl that cares only about the Grief Seeds!?
+:  Homura-chan tried really hard to help Mami-san!!
 
 :  How do you know that, Madoka?
 :  She's just another magical girl that only cares of Grief Seeds!?
 
 :  No!
 :  Homura-chan...
 
 --  No one will believe the future
 No one can accept the future--
 :  Homura-chan...
 
 
 :  Madoka?
-:  That's...
+
 ---7---
 
-:  The bell rang.  You coming?
+:  Let's...
 :  stop for now.
 
 :  The bell's ringing.  You coming?
 :  ... Yes
 
 ---8---
 
 : ...
 :  Mami Tomoe...
-:  I already given up on everyone except Madoka.
+
 --9---
-:  There's no way it would work...
+
 :  I given up on everyone but Madoka.
 :  Yet, here I am, suddenly trying to save everyone.
 :  It could never work...
-:  So you're here.
+
 ---10---
 
-:  From what I remember, your relationship with Mami Tomoe wasn't so rosy last time.
+: So here you are.
 
-:  You have relived this past months many times.
+
 :  From what I knew, your relationship with Mami Tomoe wasn't so rosy last time.
 
 :  But you have relived this past months many times already.
 :  A lot must have happened, so I am not too suprised.
 
 :  What do you want?
-:  I just thought how cruel it is to be Kaname Madoka.
+
 ---11---
-:  You try, again and again
+
-:  Yet you never get close to your wish of "save Madoka."
+:  I just thought how cruel must it be for Kaname Madoka.
 
 :  You tried, again and again.
-:  How many attempts will you allow Madoka to suffer through, I wonder?
+:  Yet you never get closer to your wish to protect Madoka.
-:  But will she be as strong as you?
+
 
-:  Quiet
+:  How many attempts will you let Madoka to suffer, I wonder?
 :  Will she stay strong like you?
 
 :  That's enough!
 
 ---12---
-:  I'll be going now.  It'll be waste to get this body filled with holes.
+
 :  I request that you don't fire a gun in this quiet neighborhood.  It only invites trouble.
-:  ... To be honest, I also want to save Mami Tomoe.
+
 :  I'm going now.  It'll be waste to get this body filled with holes.
 
 :  ... To be honest, I also wanted to save Mami.
 
 :  Homura-chan?
 
 ---13---
 
 :  Madoka...
 
-:  Why did you visit Mami-san's apartment?
+
 :  Yes
 
 :  Why did you went to Mami-san's apartment?
 :  I was thinking... about before.
 
 :  ...
 
-:  We weren't able to save her.
+
 :  Eh?
 
 :  We couldn't save her.
 :  It was my fault.
 
 ---14---
 
-:  If you keep trying
+
--- How many attempts will you allow Madoka to suffer through?
+
-:  You will definitely save Mami-san!!
+
 :  And if you keep trying
-:  Then you will save Sayaka-chan
+-- How many attempts will you allow Madoka to suffer?
-: And Kyouko-chan too!
+:  You can definitely save Mami-san!!
 
-Ah!
+:  And you will save Sayaka-chan
 : Kyouko-chan too!
 
-:  Oh no!!  If it's the same as before, she'll be contracting today.
+
-:  We got to find her!
+
 :  Oh no!!  last time around, she'll be contracting today.
 :  We need to find her!
 
 :  Homura-chan!!  Wait!
-:  Sayaka-chan was suppose to come and save Hitomi-chan and I.
+
 :  If that Witch attacks Hitomi-chan tonight...
 :  Sayaka-chan was supposed to save Hitomi-chan and I.
 
-:  .. Oh!!
+
 
-:  Homura-chan, go and save Hitomi-chan.
+:  .. Ah!!
 
 :  Homura-chan, go save Hitomi-chan.
 :  I'll take care of Sayaka-chan!!
 
 :  But..
-:  So let me handle it.
+
 :  Besides, I don't think Sayaka-chan really trust you right now.
-:  Understood.  I'll reach Suzuki Hitomi.
+:  So, please, let me handle it.
-:  Oh!
+
 :  Understood.  I'll find Suzuki Hitomi.
 :  Em!
 
 ---16---
 
 ---17---
 
 ---18---
 
 :  Next...
 
 :  Beat this
 :  Witch here
 
 ---19---
 
 :  --Sayaka-chan
 
 :  I will definitely make it--
 
 ---20---
 
 :  - Now
-: Make no more mistakes---
+
 ---21---
 
 :  I will
 :  make no mistakes---
 
-:  Bastard!!
+
 
 :  It dodged!
 
-:  Almost as if she can predict my every movement...
+:  Grr!!
 
 ---23---
-:  Damn...
+
 :  Almost like it can predict my every move...
 :  How annoying
 
-:  Last one left
+:  Pssh...
 
 ---24---
 
 :  Only one left
 :  The Witch...
 
 ---25---
 
 :  What!?
 
 Another one of...
-Ha!
+
 
 ---26---
 
 ---27---
-:  Didn't make it
+
 :  Madoka...
 :  Didn't make it in time.
 
-----27---
+
 
-:  ... Why did you save me?
+----29---
-:  Nobody's saving you!  I'm just here to take down an evil Witch.
+
 :  ... Why did you help me?
 :  Who's helping you!  I'm just here after an evil Witch.
-:  However!
+
 :  Unlike you, I don't wait until someone weaken the Witch in battle first.
 :  Moreover!
 :  I'll never forgive you!!
 
 ---30---
 
-:  Ma...!
+
-:  Doka!?
+
 :  Ma-!
 :  MaDoka!?
-:  You already...
+
 :  Sayaka-chan, this costume...
----29---
+:  You are a magical girl...
 
 ---31---
-:  Moreover...
+
 :  Madoka, why are you even here?
 :  Even more...
 
-:  Why are you on her side..
+
 
 :  Are you on her side..
- ---30---
+
 
-:  Since Madoka's here, I'll stand down tonight.  But don't think that I consider you a magical girl of Mitakihara City!!
+ ---32---
 
 :  Since Madoka's here, I'll stand down for now.  But don't think that I'll let you be the magical girl of Mitakihara City!!
 
 :  Let's go, Madoka.
 
 :  ...
 
 :  Wait, Sayaka-chan!
 
 
-:  Oh
+---33---
 
 :  Em
 :  This is getting interesting.
-:  She's Mami's rival?
+
 :  That black-hair girl
 :  Is Mami's rival?
 
 :  Calling her a rival isn't incorrect.
-:  Still, I didn't expect you to come.  I thought you and Mami didnt get along.  To think you would come to avenge her.
+
-:  Ha!  Not at all!!
+
 :  Still, I didn't expect you to come.  I thought you and Mami didnt get along.  To think you would even come to avenge her.
-----32---
+:  Ha!  Not even!!
 
 ----34---
 
-:  I was hoping to beat and take over her territory some day.
+
 :  Just?
-:  But it's pointless if someone did it already.
+:  I was hoping to beat her and take over her territory one day.
 
 :  But that's pointless if someone already done it.
 
 :  Oh...  Regardless, Akemi Homura isn't an easy magical girl to deal with.
-:  Heh!  Great!!
+
-:  At least I didn't rush here for nothing!
+
 :  Hah!  Great!!
 :  At least I didn't rush over here for nothing!
 
 *  Vol.5 To Be Continued