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 Key:THEKING 242
 RACE:SAIYAN
 TOPIC:Oozaru transformation
 
           In the mist's of a foggy afternoon standing proudly Looking at the sun going down in the west.
-          He stood there patiently waiting for the moon to arise from the east.As it arised striking his tail and eye's
+          He stood there patiently waiting for the moon to arise from the east.As it raised striking his tail and eye's
           all that could be felt was the energy of the moon surging within him he know what was about to happen.
 
-          This man who is named Sernac was an elite saiyan of a high caliber all he wanted was to fully tame the beast
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-          inside him the almighty oozaru and make his family proud!
+          This man who is named Sernak was an elite saiyan of a high caliber all he wanted was to fully tame the beast
           inside him the almighty Oozaru and make his family proud!Tonight would be the end of his two day ceremony
           to master his inner beast.It had begun the transformation had started his greatest and final challenge.
 
           It was ten when the moon was at it brightest,at first there wasn't any change at all but within the minute
           he started to grow long lush brown hair all over his body covering him completely in hair{Bigfoot}.
           While's his eye's were becoming blood shot red.
           Then came the enormous growths-pert  that came directly after Transforming his body to to height's
           that would rival the giant's themselves!
 
           While's his muscle growth rapidly increased boosting his strength Exponentially but also at the cost
           off slowing him down.His jaw rearranging itself to be a large snout about three inches long.Forming
           Razor-sharp teeth the size of sword's This form truly was great.As it had to be he saiyan race was
           truly fighting  enemies from within themselves.With only the desire to kill,plunder and destroy !
 
           It was a physiological fight over the brain but if he could defeat it he would be branded as
           a true elitist as only the elite could control there inner beasts.For his whole life was leaning on this one
           Moment.But as it was he defeated it subconsciously.
 
           He knew this because of his speech he still had the sense and control to speak English and not the monkey
           talk.He had used the memories of his friend and family to motivate and help him achieve his victory
           He had done it this was one of the most important moment in his life now all he had to do was go to the city
           And show everyone that he had finally conquered it!