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- <Boilerplate> well actually you said you'll provide the lore not send actually
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Yeah
- <Boilerplate> Well...what is the lore of this Undead Biker?
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Okay
- <SerCorbieGeisha> So what I've come up with so far is
- <SerCorbieGeisha> There is an entity called the Technician
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Who goes around looking for dead murderers
- <SerCorbieGeisha> And revives them into monsters
- <SerCorbieGeisha> They awlays come back non-human
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Like Jason Vorhees being a giant decomposed person
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Or they can become like
- <SerCorbieGeisha> A Slenderman-ish figure with unnaturally long limbs
- <SerCorbieGeisha> The undead biker was involved in crime once and had one of those monsters set upon them
- <SerCorbieGeisha> And she survived
- <SerCorbieGeisha> The Technician appeared and took back that monster, to revive it. She followed and ended up learning the Technician's craft
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Which is flesh crafting
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Think Tzimisce unique discipline
- <SerCorbieGeisha> She got discovered but the Technician let her escape
- <Boilerplate> So how is Undead Biker Undead then? Did the Technician revie her or did revive herself?
- <Boilerplate> *how did
- <Boilerplate> I mean how did she originally died if she's undead?
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Then she uses her power to alter herself. She's transgendered and got into crime because of a profound anger and because she was poor and needed a way to start her transition
- <SerCorbieGeisha> And she became a serial killer
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Well
- <SerCorbieGeisha> She was already a bit of a killer
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Her victims at first were people who were going to victimise her in the first place
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Then she started killing whoever she thought was bad
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Her MO was to extract the face
- <SerCorbieGeisha> So that people would know who it was she killed
- <SerCorbieGeisha> The rest of the body, anything could happen
- <SerCorbieGeisha> She also wears a skull mask made of bone, which she attaches to her skin with her powers
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Then one day
- <SerCorbieGeisha> She got involved with a serial killer who goes around murdering trans women
- <SerCorbieGeisha> She hunted him down and slaughtered him
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Then the Technician came and revived him
- <SerCorbieGeisha> So he came back to kill her
- <SerCorbieGeisha> The Technician brought her back too
- <SerCorbieGeisha> She thoguht she was done for
- <SerCorbieGeisha> But the Technician just let her go and dumped a few corpses on her
- <SerCorbieGeisha> As if they're challenging her
- <SerCorbieGeisha> To push the limits of her supernatural skill
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Kind of like a "Let's see how your work compares to mine" thing
- <SerCorbieGeisha> So she rebuild herself with the parts taken from the corpses
- <SerCorbieGeisha> ANd also turns herself into a hulking figure, over 7 foot tall and shit
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Make a coat out of human skin
- <Boilerplate> Or a leather jacket made out of human skin?
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Yeah
- <Boilerplate> Talk about badass there
- <SerCorbieGeisha> And so she goes for a final showdown
- <SerCorbieGeisha> She also ends up crafting a motorcycle out of flesh and bone
- <SerCorbieGeisha> So basically
- <SerCorbieGeisha> It's a flesh abomination used as a mount
- <Boilerplate> I wonder if she has any guns like a sawed off shotgun or such?
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Her signature weapons are a regular bladed weapon and her left arm which is modified into a monstrous weapon
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Which she can undo at anytime
- <SerCorbieGeisha> And can rebuild if she has the parts
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Or can turn them into something else
- <SerCorbieGeisha> She's not above using guns though
- <SerCorbieGeisha> But she won't go for instant kills
- <SerCorbieGeisha> So if she has a shotgun
- <SerCorbieGeisha> She'll like
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Blow off someone's knees
- <SerCorbieGeisha> And allow them a chance to flee
- <SerCorbieGeisha> But they don't actually have a chance
- <SerCorbieGeisha> She just wants them to have hope
- <SerCorbieGeisha> So she can crush them
- <Boilerplate> ALso does she have Tranquil fury, or Deadpin Snarkish that throws out one liners, or is she irate?
- <SerCorbieGeisha> I have no idea what Tranquil Fury is
- <Boilerplate> http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/TranquilFury
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Pretty much
- <Boilerplate> Well Irate Protagonists have already been tried with Asura's Wrath, God of War, and such and they simply don't work because their obnioxious
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Think Jason Vorhees
- <Boilerplate> So she doesn't really speak actually
- <SerCorbieGeisha> She does
- <SerCorbieGeisha> But when she works, she doesn't speak
- <SerCorbieGeisha> She's not a killer 100% of the time
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Also not necesaarily 7 foot tall all the time
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Flesh crafitng means she can always change her looks
- <Boilerplate> Although I wonder if she's like Caleb from Blood: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tT-lpU19lXM
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Butr she will always be a 7 foot tall skull-faced killing machine because she wants everyone to attribute her murders to her
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Who is Caleb?
- <Boilerplate> He's the protagonist from a 1997 FPS game called "Blood"
- <Boilerplate> http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Blood_%28video_game%29
- <Boilerplate> http://blood.wiki-site.com/index.php/Caleb
- <Boilerplate> http://www.blood-wiki.org/index.php/Caleb
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Her killing method is best described as forcing her victims into a game of cat and mouse
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Where she is the cat
- <SerCorbieGeisha> And she's not afraid of being seen by the public
- <SerCorbieGeisha> She wants to torture her victim over a period of time
- <SerCorbieGeisha> And then when the time feels right, rip off their face
- <Boilerplate> unlike Kindred from Vampire: The Masquerade who to follow the Masqeurade....I remember it had something to do with Christian over/undetones for the reason why they hide their existence but you never explained why which got me confused.
- <Boilerplate> Since we were talking about Vampires in school and I pointed that Vampires can't go to school because it would reveal their existence and plus it's day time.
- <Boilerplate> Or basically the "Humans must never know our existence"
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Well, Dracula walked around Picadilly Circus in the day
- <Boilerplate> Well I notice though that the enitire "Burn in Sunlight" came from Mernu's Nosferatu
- <Boilerplate> which is entirely a 20th century invention
- <Boilerplate> Which is rather the biggest faults with V:tM and V:tR actually
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Yes
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Well, I wouldn't say it's a fault
- * Ozaline (~chatzilla@50.93.122.246) has joined
- <Boilerplate> But rather problematic?
- <SerCorbieGeisha> I don't think undead monsters dying in sunlight is a problematic thing
- <Boilerplate> Of course maybe it can be impraticacle though if you think about it which is why the Vampires from V:TM are stuck in the cities
- <Boilerplate> and they cannot travel in open areas while Werewolves did that
- <Boilerplate> For example in the 19th century line, there was Victorian era Vampire and Werewolf The Wild West
- <Boilerplate> Which also implies that Vampire Gunslingers do not exist just like Vampire Biker gangs in the modern era (although exist in a way but stuck in the city with Sabbat packs) due to the sun therefore they have to stick to city grounds.
- <Boilerplate> Of course speaking of Dracula...I remember linking to a article here once that Dracula is connected with Dionysus or basically a demonization of him
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Nah, everyone knows that Dracula is Bram Stoker having a nightmare after eating crabs and being really interested in Vlad III
- <Boilerplate> Here's the article: http://www.jasoncolavito.com/1/post/2013/10/on-dracula-and-dionysus.html
- <Boilerplate> I wonder if this article has any crebiblity at all?
- <Boilerplate> Anyway...by the sounds of things, I think this sounds like a film that can only be done in a bigger budget which I think there's only going to be short films or something like which I guess I could stick what is possible to do like making atmispheric horror films based on creepypastas or something.
- <Boilerplate> If I ever take that class or something, we'll see
- <SerCorbieGeisha> Well, Hellraiser isn't an exact translation of Hellbound Heart
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