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  1. Notes about Symphonic Rain.
  2.  
  3. What kind of name is Phorni, and what is she supposed to be? A sprite? A fairy?
  4.  
  5. It makes me think of HEY, LISTEN. HEY, LISTEN.
  6.  
  7. Also, rain is sad. Always. And snow means death. Always
  8.  
  9. The City of Rain. oh boy
  10.  
  11. Also the backgrounds. Are really pretty.
  12.  
  13.  
  14.  
  15. City of Music.
  16.  
  17. Oh. Symphonic. Rain. Ho ho ho
  18.  
  19. Phorni, Torta (Tortinita) and Ari(etta)?
  20.  
  21. This Cordell teacher is pretty amusing.
  22.  
  23. Oh okay, I kind of get it. Fortell. A somewhat play on words, no pun intended. fortepiano is a piano. So it's almost like a magical piano.
  24.  
  25. What are with these names.
  26.  
  27. Torta is pretty cute. damn those childhood friends.
  28.  
  29. [img]http://i.imgur.com/zp04K.png[/img]
  30.  
  31. and yes, again, the backgrounds are really pretty.
  32.  
  33. AHA. I fucking knew it. This voice sounded familiar as fuck. It's Rena and Nagisa , aka Mai Nakahara
  34.  
  35. EDIT:
  36.  
  37. [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/9Qxkd.png[/IMG]
  38.  
  39. Homolust route? Homolust route.
  40.  
  41. On a side note
  42.  
  43. Falsita Fawcett. Interesting character I guess. Voice doesn't sound familiar.
  44. Masumi Asano
  45.  
  46. And Lise. The token quiet shy girl. Okay.
  47.  
  48. Torta is really cute
  49.  
  50. [img]http://i.imgur.com/7zCHN.png[/img]
  51.  
  52. >dilettante
  53.  
  54. what the fuck is this vocabulary in my VN. jesus christ I actually had to look this up.
  55. That, and I just read ameliorate
  56.  
  57. It's like some fucking SAT level shit in here
  58.  
  59. [img]http://i.imgur.com/7kD2k.png[/img]
  60.  
  61. visage. more fancy words. what's wrong with just saying the face
  62.  
  63.  
  64. [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/SKVJz.png[/IMG]
  65.  
  66. There's supposed to be some serious drama in here, plus something "that gave someone proverbial whiplash at the change of pace/setting" or something, but I really can't see where and what kind of twist that would come from. This entire VN just seems kind of "moe" and cute.
  67.  
  68. Though the little music games are fun.
  69.  
  70. So Falsita kind of reminds me of Tomoyo from Clannad. Long silver hair, green eyes, seems to be good at everything, modest, and ex student council or something.
  71.  
  72. released in 2004..
  73.  
  74. oh, I guess clannad was also done in 2004 as well.
  75.  
  76. and... they were released around the same time..
  77.  
  78. oh that's interesting.. that means that Mai Nakahara was voicing the lines for both rolls at probably around the same time then.
  79.  
  80. AGAIN WITH THE BIG WORDS. RECOMPENSE. ww
  81.  
  82. miffed. okay that's not a big word, at least it's one that I recognize, but come on what's wrong with irritated
  83.  
  84. jovially
  85.  
  86. everyone should play Symphonic Rain, it's an exercise in english language
  87.  
  88. coerced. somber. seriously, these aren't difficult words, just that it feels like this VN's writing is actually like, genuinely good writing
  89.  
  90. "her retreating figure gave off a solitary impression"
  91.  
  92. the translations and writing make this sound rather distinguished
  93.  
  94. "suggestive formulation"
  95.  
  96. diligent disposition
  97.  
  98. "a genial ambiance"
  99.  
  100. [img]http://i.imgur.com/Nqubi.png[/img]
  101.  
  102. THIS IS ME IN HIGH SCHOOL. PRETENDING TO BE THE GOOD KID, SKIPPING OUT ON ALL THE TROUBLE AUGH YEA
  103.  
  104. Fal is a manipulative bitch, discuss.
  105.  
  106. [img]http://i.imgur.com/f3AhH.png[/img]
  107.  
  108.  
  109.  
  110. More of the same. Seriously. Fal really knows what she wants, hahaha
  111.  
  112. [img]http://i.imgur.com/RFdnc.png[/img]
  113.  
  114. Casseruola - name of the food prepared in the pan. Okay, that must be the word for casserole then.
  115.  
  116. I almost feel kind of bad for Arietta. Almost.
  117.  
  118.  
  119. Natale. Oh. Christmas in Italian. Right.
  120.  
  121. >Ah, but I was the one who forcefully elicited it.
  122.  
  123. elicited
  124.  
  125. christ, Fal speaks like a book.
  126.  
  127. [img]http://i.imgur.com/eGou8.png[/img]
  128.  
  129. this girl. damn it this girl. pushing all the right buttons
  130.  
  131. Okay, so I'm kind of expecting some kind of crazy twist with Phorni. Possibly.
  132.  
  133. Since a review mentioned that the game gave him proverbial whiplash.
  134.  
  135. apathy, monotony,
  136.  
  137. [quote]The more I learned about her, the more miserable I began to feel.
  138.  
  139. And...
  140.  
  141. I began to feel other things.
  142. To put it in a good way, interest.
  143. To put it in a bad way, affection.
  144.  
  145. I wasn't supposed to be doing anything besides practice, and yet here I was, engaged in unrelated activities.
  146.  
  147. -----
  148.  
  149. To not let myself get swept away by my emotions;
  150. to not corrupy the relationship we had going
  151.  
  152. I feigned indifference, and pretend to be delighted
  153.  
  154. But in truth, I *was* delighted
  155.  
  156. [/quote]
  157.  
  158. Oh man. Drama. Shit man, that's going to be some relationship drama up in here.
  159.  
  160. TYPEMANIA
  161.  
  162. [img]http://i.imgur.com/UjgoV.png[/img]
  163.  
  164. back to symphonic rain
  165.  
  166. "Quite calculative of you."
  167.  
  168. Chris calling Fal out on her manipulation and just-as-planned
  169.  
  170. augh yeah
  171.  
  172. Oh shit! Oh shit! It's Torta!!
  173.  
  174. brace for incoming drama.
  175.  
  176. >The size of the queue in front of the entrance was so long...etc
  177.  
  178. Oh, okay I see where we got all the big words. British means automatically proper with the English language. Clearly
  179.  
  180. "shrouded in an eerie silence"
  181.  
  182. "When I averted my eyes"
  183.  
  184. "taking care not to draw attention amidst the tranquil atmospehere"
  185.  
  186. "people would pray to reaffirm the physicality of their existence"
  187.  
  188. >beautility
  189.  
  190. ???? what's wrong with beautiful
  191.  
  192. RECTILINEAR. COME ON. INSERTING BIG WORDS
  193.  
  194. Hmm.. Fal is being awfully quiet... I wonder if there's something wrong?
  195.  
  196. comprehensively
  197.  
  198. :|
  199.  
  200. "After trotting for a few minutes"
  201.  
  202. OH COME ON PEOPLE DO NOT TROT.
  203.  
  204. oh wow, she got the keys to the main performance hall
  205.  
  206. "nimbly hoisted"
  207.  
  208. "although, naturally, this was just my personal conjecture"
  209.  
  210. seriously, though I love reading this kind of writing, it really brings up questions about the original text.
  211.  
  212. Hmmm, Arietta's letter hints at something.. it almost pains my heart a little.
  213.  
  214. "I am alluding to this Falsita person"
  215.  
  216. Huh.
  217.  
  218. I have this uneasy feeling about Phorni...
  219.  
  220. hindrance
  221.  
  222. interrogative conversations
  223.  
  224. pensive expression
  225.  
  226. And something's funny with Asino as well..
  227.  
  228. "her voice sounded more bewitching than ever"
  229.  
  230. "I thought that rehearsing any more today might end up having an averse effect"
  231.  
  232. I don't know if I would have used averse here. "Adverse" might have been more accurate, though in the case of conveying the feeling of "the opposite effect" averse would indeed be more accurate.
  233.  
  234. I'M TELLING YOU MAN THIS VN IS HIGHBROW ENGLISH IN HERE
  235.  
  236. energetic demeanor
  237.  
  238. 84k new high augh yea
  239.  
  240. brazen attitude
  241.  
  242. elapse (instead of just using passing/passed :|)
  243.  
  244. self-deprecating
  245.  
  246. endeavors
  247. exerting oneself
  248. stoically eating
  249.  
  250. STOIC. REALLY.
  251.  
  252.  
  253. parting.
  254.  
  255. emotions into a song. Fortell is a magical instrument that is partly played via emotions.
  256.  
  257. Sorrow.
  258.  
  259. Waitaminute. I have to really wonder. What exactly is Phorni....
  260.  
  261. [spoiler=Arietta][img]http://i.imgur.com/zlVLk.png[/img]
  262. Yeah. I had a feeling that this was going to happen. I mean, you're on the Fal route, so of course you're going to break it off with Ari.
  263.  
  264. But at the same time.[/spoiler]
  265.  
  266. This isn't a very pleasant feeling.
  267.  
  268. "But one day - perhaps far, far into the future - I will read it."
  269.  
  270. "Provided that enough time has passed for me not to cry as I do."
  271.  
  272. ;_;
  273.  
  274. confused and disconcerted.
  275.  
  276. yeah sounds about right.
  277.  
  278. "That's not what I was insinutating"
  279.  
  280. [spoiler=Fal]An orphan, eh? I figured it might have been something like that. The whole being cheap about things, working hard and being that sort of honor student, completely typical.
  281.  
  282. [/spoiler]
  283.  
  284. condemnation, nonchalance,
  285.  
  286. AWKWARD. Asino with Fal, Chris with Torta
  287.  
  288. >Fal looked at me with sultry eyes, and made no attempt to avert them even after I noticed.
  289.  
  290. HAHAHA OH WOW
  291.  
  292. "I know it hasn't been accurately elucidated yet"
  293.  
  294. I am going to be forever irritated by these words.
  295.  
  296. >There was no such thing as an ideal route - there were only several good ones
  297.  
  298. SURE IS LAMPSHADE HANGING
  299.  
  300. EDIT:
  301.  
  302. Okay there are constant alllusions to [spoiler=Phorni]disappearing
  303.  
  304. [quote]You sure can sleep long.
  305. And you sure look happy.
  306. But that's great. You finally found someone who will be by your side.
  307. Now I won't have to worry when I-[/quote][/spoiler]
  308.  
  309. Hmmmmmmmmmm.....
  310.  
  311. .. was that a kiss...?
  312.  
  313. how cute.
  314.  
  315. but at the same time.. why did it seem kind of sad...
  316.  
  317. the key to her room
  318.  
  319. and her writing is bad....
  320.  
  321. and she's working with kids books to improve her writing....
  322.  
  323. "languidly got to her feet"
  324.  
  325. HOLY SHIT. THIS DRAMA. OH MY GOD FAL.
  326.  
  327. HOLY SHIT HOLY SHIT. ASINO. GETTING USED. STATUS: TOLD
  328.  
  329. >COQUETTISH GESTURE
  330.  
  331. asdfasdjf the language used. this is just too much
  332.  
  333. oh the butthurt Asino. nobleman. fuck off with your superiority
  334.  
  335. ... Fal. is actually. kind of
  336.  
  337. wow.. is this the kind of sudden change of pace...
  338.  
  339. This fucking drama. It's like soap opera level shit. But it's rather gripping.
  340.  
  341. Quite the turn of events. Asino. Fal. Just. Wow.
  342.  
  343. [spoiler=Fal]
  344.  
  345. Wow.
  346. [img]http://i.imgur.com/uUn3g.png[/img]
  347. Yandere?
  348.  
  349.  
  350. [/spoiler]
  351.  
  352. It's really almost eerie and creepy to hear Fal talk like that.
  353.  
  354. "Her tone was oddly gentle, which had the opposite effect of creeping me out."
  355.  
  356. Yeah, me too. Me too.
  357.  
  358. I just sighed. This kind of revelation. Really? I just had the equivalent of whiplash or something.
  359.  
  360. So in the end [spoiler=I]was just being used? Asino, to get closer to me. Me, because of the sound of my Fortell[/spoiler]
  361.  
  362. ...
  363.  
  364.  
  365. what the fuck. That voice. Was fucking creepy.
  366.  
  367. What the fuck did I just do.
  368.  
  369. I don't even know what this feeling is. Unease? Disgust? Shock? Nausea?
  370.  
  371. You know, this is not an 18+ VN, and it has no H, but still. This feels like some REALLY heavy drama.
  372.  
  373. lying dormant, smoldering...
  374.  
  375. EDIT:
  376.  
  377. ... and now [spoiler=Phorni]is gone.
  378.  
  379. "Goodbye"
  380.  
  381. [/spoiler]
  382.  
  383. This rain seems to reflect emotions.
  384.  
  385. a succinct letter indeed.
  386.  
  387. cold and cruel. There are the words I'm looking for.
  388.  
  389. and she hates the benefactor.. and his daughter
  390.  
  391. And all you hear is the sound of the rain.. if you choose not to follow
  392.  
  393. "Wretched, yet so beautiful"
  394.  
  395. okay no fuck off SR. >scaborous heart
  396.  
  397. come the fuck on. scaborous. Seriously. This is worse than the dilettante
  398.  
  399. dictionaries all day
  400.  
  401. keeping up a flawless social facade
  402.  
  403. The overwhelming corny feeling of this scene was incredible. But at the same time, the scene was pretty incredible.
  404.  
  405. Romance and drama done right, I tell you.
  406.  
  407. [img]http://i.imgur.com/CZAuZ.png[/img]
  408.  
  409. What kind of final cut-scene is this. This ending. Phorni flying in space. wat
  410.  
  411. And a happy ending.
  412.  
  413. Well, I guess that's that. Time to go with other two Da Capo routes.
  414.  
  415. EDIT: some symphonic rain time
  416.  
  417. "These minor misgivings notwithstanding, "
  418.  
  419. I don't remember the last time I saw this word outside of old english.
  420.  
  421. Liselsia.
  422.  
  423. Lise.
  424.  
  425. I'm going to stop quoting words from this VN, because it's clear that the level of written language is unnecessarily elevated.
  426.  
  427. Oh ho, a lecturer about Fortell? And it's Cesarini. Liselsia Cesarini.. so it's the daughter of that guy.
  428.  
  429. THIS LUNCHLADY. THIS LUNCHLADY SOUNDS LIKE THE LUNCHLADY FROM MUV LUV. HAHAHA.
  430.  
  431. I really wish I could look up the CV for her.
  432.  
  433. You know.
  434.  
  435. So. Lise is the daughter of [spoiler=]that Giovan or whatever guy's name.[/spoiler]
  436.  
  437. And Fal is the [spoiler=]adopted/patron of the same guy. He brought from the orphanage because of her ability to sing[/spoiler]
  438.  
  439. and so the way it goes is..
  440.  
  441. honestly it really looks like [spoiler=]Lise and Fal are actually siblings, even if they aren't. of course, that could just be character design, but still, silver hair, dark green eyes..[/spoiler]
  442.  
  443. ... why the hell did everyone just leave the cenacolo...
  444.  
  445. Interesting. Graves seems to think there are only two people with talent, Chris being one of them.
  446.  
  447. ...
  448.  
  449. No.
  450.  
  451. Okay. Graves had better not be doing what I think he's doing. If so. Fuck off.
  452.  
  453. Seriously.
  454.  
  455. Fuck you Graves [spoiler=]Are you seriously beating your daughter[/spoiler]
  456.  
  457.  
  458.  
  459. FUCKF UASDUFSADJC
  460. FUCK YOU
  461.  
  462. FUCK YOU GRAVE FUCK YOU FUCK FUCKF FUC YOU
  463.  
  464. BOTH. LISE AND FAL
  465.  
  466. asdklfjas;lkdfjasd;lkfj FUCK FUCK FUCK I AM SO MAD RIGHT
  467.  
  468. I fucking knew it too. It was so fucking obvious.
  469.  
  470. Fuck. You.
  471.  
  472. I nearly fucking punched the screen in rage.
  473.  
  474. !!!!
  475.  
  476. Esk. is [spoiler=]Liselsia's MOTHER'S NAME[/spoiler]
  477.  
  478. so.
  479.  
  480. adopted.
  481.  
  482. and.
  483.  
  484. actual real child.
  485.  
  486. wow.
  487.  
  488. Oh okay. I guess I feel a little bit better about Grave...
  489. NEVERMIND FUCK YOU FUCK YOU FUC YOU FUCK YOU GRAVE FUCK YOU
  490.  
  491. I FUCKING HATE YAOSDFJAS;DLKFJASDF
  492.  
  493. FUCK YOU AND I HOPE YOU DIE IN A FUCKING FIRE ASKJDF;SLAKDJF;SALDJFHASJL;DF
  494.  
  495. ASKLDJF;ASKDLFJ;SALKDJF
  496.  
  497. S
  498.  
  499. [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/AMGri.png[/IMG]
  500.  
  501. feels bad man...
  502.  
  503. are you fucking kidding me.
  504.  
  505. what kind of ending is this.
  506.  
  507. This is supposed to be the GOOD ending? What. Fuck. This. Shit.
  508.  
  509. God, the bad ending wasn't this painful.
  510.  
  511. oh right there's an epilogue.
  512.  
  513. oh god. oh god oh god oh god oh god
  514.  
  515.  
  516. ;______________________; Lise
  517.  
  518. I lost it. I started choking up. No pun intended for those of you who understand.
  519.  
  520. the lyrics for the song. oh man. those lyrics.
  521.  
  522. and she
  523.  
  524. she [spoiler=]started singing again, albeit roughly[/spoiler]
  525.  
  526. would these be tears of happiness?
  527.  
  528. awwww I really like Torta
  529.  
  530. Tortinita <3
  531.  
  532. yeah her song is probably the most difficult. it seems really fun though
  533.  
  534. Fal's is a bit jazzy and repetitive, Lise's is a bit off-tempo and kind of like a ballad. In terms of difficulty, Torta's is the most difficult so far, not counting the IN songs at end of each character's routes.
  535.  
  536. hahahah
  537.  
  538. Torta's pulling the sad puppy dog eyes on Chris here.
  539.  
  540. [img]http://i.imgur.com/TSuiw.png[/img]
  541.  
  542. whipped, whipped whipped
  543.  
  544. more little bits and pieces of Japanese.
  545. 全く mattaku
  546. 全部 zenbu
  547.  
  548. come on how does 全 turn into matta in with ku
  549.  
  550. EDIT:
  551.  
  552. # Sora Akanegasaki in Ever17 -the out of infinity-
  553. # Phorni in Symphonic Rain
  554.  
  555. AHA. Hiroko Kasahara
  556.  
  557. Sounded familiar. It's Sora again hahaha.
  558.  
  559. and.. didn't even see the connection, though the last time I watched Bleach was years ago. Liselia - Fumiko Orikasa, also Rukia, and Shirley,
  560.  
  561. aw man, I always love the osananajimi characters
  562.  
  563. 幼馴染
  564.  
  565. [url]http://wiki.komica.org/wiki/?%E5%B9%BC%E9%A6%B4%E6%9F%93[/url]
  566.  
  567. ready set go how many of them can you recognize without english?
  568.  
  569. ???
  570.  
  571. What the hell is Ari doing here? Didn't she say she was busy?
  572.  
  573. oh wow.
  574.  
  575. Ari is really adorable.
  576.  
  577. I have a weird suspicion about something. three months may feel like an eternity.
  578.  
  579. Ok, so I just got a bad end.
  580.  
  581. The "Torta bad end"
  582.  
  583. You just [spoiler=]Go back home with Arietta. But.. how is that a bad end? I mean yeah it's Torta, but how do you end up with Arietta?[/spoiler]
  584.  
  585. accidentally buying too much of something because of discounts is something like Ari would do
  586.  
  587. seeing two different people as one
  588.  
  589. hmm...
  590.  
  591. but of course you can tell the difference, right?
  592.  
  593. and now she brought some bread..
  594.  
  595. waitaminute, didn't Ari mail him some bread.....
  596.  
  597. Phorni seems awfully attached to the Fine family.
  598.  
  599. Ok, so I just got a bad end.
  600.  
  601. The "Torta bad end"
  602.  
  603. You just [spoiler=]Go back home with Arietta. But.. how is that a bad end? I mean yeah it's Torta, but how do you end up with Arietta?[/spoiler]
  604.  
  605. accidentally buying too much of something because of discounts is something like Ari would do
  606.  
  607. seeing two different people as one
  608.  
  609. hmm...
  610.  
  611. and right now it's going backwards. Huh. The letters are going backwards in time...
  612.  
  613. "I would be a little happier on rainy days. Because I'd be able to experience the days that Chris felt."
  614.  
  615. "That was why I anxiously awaited for the rain to come.
  616.  
  617. [spoiler=]Here in the City of Rain[/spoiler]
  618.  
  619. Wait.. so it's NOT raining there? I'm pretty confused right now.
  620.  
  621.  
  622.  
  623. but of course you can tell the difference, right?
  624.  
  625. and now she brought some bread..
  626.  
  627. waitaminute, didn't Ari mail him some bread.....
  628.  
  629. Oh ho! Nina has tickets to that concert that Fal and Chris went to on that route.
  630.  
  631. Dropping off Phorni at Torta's place? I wonder why...?
  632. "
  633. Her expressionless face bore an astounding resemblance to that of my sweetheart.
  634. Considering that they were twins, this shouldn't have come as a surprise.
  635. But...
  636. I couldn't help but feel there was something else about it
  637. "
  638.  
  639. "Torta was here for no one else but me"
  640.  
  641. >If she has you whipped *already*, you'l be in for hell later on. Believe me, I know.
  642.  
  643. HAHAHA. This calzone guy is great.
  644.  
  645.  
  646.  
  647.  
  648. [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/WiSzd.png[/IMG]
  649.  
  650. So. Torta is acting kind of suspicious.
  651.  
  652. If there is another fucking Yandere...
  653.  
  654. [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/HfOrm.png[/IMG]
  655.  
  656. WHIPPED. SO WHIPPED
  657.  
  658. Torta seems to be saying a lot of things [spoiler=]that Arietta was saying. Like, similar actions, similar lines. Hmmm[/spoiler]
  659.  
  660. Wait.
  661.  
  662. So Torta was confirming that Chris was going to be at home on Sunday.
  663.  
  664. And it just so happens that Ari shows up on Sunday?
  665.  
  666. Oh. Maybe it was a letter between Torta and Ari then. Ari probably told Torta about the surprise visit.
  667.  
  668. Oh yeah, Ari just said that she wrote Torta a letter.
  669.  
  670. Ari is doing his laundry. lol
  671.  
  672.  
  673.  
  674. OOPS. Nice one Chris.
  675.  
  676. [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/Ie8UV.png[/IMG]
  677.  
  678. >I could no longer tell whether that voice belonged to Ari or Torta.
  679.  
  680. and now Torta has a cold.
  681.  
  682. I wonder why she's pushing herself so hard...
  683.  
  684.  
  685. in the city of rain, no one uses umbrellas....
  686.  
  687. oh she finally confessed
  688.  
  689. sending off letters to Arietta...
  690.  
  691. And they finally break it off...
  692.  
  693. Interesting, you don't actually need to play on Tortinita's route.
  694.  
  695. Wait, why is Ari here again?
  696.  
  697. I have strong suspicions that it is [spoiler=]Torta dressing up as Ari[/spoiler]
  698.  
  699. What a depressing ending. This is supposed to be Torta's good end?
  700.  
  701. So, Torta's bad end is [spoiler=]Going home with Ari. Just as planned[/spoiler]
  702. Torta's good end is [spoiler=]Seeing off Ari at the train station[/spoiler]
  703.  
  704. Why does it feel like it's reversed and that it's really like it's Ari's route? Where's the rest of the Torta story?
  705.  
  706. Epilogue time: Torta's unhappy for some reason. She didn't show up that night.
  707.  
  708. Wait. What kind of freakin epilogue is this. Shall I start from the beginning, or start from the end?
  709.  
  710. And she took off the hair ribbon that she always wears.
  711.  
  712. Wait a minute. That's a strong indication of what I think it is.....
  713.  
  714. Alright time to move to side 2, al fine.
  715.  
  716. It starts with a letter to Arietta.
  717.  
  718. [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/H3bwp.png[/IMG]
  719.  
  720. Uh oh. I don't want to know.
  721.  
  722. [spoiler=letters]that piled lies atop more lies - all for chris' sake[/spoiler]
  723.  
  724. "Actually, that 'someone else' isn't the image reflected in the mirror right now"
  725. !!!! I knew it. I freakin knew it. It was blatantly hinted at.
  726. [spoiler=major spoilers]Torta and Ari were the same person. Torta was answering the letters. Torta was dressing up as Ari.[/spoiler]
  727.  
  728. Now the question is why. Why is she doing this?
  729.  
  730. Torta's gotten pretty good at lying.
  731.  
  732. [spoiler=Torta]The things Chris wouldn't heed, even if I were to tell him face-to-face, he would eat up if I wrote them through "Ari's letters."[/spoiler]
  733.  
  734. Oh man. Oh man. This is. I am really curious about it.
  735.  
  736. "I am a wretched women"
  737.  
  738. [spoiler=Chris]his eardrum had ruptured.
  739.  
  740.  
  741. the doctor said there was a possibility of ringing in his ears.. is it raining?
  742.  
  743. a major accident. he had gone into shock. He and Ari had...
  744.  
  745. Ari had suffered heavy trauma to the head and still hadn't regained consciousness[/spoiler]
  746.  
  747. oh man. oh man. what am I reading. this just turned really dark really quickly.......
  748.  
  749. "Listen... it's the sound of the rain. It really is the City of Rain."
  750.  
  751. Express mail... letters.
  752.  
  753. 11/28 now. It's just going backwards.
  754.  
  755. >he mumbled with a look of consternation on his face.
  756.  
  757. CONSTERNATION. REALLY.
  758.  
  759. Oh! So that's what Torta was doing every Tuesday. Baking lessons.
  760.  
  761. Yep. And so that bread. Yeah. Okay. I see. Ari also working in a bakery. Yeah....
  762.  
  763. "I would especially feel that way whenever I let my hair down."
  764.  
  765. Yeah yeah.
  766.  
  767. [spoiler=Torta]
  768. But it was all me. The letters were sent by me, the one who liked Chris was me...
  769.  
  770. So - who was I, really? Tortinita, obviously.
  771.  
  772. But in Chris' heart, I was also Arietta[/spoiler]
  773.  
  774. "I was losing my individuality, and it terrified me."
  775.  
  776. Actually, yeah. Why DID Falsita raise that umbrella? Back on the Fal route it was never explicitly explained as to why she used that umbrella.
  777.  
  778. And I don't recall there being a scene where Chris explained anything...
  779.  
  780. "Pompous creep"
  781.  
  782. Yeah sounds about right.
  783.  
  784. OH. WAIT A MINUTE. SO. Yeah, Asino. And so that part, where Fal is like [spoiler=]Asino was only using you[/spoiler]
  785.  
  786. Basically Fal was [spoiler=]getting friendly with Asino too, to find out more about Chris, and so Asino spilled the secret in hopes of trying to partner with Fal, on Fal's route. And then Fal revealed the secret[/spoiler]
  787.  
  788. Yeah, okay. This makes sense then. It was basically Fal "doing her homework" as always.
  789.  
  790. Yep. Asino is a scumbag, I figured as much. Cynical and calculative, but it's so easy to see through this guy. It's like a baby Grave.
  791.  
  792. (complete side note. I just tested whether MLA still had a strong effect on me. Re-read the original hive arc. Oh yeah. bawling again for another hours. )
  793.  
  794. 12/02
  795.  
  796. So I guess it will start progressing forward from this point onward.
  797.  
  798. yeeeeesh. what is this female jealousy I feel. Torta and Fal.
  799.  
  800. "If possible, I never wanted to see her again"
  801.  
  802. Well now. That's certainly a bit dark.
  803.  
  804. Honestly, everything from her perspective.. just made SR quite a bit darker and more depressing.
  805.  
  806. "I would watch the two of them go out and walk off into the distance from my window on weekends - and it would fill my heart with excruciating envy"
  807.  
  808. God. This is like one massive guilt trip..
  809.  
  810. [spoiler=Torta]
  811. There was nothing for Chris to apologize about.
  812. 'Because Ari told you to?'
  813. Oh please.
  814. I told him that.
  815. I'd manipulated Chris' feelings by making it seem Ari told him so, and now I was irritated about that very thing.
  816. [/spoiler]
  817.  
  818. Love sure can be ugly.
  819.  
  820. In order to cover up an old lie, I would lacquer a new one on top of it.
  821.  
  822. ...
  823.  
  824. I no longer even knew what my true feelings were. Was this a sweet lie? Or was it how I truly felt?
  825.  
  826. God. This really is twisted. Reading this narration is really something else....
  827.  
  828. Oh Torta ;_;
  829.  
  830. Oh ho! So the two grannies were planning that since a few days before [spoiler=]the concert when Nina said she wouldn't go. Oh ho ho ho ho[/spoiler]
  831.  
  832. Just as planned grannies.
  833.  
  834. "It is my own avarice that drives me to continue lying"
  835.  
  836. God. I feel. So bad. For Tortinita. ;_____;
  837.  
  838. Torta. Torta. ;_;
  839.  
  840. [spoiler=]I ended up crying myself to sleep last night. After a nice long bath this morning, there were no traces of that left.[/spoiler]
  841.  
  842. It really is miraculous he didn't find out during all that time.
  843.  
  844. "I'll do anything I can to help."
  845. I really would.
  846. Anything he wanted me to.
  847. [spoiler=]
  848. "My final moment of happiness with Chris"[/spoiler]
  849.  
  850. [spoiler=The rain]in his heart. Oh I see. That rain is almost an allegory to his feelings[/spoiler]
  851.  
  852. Torta's tears of confusion...
  853.  
  854. ;_;
  855.  
  856. Wait wait wait, Cordell's unrequited love??
  857.  
  858. !!!!!!!!!!!!
  859.  
  860. WAIT.
  861.  
  862. That voice just now.
  863.  
  864. Torta was just hearing.
  865.  
  866. That voice.
  867.  
  868. Torta [spoiler=was hearing]Phorni's voice!!! It was Phorni's voice that she heard while she was half asleep![/spoiler]
  869.  
  870. So other people CAN hear her?
  871.  
  872. Okay, so now not only is Chris [spoiler=]delusional about the rain, Torta is delusional about her sister.[/spoiler]
  873.  
  874. Was it guilt, or was it regret?
  875. Was it grief, or was it delight?
  876. I might noe be forgiven for this.
  877. But the lies kepty flowing forth from my mouth, and I had no way of stopping it.
  878.  
  879. ---
  880.  
  881. "Of course not. I can fabricate as many smiles as I want"
  882. I said while producing the widest smile I could.
  883. I would've wanted to check in the mirror, but I couldn't do that right now.
  884. "So I'm fine. Thanks, Asino."
  885. I looked at him with as bright a demeanor as I could muster.
  886.  
  887. '...Women are terrifying'
  888. "I'll take that as a compliment"
  889.  
  890. ---
  891. ---
  892.  
  893. ... she broke the mirror when she was confused... about the roles... out of frustration and self-hatred...
  894.  
  895. oh wow.
  896.  
  897. 02/02
  898.  
  899. .. This is the good end. The normal end that happens with Chris+Torta route.
  900.  
  901. [spoiler=massive spoiler]Ari just died. [/spoiler]
  902.  
  903. !!! There's a line. At the end. What does it say? Torta says something during the Al Fine Good End.
  904.  
  905. Okay so it's a different end if you sit and listen to the granny.
  906.  
  907. Oh god I jumped. That sound of that. That sound. The sound of that [spoiler=]car made me jump[/spoiler]
  908.  
  909. 1/21
  910.  
  911. Arietta.
  912.  
  913. Best Ending.
  914.  
  915. Epilogue time.
  916.  
  917.  
  918.  
  919. Password: kitchen knife
  920.  
  921. I wonder what this is..?
  922.  
  923. ===
  924.  
  925. So all there is left is Phorni's route.
  926.  
  927. What is this. This is a new scene.
  928.  
  929. "Farewell"
  930. "There is no time"
  931.  
  932. Must. Remember. I have to remember.
  933.  
  934. Frustration. Guilt. Regret.
  935.  
  936. Hmmm... [spoiler=weather]Okay, so Phorni always seems to mention the rain too. I guess she sees it too?
  937.  
  938. Okay, so after the illusion of rain, I have another theory[/spoiler]
  939.  
  940. So maybe, considering all that I've read so far, Phorni [spoiler]isn't real either, just like the rain. It's just a hallucination. He puts out the towels for himself.[/spoiler]
  941.  
  942. Either that, or it's [spoiler=]a spirite of Ari or something[/spoiler]
  943.  
  944.  
  945.  
  946. OH MAN. THIS IS JUST TOO CUTE FOR WORDS. PHORNI IS CLIMBING THE DRAWERS. TO PUT THE TOWEL UP.
  947.  
  948. HAHAHA
  949.  
  950. So I hear Phorni's route is where the ! moments occur. Aww yea, my body is ready.
  951.  
  952. All Phorni ever wants is to perform ensembles. Music sprite indeed.
  953.  
  954. Wow. Phorni's song is surprisingly difficult. It's fun though. And pretty upbeat.
  955.  
  956. Three years ago, eh?
  957.  
  958. So that must be right around that [spoiler=]accident with Ari. Yep. So Phorni is probably an illusion?[/spoiler]
  959.  
  960. But at the same time that doesn't exactly explain why [spoiler=Torta]could hear the voice when she was half-asleep/dreaming[/spoiler]
  961.  
  962. I keep thinking it's related to [spoiler=]Ari, since all the times when you don't pick Torta, there's the whole goodbye thing.[/spoiler]
  963.  
  964. Okay, I think I finally figured out the tiny little bar that says Piova at the bottom. It's kind of like a time-progress bar. Sort of.
  965.  
  966. And now Phorni's saying she'll go to school with Chris.
  967.  
  968. "Nah, I'm fine. That's Torta's role"
  969.  
  970. Waitaminute. [spoiler=Ari]said the same thing didn't she...[/spoiler]
  971.  
  972. What exactly is Phorni...
  973.  
  974. "That's right, it couldn't be helped"
  975.  
  976. Okay, now that I think about it. There are three bad ends
  977.  
  978. 1.) Fal bad end
  979. 2.) Lise bad end
  980. 3.) Generic/Torta bad end
  981.  
  982. The third bad end [spoiler=]is where you basically get partnered with Torta. and then you graduate. And then you meet "Ari" and "go back to the home town"
  983.  
  984. except... Ari's dead[/spoiler]
  985.  
  986. So I'm sure it breaks Chris. Or something.
  987.  
  988. forgiveness, kindness, and affection.
  989.  
  990. Hmmmmm.. OH I SEE WHAT YOU'RE DOING
  991.  
  992. [spoiler=the letter]http://i.imgur.com/2vpFA.png[/spoiler]
  993.  
  994. Yeah the letters take on a completely different meaning when you realize that it's [spoiler=]Torta writing the letters[/spoiler]
  995.  
  996. And on this route Ari comes to visit.
  997.  
  998. Forget, but don't forget.
  999. Don't remember, but rememeber.
  1000.  
  1001. What's with these dreams...
  1002.  
  1003. ... and Phorni has [spoiler=]already finished the song, but she said she didn't finish them...[/spoiler]
  1004.  
  1005. Hmmmmm..
  1006.  
  1007. "Ahaha, those words bring back memories."
  1008.  
  1009. Memories of what? Why would she have those memories?
  1010.  
  1011. Torta. Tuesday. Yeah she's doing that [spoiler=]baking bread thing again[/spoiler]
  1012.  
  1013. Wait. Other people can hear [spoiler=]Phorni's voice?[/spoiler]
  1014.  
  1015. Oh ho, there's another letter from Arietta? Of course it's just [spoiler=]Torta, so this is probably Torta being worried[/spoiler]
  1016.  
  1017. And so it turns out [spoiler=Arietta]cannot come and visit[/spoiler]
  1018.  
  1019. I guess that was expected.
  1020.  
  1021. 48k. The full song is really fun. And I think it's called... Fay. lol
  1022.  
  1023. Oh, it's the dream again.
  1024.  
  1025. "Today will be the last time. Then I will give up. Then I can give up."
  1026.  
  1027. Something I'd forgotten. Something I mustn't forget.
  1028.  
  1029. Phorni, and then Ari, popped into his head..
  1030.  
  1031. the resemblance between [spoiler=]Phorni and Ari and Torta?[/spoiler]
  1032.  
  1033. Judging from her expression just before, it was pretty clear she was lying.
  1034.  
  1035. I wonder what she's lying about.
  1036.  
  1037. Oh it's the calzone stand
  1038.  
  1039. Looks like Phorni's pretty defensive of Chris, actually.
  1040.  
  1041. .... more and more... wait...
  1042.  
  1043. more and more people... [spoiler=]can hear Phorni....[/spoiler]
  1044.  
  1045. What is this. Why is this happening?
  1046.  
  1047. Did this have to do with the remembering thing?
  1048.  
  1049. .. and then she disappeared.... after [spoiler=]telling Chris to partner with Torta[/spoiler]
  1050.  
  1051. It's like everything is pointing towards [spoiler=]Phorni being Ari, or some embodiment of her[/spoiler]
  1052.  
  1053. Man, it's like [spoiler=]Chris is dying...[/spoiler]
  1054.  
  1055. Chris
  1056. You won't wake up
  1057. Are you okay?
  1058. You have a fever
  1059. It's my fault
  1060. Aren't you hungry?
  1061. I beg of you, open your eyes.
  1062. How long have you been sleeping?
  1063. I'm sorry
  1064. This wasn't my intention.
  1065. I'll have to rely on (spoiler)
  1066. I can't do it
  1067. Chris
  1068. Why can't I do it?
  1069. Open your eyes
  1070. Chris
  1071. I won't be stubborn anymore
  1072. Why did I say something like that
  1073. I'm watching over you
  1074. Your fever won't subside
  1075. I love you
  1076. I want to hear you play the Fortel
  1077. I want to hear your gentle voice
  1078. I want to see you smile
  1079. Wake up
  1080. I must sing for him
  1081. And then I'll say
  1082. See? It was all thanks to me.
  1083. (Spoiler).
  1084. I'm sorry
  1085. Chris.
  1086. I like you
  1087. I really do
  1088. Don't forget about me
  1089. You don't have to remember
  1090. Please, remember
  1091. I'm right here with you
  1092. I love you
  1093. Chris
  1094. Remember
  1095. Remember
  1096.  
  1097. !!!!!!!!!!!!
  1098.  
  1099. Oh god. That sound. That sound that sound that sound that sound that sound.
  1100.  
  1101. Made me jump. Tears. Tears tears tears.
  1102.  
  1103. A small body fluttered through the air.
  1104.  
  1105. FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF
  1106.  
  1107. An explosion. My ears. My fucking ears.
  1108.  
  1109.  
  1110. Icy Rain.
  1111.  
  1112. I can't really explain this feeling right now. It's just.
  1113.  
  1114. Melancholy? No, it's. I'm slightly on the verge of tears. And
  1115.  
  1116. that was painful to read. I didn't want to know how that happened.
  1117.  
  1118. So everyone heard her singing. Yet can't see. Interesting
  1119.  
  1120. And a clear sky....
  1121.  
  1122. [spoiler=Phorni]hadn't opened her eyes even once.[/spoiler]
  1123.  
  1124. .. I just lost it.
  1125.  
  1126. ;_______________;
  1127.  
  1128. [spoiler=an image][IMG]http://i.imgur.com/gV9Ik.png[/IMG][/spoiler]
  1129.  
  1130. ;_______________;
  1131.  
  1132. ;________________________;
  1133.  
  1134. These tears. These tears don't stop. These tears won't stop. Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
  1135.  
  1136. But. But.
  1137.  
  1138. It's not something sad that happened. Are these tears in a good way?
  1139.  
  1140. Sunlight.
  1141.  
  1142. My heart. Just. My heart. MY heart. MY HEART.
  1143.  
  1144. And that's it. That's it.
  1145.  
  1146. I figured. I figured it was something like that. There was suspicion from the very beginning, and it just built on top of it.
  1147.  
  1148. But. At the same time. It was still powerful.
  1149.  
  1150. Oh wow.
  1151.  
  1152. Just. Oh wow. Different kind of tears.
  1153.  
  1154. 9/10. Seriously.
  1155.  
  1156. Nakige for sure?
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