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- Hello, this is Jewsef and I'll be reviewing your plot.
- Alright, I will keep things very simple and clear and I'll give you some tips to work on. :)
- Keep in mind that there are three elements we, as moderators, are looking for. These three elements are: Terrain, organics and structure. For spark, two of those (if done decently) could rank you up!
- -Terrain: What is terrain? Terrain is basically the land of your plot. First of all NEVER leave the land flat you should always have different layers on your plot, whether it is a mountain, cliff, hill or just simple elevation. Try to always vary the palette too (varying the blocks ex: dirt, grass, stone, etc..) make it look as natural as possible at all times.
- A very simple example of terrain is something like this http://gyazo.com/0a090646def15f95b1f4ab1a2c9859d6
- Or https://gyazo.com/f06099cf94afc47a4eb9a7e63b22eb7b
- -Structure: Structures are the buildings like that windmill you made. Try to add more depth and detail to your build as in add more layers to the wall and give it a more defined shape, then maybe you could add the very small details in your build. Block variation is also important when doing small structures so keep that in mind :)
- A good and very simple example of a house would be something like this:
- https://gyazo.com/8a5c6d2a28f5850214df91c226782f3d
- -Organics: Organics are living things (Trees, animals, humanoids, flowers, etc..). Organics really helps into creating more atmosphere into your build. Please do not just bone-meal tree saplings and tall grass. Usually the way to do these is to actually try to imagine the thing you are trying to build.
- -TIPS: -You have a lot of free space in the plot, use it.
- -Make your windmill a tad bigger and more realistic
- -I would suggest removing the stone structure and replacing it with something else.
- -Add more trees
- That's about it, good luck!
- ~Regards, Jewsef.
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