Past
- Yeah, the yehar part sounds definitely better now with the effect! But I think the second yehar is still a liiiitle bit too late. Just a tiny bit left though. I'm not sure how come, but the beat is still slightly off when I try to sing along. Maybe you can try shifting it once again to the left (just to make sure, you only moved the yehar part, not firle exali one too right?)
- Yes, I think I'll give you the drum roll file separately for that. Please use this: https://www.dropbox.com/s/tgpt9yb8hg4x6r8/past%20timpani%20roll.mp3?dl=0

Present
- Like past, the song should have focus on the chorus
- Probably more reverb on the flutes?
- At times the music is too overpowering that I can't clearly hear the singing. Backing chorus would definitely use a bit more power up too.
- I heard Oboe and Marimba on the left pan at the same time while there's nothing on the right. Maybe put one of them to the other side.
- Starting at 1:47 to 2:01, please make the vocals stronger. This is also chanting, so maybe with similar effects as you did the yehar part of the past song
- Starting 2:15, I think the piano should be made more centered and apparent compared to other instruments. At this part, the piano holds the bassline and brings the chord to the song, so with the repeating guitar overtaking the spotlight now, it seems like usachii is singing the wrong chords.
- Vocals at 2:15 should maybe be centered.
- Starting 2:30 would probably sound better with full chorus effect as a climax. Especially with the vibrant vocal lines it has. I don't know what effect would be good but definitely the chorus should get the center of attention.