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StephenEBPotter's Initiate Review

Jul 7th, 2015
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  1. Hey there :3
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  3. Firstly, terrain. You have some alright terrain, with a few layers. I think you need to smoothen the transition from the hills/cliffs to the flatter land, however. It's a little sudden, 'pull it out' a little more, like have a few more layers around the base of the cliffs, so that it's not such a sudden change.
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  5. Secondly, organics. You don't have any on this plot - it'd be nice if you put a couple trees on the plot! They would really add to the plot in a whole. Just make sure you build them yourself! Don't bonemeal saplings, and try to not make them look like Vanilla trees when you build them!
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  7. Lastly, structure. You have a nice looking house! But your detailing is a little too random. The blocks you've used look nice, but think about where you place them. Have a nice pattern, don't just place them randomly! By this, I mean the stonebrick walls, and the way you've detailed them.
  8. The same with your roof! Make sure it's symmetrical, and also really think about the way you're placing the blocks! It's a nice designed roof, just make a few of the shapes a little smoother, and like I said, make sure it's symmetrical!
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  10. Good luck!
  11. - Dutty :3
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