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- Hey there :3
- Firstly, terrain. You have some alright terrain, with a few layers. I think you need to smoothen the transition from the hills/cliffs to the flatter land, however. It's a little sudden, 'pull it out' a little more, like have a few more layers around the base of the cliffs, so that it's not such a sudden change.
- Secondly, organics. You don't have any on this plot - it'd be nice if you put a couple trees on the plot! They would really add to the plot in a whole. Just make sure you build them yourself! Don't bonemeal saplings, and try to not make them look like Vanilla trees when you build them!
- Lastly, structure. You have a nice looking house! But your detailing is a little too random. The blocks you've used look nice, but think about where you place them. Have a nice pattern, don't just place them randomly! By this, I mean the stonebrick walls, and the way you've detailed them.
- The same with your roof! Make sure it's symmetrical, and also really think about the way you're placing the blocks! It's a nice designed roof, just make a few of the shapes a little smoother, and like I said, make sure it's symmetrical!
- Good luck!
- - Dutty :3
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