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  1. <Antioch> Hey, Bow.
  2. <Antioch> Mulling over the possibility of making this channel voice-only, w.r.t. voicing people who have work up in the topic document for discussion/critique.
  3. <Antioch> Thoughts?
  4. <Cyrix> Why would you want to do that Antioch? :o
  5. <Cyrix> I mean - its kinda hard to get critique if you shut out most people would could give critique?
  6. <storryeater> it also kind of makes it harder to access for new people
  7. <storryeater> or people who have yet to write stuff, but may want advice for starting
  8. <abyssonym> I can see the merit and developing a more rigorous & intimate "writing club" but I think that fills a different niche than this channel does
  9. <abyssonym> and the discussion that occurs here would quickly be diverted to another channel anyway
  10. <Faustus|Kaspar> Hmm, I don't know, submitting some work isn't a very high mark to hit
  11. <abyssonym> any barrier to entry is going to drive people away
  12. <Faustus|Kaspar> Is that the point of this channel?
  13. <storryeater> no, but most people who want critique are gonna fret a lot about submitting something good rather than submitting anything
  14. <Faustus|Kaspar> I think Antioch is just discussing having the critique be more focused to avoid off-topic discussion
  15. <abyssonym> sure
  16. <abyssonym> it strikes me as an overreaction to what I perceive as the first real surge of activity in this channel in all the time I've been here, though
  17. <Faustus|Kaspar> Which I would support actually, it's pretty low as a bar and it ensures that we're not talking about things unrelated to writing.
  18. <storryeater> it also could be solved by way less drastic means, if that is the problem
  19. <Faustus|Kaspar> This isn't drastic at all.
  20. <Faustus|Kaspar> Also, some credit has to go to the fact that Anti is one of the people managing this channel
  21. <VereorNox> calling it drastic seems a bit melodramatic
  22. <Faustus|Kaspar> If he thinks it's a problem, I'm willing to trust his judgment.
  23. <storryeater> true
  24. <abyssonym> ???
  25. <Faustus|Kaspar> ...
  26. <VereorNox> calling it drastic seems a bit melodramatic
  27. <storryeater> he is the manager, and I won't contest his decision
  28. <abyssonym> Naturally, no one is questioning his authority
  29. <abyssonym> but I don't adopt the opinions of people in positions of authority merely because they have authority
  30. <storryeater> I will, however, say why I disagree with it if it comes up
  31. * Mahasim (Mahasim@net-2kdfpv.us.northamericancoax.com) has joined
  32. <Faustus|Kaspar> I don't think it would be as much of a change as you're guessing, if you've got nothing to contribute as a work I don't think your advice is that valid anyway. And just PMing Antioc to voice you so you can ask for criticism isn't hard.
  33. <storryeater> for one, lets use a personal reason: I want to write something, but my big obstacle is apprehension on how it will be received. Making me unable to communicate before submitting it would drive my apprehension to the roof. I want to imagine its the same for others and that I am not insane.
  34. <abyssonym> I stand by everything I've said so far, including where I said that it isn't an altogether terrible idea
  35. <Faustus|Kaspar> PM someone who can voice you. It's easy.
  36. <abyssonym> Yes, but like I said before, any barrier to entry is going to drive people away.
  37. <abyssonym> Even trivial ones
  38. <Faustus|Kaspar> Is that the point of the channel?
  39. <storryeater> for another, writers themselves can get off topic
  40. <Faustus|Kaspar> I don't think it is. Writing seems to focus on criticism, advice, and feedback.
  41. <storryeater> the point, I thought, was for the channel to be a calm and accepting place for new writers
  42. <abyssonym> Yeah I can see that different people want different things from this channel
  43. <abyssonym> which is why it's not a bad idea
  44. <Faustus|Kaspar> If anything, this would make the chat much calmer and more controlled
  45. <abyssonym> I don't see why that is necessary
  46. <Faustus|Kaspar> Okay.
  47. <ixi> I thought this channel was already calm and controlled.
  48. <abyssonym> yeah that's why I'm so confused
  49. <storryeater> so that they can improve, not only writingwise, but also as far as the psychology of writing is concerned
  50. <abyssonym> there was a lot of discussion yesterday but that's such an anomaly in this channel
  51. <abyssonym> or this morning, rather
  52. <storryeater> the second is needed for people who feel too apprehensive to write. For them, it would be a high bar
  53. <Faustus|Kaspar> This channel doesn't need to always have discussion in it
  54. <abyssonym> And like, a completely dead chat is very calm and controlled... but that's not exactly a good thing
  55. * Faustus|Kaspar shrugs
  56. <Faustus|Kaspar> If asking permission is too high of a barrier for you to overcome, maybe you should got to #Fanfic or something
  57. <abyssonym> Like I said, the discussion would quickly be diverted to a different channel
  58. <storryeater> as a third, discussing writing ideas and their validity instead of just submitted work can help young and unexperienced writers
  59. <abyssonym> but not #fanfic becuase it would be off-topic there
  60. <ixi> My main qualm with such a measure is... why? I mean, take the current list of member works - out of those, who has talked in this chat in the previous month or two? Have their works been read and discussed? It feels like the measure is simply just adding extra steps to talking, than really adding anything of value.
  61. <Rhet> There's a difference between "hey writers, critique my work" and "hey everyone, critique my work"
  62. <abyssonym> the channel would probably just fracture into #seriouswriters and #writingtopics
  63. <Faustus|Kaspar> I agree with Rhet
  64. <Faustus|Kaspar> A split might actually be good
  65. <storryeater> good critics are not nexessarily good writers
  66. <Cyrix> I do not think it was the intention of this channel to be a writers only channel, no?
  67. <Saff|GM> I’d be all for a serious focus tbh
  68. <Faustus|Kaspar> I wouldn't trust a bad writer's critique
  69. <Saff|GM> It’s called writing.
  70. <abyssonym> yeah I think a lot of writers would appreciate feedback from considerate non-writers
  71. <Saff|GM> It’s in the name
  72. <Saff|GM> Writing
  73. <Cyrix> Yes. Thank you for telling me. I might not have been able to read otherwise.
  74. <Saff|GM> I’m all for the voice only. Keeps discussions on topic.
  75. <Faustus|Kaspar> Tragic
  76. * BaileyMatutine has quit (Quit: )
  77. <Faustus|Kaspar> Illiteracy is a large problem Cyrix
  78. <Faustus|Kaspar> I can link you some resources
  79. <Cyrix> yeah.
  80. <Cyrix> thanks?
  81. <Faustus|Kaspar> You can get through this
  82. <Faustus|Kaspar> I believe in you
  83. <Saff|GM> I mean that’s what I assumed.
  84. <ixi> Splitting the channel feels like it's just breaking up the community even further, making them tinier and more dead.
  85. <storryeater> "writing" can mean different things, but even if it is for a writing circle
  86. <storryeater> which is my assumption
  87. <storryeater> and was since I came here
  88. <abyssonym> yeah writing circles are great and I don't think it's a bad idea to create one
  89. <storryeater> it doesn't help the apprehension of artist who still are unsure on how to art
  90. <abyssonym> but I never saw that as the purpose of this channel as it is now
  91. <Cyrix> Yeah, just pointing out that this channel was *intended* for everyone who does something creative (writing being the most foremost one) to be able to get crit here or talk about things
  92. <Saff|GM> Okay. Here’s my take. There are some of us here who are more serious than others. People who are trying to really hone their writing and who want to make a career of it. And it’s really discouraging when I come in here and feel like I have to defend my novel from people who haven’t read it and are just basing things on tropes of my genre.
  93. <Cyrix> I did specifically ask and was present (even suggested some of the channel rules) when it was invented. @saff @Faustus|Kaspar
  94. <storryeater> nobody really bashed your novel, as far as I remember
  95. <Cyrix> So I have no idea why you two jump down my throat when I question why you would take this channel and make it something which it was not intended to be?
  96. <abyssonym> I think you should just take initiative and create a writing circle
  97. <Faustus|Kaspar> I don't think a split would be bad because obviously there are some who yeah Saff|GM said it
  98. <storryeater> I could be wrong
  99. <Cyrix> I dont remember anyone bashing your novel saff.
  100. <Rhet> She didn't say her novel was bashed
  101. <Cyrix> she said she had to defend it
  102. <Faustus|Kaspar> She did.
  103. <Rhet> She responded to criticism based on "this one thing appears in my novel"
  104. <Rhet> She said "I had to age my characters down"
  105. <Rhet> and three different people told her how she could improve her novel
  106. <Cyrix> okay. I was not here for this discussion about age
  107. <Faustus|Kaspar> Now this has happened before where certain people don't realize they are being combative.
  108. <Faustus|Kaspar> But it's still discouraging
  109. <storryeater> true
  110. <abyssonym> I was part of that discussion. If I came off as combative, I really didn't intend to.
  111. * Bel (sid83463@tooting.irccloud.com) has left ("I guess this channel isn’t for me then")
  112. <storryeater> but it can be solved with a warning
  113. <storryeater> its not like writers are immune to being combative by accident
  114. <Antioch> This channel began as a resource for writers who were looking for assistance with workshopping and storyboarding for help on subjects such as beta reading and revisions.
  115. <abyssonym> I offered a suggestion but I wasn't saying that Saff's decision was bad or anything, I was just curious
  116. <Antioch> I don’t feel the bar to entry is particularly high.
  117. <storryeater> by the way, I apologise if I was one of those people. I was mostly defending tropes I, myself, wanted to use rather that critiquing yours
  118. <Antioch> Write something, post it in the topic linked so others can view your work, either for critique or for others to see where you’re coming from as a writer.
  119. <Antioch> That’s not a large hurdle to clear, in my opinion.
  120. <abyssonym> I'm not going to do that
  121. <abyssonym> but I will join a different channel if it gets created
  122. <Faustus|Kaspar> More power to you
  123. <storryeater> its not if you are confident
  124. <storryeater> if you are trying to build courage, like me
  125. <Rhet> I guess what's confusing to me is that this channel is supposed to provide value to writers
  126. <storryeater> it can ruin you
  127. <Rhet> since it's called Writing
  128. <abyssonym> I'm just pointing out that the threshold is there
  129. <abyssonym> there are people that it will drive away
  130. <Antioch> If you’re unconfident about your work, then it’s all the more reason to turn to others for advice.
  131. <abyssonym> And yeah I get that that's the point
  132. <storryeater> because its a small hurdle, but you don't want to have a small jump
  133. <Rhet> So if you're not a writer, it's not intended to provide value to you. There are other channels for that
  134. <abyssonym> but there's a lot fewer people who are willing to publish that you think
  135. <Faustus|Kaspar> It's not publishing
  136. <Rhet> If you have written something, then pm an op and say "I wrote something can I have ops please so I can post it for criticism"
  137. <Faustus|Kaspar> It's just a sample of how you write
  138. <Nick> How big of a thing are we talking?
  139. <ixi> Idk, Rhet - works are going to be read more by readers than other writers, I feel a reader's opinion is very helpful.
  140. <Antioch> And if you’re unconfident about your work, then where your criticism is coming from (without context for your lack of readable material) seems less applicable in the context of revision.
  141. <storryeater> some amateur writers who don't feel confident at showing their work yet will be really discouraged
  142. <Antioch> Two to three paragraphs.
  143. <Nick> Oh, yeah
  144. <Antioch> Just like, a synopsis of your current work, at the least.
  145. <Rhet> ixi: right, but the readers don't lose any value
  146. <abyssonym> It's like that old adage "don't criticize a movie until you can make one"
  147. <Nick> I'm down for that, as a person who just removed his non-thing from the topic link
  148. <Rhet> by not being able to speak in #writing without having written something
  149. <abyssonym> Yeah there's merit in getting feedback from other writers
  150. <abyssonym> but reader feedback is valuable too, particularly when it is earnest and considerate
  151. <Nick> If I ever want to talk in the channel I can post them or write something better
  152. <storryeater> I may be able to do that
  153. <Antioch> A reader’s opinion is valuable, ixi.
  154. <Antioch> An unsolicited reader’s opinion is not.
  155. <Rhet> storryeater: To be frank, if they don't feel confident in showing anything they've written ever, then why do they need to talk in #writing?
  156. <Cyrix> so the issue some people have is that they feel like some people in here are not qualified to talk here?
  157. * Camtist (uid157531@192.184.10.9) has joined
  158. <storryeater> oh boy, first of all, I never said "ever", secondly, art is like that sometimes Rhet
  159. <Cyrix> to formulate it a bit more drastically?
  160. <abyssonym> I'm absolutely not qualified, I'd never describe myself as a writer even though I aspire to write
  161. <Rhet> They feel like the currently non-existent barrier to entry leads to too much noise and not enough signal
  162. <Rhet> and that limiting voice to those who have written and presented something would help improve that ratio
  163. <storryeater> also, I read the rules several times, and all criticism seems soliticized by default under the current rules
  164. <Cyrix> I mean - we have rules in this channel? I think one of them is that if a creator says he doesnt want any more crit from you then you *have* to stop?
  165. <storryeater> ^
  166. <storryeater> I mean, the rules can change
  167. <Rhet> Yes, that's literally what's being discussed
  168. <ixi> True, Antioch, but does that mean you only want writers in here to give opinions?
  169. <Saff|GM> i mean. I don't see why this is a problem. it's a channel for writers
  170. <Saff|GM> if you aren't a writer, why are you here?
  171. <abyssonym> yeah and to reiterate I don't think a writing circle is a bad idea
  172. <Cyrix> its a channel about writing
  173. <Cyrix> not a channel for writers
  174. <Rhet> The point of this channel is to provide value for writers, not for pure readers
  175. <Rhet> or so it would seem
  176. <abyssonym> but I liked having an environment to casually talk about topics in writing without having to *be* a writer
  177. <storryeater> as an aspiring writer
  178. <Nick> The obvious solution seems to be a split
  179. <storryeater> I came here to have an environment that would encourage me to write
  180. <Nick> Make a new channel for more casual discussion
  181. <storryeater> as well as give me some advice
  182. <Rhet> or make a #writing-criticism
  183. <Saff|GM> Cyrix> its a channel about writing
  184. <Saff|GM> 4:41 PM not a channel for writers
  185. <Saff|GM> Writers are the ones that write, Cyrix
  186. <Rhet> or #writerscircle
  187. <Antioch> That's reasonable, Rhet.
  188. <Rhet> But I had thought that that was what this channel was
  189. <Cyrix> it isnt exclusivly for writers saff
  190. <Rhet> and that general discussion about writing could be in #para, for instance, along with other general discussion
  191. <Antioch> There's been a lot of pushback on the idea of making more channels or subdividing them, hence why I proposed the change in the first place.
  192. <Saff|GM> I don't understand what you are trying to argue, cryix
  193. <Antioch> I was under the same impression, Rhet.
  194. <Nick> I sort of thought this channel was meant to be a writer's circle thing from the start
  195. <Antioch> ^
  196. <Antioch> It was.
  197. <Saff|GM> you're stating that a channel about writing is not for writers
  198. <storryeater> knowing that I'd have to submit something would have the opposite effect for me, not ure about others
  199. <abyssonym> Saff: you don't have to be a writer to be interested in writing, that's the crux of the issue
  200. <Antioch> I should have logs from the channel's inception.
  201. <Rhet> And the argument is that that lower level of interest in writing can be satisfied by the general discussion in, e.g., #parahumans, abys
  202. <Nick> It's just, like, really big now
  203. <Nick> so it fails to be what it was supposed to be, partially because of the size
  204. <Antioch> This is a pretty big channel, yeah.
  205. <Cyrix> @Saff|GM I am saying this is about writing - mostly about getting critique for something you have written. This *does not* inherently imply that you have to be a writer.
  206. <Antioch> I don't mind splitting it off.
  207. <Nick> but mostly because lots of us in here aren't actively writing
  208. <Rhet> Just like we don't have a #causalvideogamediscussion and a #seriousvideogamediscussion
  209. <storryeater> but I would understand it if other people feel different
  210. <Rhet> Because #parahumans is the first one
  211. <Antioch> Yes, but what's to say that someone's critique will be worthwhile, Cyrix?
  212. <Faustus|Kaspar> A smaller, focused group could accomplish more as a writer's circle, but general reader opinion seems like a #para thing.
  213. <Cyrix> @Saff|GM Furthermore it isnt for writers *only* but also for people who create other stuff. like drawings etc.
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