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xDraghun

InterFurious Plot Review

Jul 30th, 2015
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  1. Hello InterFurious!
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  3. My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. Lets start off with your structure.
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  5. Your structure is lacking some depth and nice detailing. ITs awkward how the bottom of the roof is attached to the side of the house. The different variation of wood related blocks you used dont rly go well together. /warp depthtutorial for extra reference.
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  7. Your tree looks a little weird how its bending towards one side. Also, you are forgetting to add the branches. Try adding more trees too based on all the extra space you have on your plot.
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  9. Your terrain is pretty flat and needs some loving. Try to add block variation by adding green clay, green wool, cobblestone, gravel, etc to the terrain. Make the bottom of your ponds sand/sandstone and add flowers/sugar cane around it for extra detail and realism. The lava flow doesnt rly go with the rest of the plot so I suggest removing it. Maybe you can make one huge mountain in the back with all the space your have. You might have to remove the 2 hills thou.
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  11. Overall, Your plot still needs some more work before I can rank you. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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