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Jun 17th, 2012
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  1. 1Outline
  2. Act 1 - Setup
  3. • Scene 1 - Twilight
  4. ◦ Twilight checking off $item from The Mater List. Perhaps have something silly?
  5. ◦ Looks through other items, sees: Go on First Date
  6. ◦ Panics because it's something she missed. maybe that part of the list got crinkled and she just missed it?
  7. ◦ Does research, comes up with lists of pros and cons for all of her friends
  8. ◦ Dash is chosen as best match -- maybe her criteria is based on romantic comedies? Or just romances in general.
  9. ▪ Well. I think I'm going to have Twi like the loyal/honest qualities in Dash AND AJ, but she chooses Dash. I need to be subtle, but I want her to already liek Dash a bit and she kinda makes up skewed excuses to pick Dash.
  10. • Scene 2 - Dash
  11. ◦ Twilight just out and out surprises Dash by asking her out. At first Dash is just confused.
  12. ◦ Dash is impressed with Twi's straightforwardness/confidence. Poke fun at other ship fics?
  13. ◦ Dash has never really turned her mind to the real possibility of herself being in a romantic relationship. Fans and ponies who love her awesomeness yes, but a romantic attraction to her has never crossed her mind
  14. ◦ I like Dash needs a while to think and talks to AJ. AJ can help her realize what this means (were it real). After she decides that she'll say yes -> giddiness
  15. ◦ Dash says yes and is looking forward to this. More excited than Twilight.
  16. ▪ I MUST get this across: Dash likes and is super excited about having somepony like her romantically.
  17. ▪ Dammit I could go into some much background here. 7 days kits. 7 days
  18. • Scene 3 - Party
  19. ◦ Short - Dash tells Twi, we get reactions
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  22. Act 2 - Dash Falls in Love
  23. 2.1 - Twilight PoV
  24. • Spike is asleep by the time she gets home. He's been chased by the CMC dragon catchers all day.
  25. • Twilight is going to use Dash's plan of seeing the Daring Do play/liveaction thing in Canterlot.
  26. ◦ She'll resolve to buy tickets in the morning.
  27. • Use this time to also think about how great it is that Rainbow is helping her with her plan.
  28. • She'll grab one of the books (need Title?) and read it
  29. ◦ Reflect on how it's weird she likes these so much
  30. ◦ Not the best writing
  31. ◦ Must be the character of Daring herself
  32. ▪ Show Twi's latent crush on Dash through Daring's attributes
  33. • She'll fall asleep dreaming of Daring rescuing her from a mineshaft or something. Only it's Daring Dash.
  34.  
  35. 2.2 - Twi Pov?
  36. • Twilight is going over her notes and checklist mentally--it's totally not real
  37. • Dash is excited - infectious excitement. Twilight was set to just enjoy the show, but now she's actually eager for it.
  38. ◦ If split PoV, Dash did her hair up again. She's allowed to look nice! Otherwise, Twilight will just be shocked at her mane
  39. • Dinner and a Show
  40. • During the course of the show, Dash will be pretty physical. If I use split PoV, she'll see another couple and emulate them. If not, she'll be physical (she is a physical pony) and Twilight will see the other couple and emulate some of the things they are doing. Marvelling at how into her role Rainbow is.
  41. ◦ She will have to remind herself, it's just for science at least once
  42. ◦ Will allow herself to think it's real for just a few more minutes
  43. • The two will walk out of the play totally geeking out about Daring
  44. • Twilight decides it can't hurt to pretend it's real for just a little longer
  45.  
  46. 2.3 - Dash PoV
  47.  
  48. 2.4? May not need -- few days later? She's been busy on $OTHER PROJECT, Dash is behind on the weather
  49. • Twi, Rarity, Fs at the spa
  50. • PROBLEM: Twi still thinks it's pretend. How can she not let this slip?
  51. ◦ The only thing I can think of, is Twi still wants to pretend it's real to herself and explicitly doesn't mention it
  52. • Rarity wants to know all the romantic things (they didn't do) and keeps hinting that she really wants to help.
  53. • Shy gives Twi the idea to study up on the Wonderbolts?
  54. ◦ Twi will actually get into this at somepoint, with gusto
  55.  
  56. Act 3 - ?, =(, :D
  57. • Scene -1 - SCC
  58.  
  59. • Go over the highlights from the Date with Pinkie. Dash is still really excited
  60. ◦ Show was awesome
  61. ◦ Twilight was awesome
  62. ◦ Pinkie is excited
  63. ▪ Dash is excited
  64. ▪ Pinkie is excited
  65. ▪ Recursion
  66. ◦ Bouncing is required
  67. ◦ Loop-the-loop and other physical signs of excitement
  68. • Dash reflects on how great it was seeing that with Twilight and how their geeking out was at least 20% cooler
  69. • Points out how she always thought plays were boring until Twi showed her books?
  70. • Pinkie to throw another party to celebrate Successful relationship!
  71.  
  72. This bit changed SO MUCH I just deleted it. The planning was re-done in IRC chat logs and on postit notes at the office.
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  74.  
  75. Epilogue
  76. • Twi feels stupid
  77. • Dash is amused
  78. • Public Ice skating, Twi SUCKS at it and has to hang all over Dash, who is pro
  79. • Twi comments about how bad she is and how can Dash stand to have her hanging all over her and dragging her down in front of others.
  80. • Dash admits that this was pretty much her goal -- Twilight having to hang all over her for an evening
  81. • need sappy/sweet line to exit on
  82. ◦ I'm so bad at these
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