Dialog Changes

### List of Dialogue Changes ###

## Common ##

- Age Changes
   Itsuki  18 -> 17
   Tsubasa 18 -> 17
   Touma   18 -> 17
   Ellie   17 -> 16
   Yashiro 19 -> 18

- Item Names/Descriptions
   Nan-no Special -> Young Rabbits Special
   Nan-no         -> Young Rabbits
   Tiki@Street    -> Tiki@Gravure

- Advertisements
   A lot of the advertisements on Posters or on TV contain text mentioning the
   gravure magazine Young Rabbits featuring Ellie, Tsubasa and Maiko.

## Movie ##

- In the intro movie, a newspaper article was changed to correct Tsubasa's age
  from 13 to 12.

## Events ##

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| Chapter 2 |
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- Itsuki reads a magazine about gravure models (2 lines redone)
- Tsubasa's next work is for a gravure magazine (7 lines redone)
  The lines include Tsubasa being to shy to tell Itsuki what her new job is and
  Maiko explaining that it's a swimsuit shoot.
- Follow up conversation (2 player choice altered, almost entirely rewritten)
  Tsubasa says a swimsuit is too embarrasing and Itsuki has two dialogue options
    "Then, how about I tag along?"
	"You'd look great in any swimsuit."
  Tsubasa refuses Itsuki's offer to tag along, but Maiko lies to her and tells
  her that Kiria will be participating too, which makes Tsubasa fantasize about
  standing on a stage together with Kiria and gets her lost in thought.
- Tsubasa leaves, Maiko reveals her lies and Touma wants to drag Itsuki to the
  photo shooting (player choices were cut, total rewrite)
  Tsubasa leaves and Maiko reveals that she lied and Kiria's shooting was just
  for her new song and in a Jacket not in a bikini. Touma enters the room and
  asks what's going on, when he hears about the gravure shooting he wants to go
  and watch. He wants to drag Itsuki along, who has two dialogue option
    "Have a safe trip."
	"Won't we just be a nuisance?"
  In both cases Touma accuses Itsuki of not being a true man and Itsuki accuses
  Touma of not going there to cheer on Tsubasa but because he only wants to see
  models in swimsuits. Maiko then talks about her past as a gravure model and
  about how the same photographer she worked with is now doing the shooting.
  Itsuki and Touma remember the article about missing gravure models.
- Talk with Mr. Hatanaka in the office 1 (10 lines redone)
  Touma mentions that he was not able to get in to watch the gravure shoot, but
  says that it was cancelled and that he saw Tsubasa among the other girls.
- Talk with Tsubasa after the shoot (player choices were cut, slight rewrite)
  Tsubasa says how she made the photographer mad and it was all her fault that
  the shooting was cancelled, and how she caused trouble to the other models as
  well because of that. Itsuki has two dialogue options
    "So that's how it went..."
	"Everyone makes mistakes"
  Both lead to Tsubasa saying she will give it her all next time, then Itsuki
  tells her to be careful around the photographer and that mirages might be
  involved
- Itsuki refers to gravure models in the idolasphere (1 line redone)
- First confrontation with the photographer in the idolasphere, he talks about
  gravure modeling (4 lines redone)
- After Yashiro's performance, he tells Tsubasa to work harder on captivating
  the audience (3 line redone)
- Talk with Mr. Hatanaka in the office 2 (5 lines redone)
  He says how Maiko's photobook enthralled the man of Japan even though it
  wasn't a nude photobook and that Maiko and Horinozawa have been a great duo
  and created "My Complex" together.
- The cast finds "My Complex" (player choices were cut, total rewrite)
  Touma is drooling over the artbook and getting a nosebleed. Tsubasa has a look
  at the photo book as well. Itsuki has two dialogue options
    "Are you getting any inspiration?"
	"I'm sure you can do it, Tsubasa."
  In the meantime, Touma has become totally absorbed in the magazine and when
  they try to get him away from it he says that he couldn't help it and no guy
  could resist this, saying that Maiko looks like she's lowering her guard in
  the pictures. Tsubasa says no wonder Horinozawa got angry at her because she
  was just so embarrassed and wanted to get over with the shoot fast, just
  following instructions. She finds new resolve to not run away from the camera
  anymore. She then asks Itsuki to help come up with the poses. Itsuki tells her
  to do it sexier and more soulful.
- Tsubasa still thinks it's embarrasing but she has to do it (1 line redone)
- Encounter with Horinozawa, before the boss battle (11 lines redone)
  Horinozawa comments on the swimsuit and how it fits Tsubasa perfectly with
  her newfound attitude. Touma is a bit of a perv and can't unfix his gaze.
- After the boss battle, mentions of gravure modeling (2 lines redone)
- During the modeling session with Ellie, Maiko and Tsubasa (1 player choice
  altered, along with the lines involving it)
  Tsubasa asks Itsuki how the shooting was, he has one dialogue option
    "Could have used a little more skin."
  When saying this Tsubasa says they couldn't use her pictures for the magazine
  if she did that and that it would be a serious problem if she showed more skin
  Itsuki says Maiko and Horinozawa seem to be pleased so it must've been okay.
- Itsuki is introduced to Ellie and mentions the gravure shoot (1 line redone)

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| Chapter 3 |
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- Barry borrows Mamori's "phone charger" in the scene at the beginning of the
  chapter with Mamori, Barry, Itsuki and Maiko, this was changed back to borrowing
  her "handkerchief". (5 lines redone)
- The gravure magazine is referenced (5 lines redone)
  Ellie tells Tsubasa that the magazine they were in is sold out completely and
  says it's no wonder because she posed there herself in a bikini.

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| Chapter 4 |
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- Tsubasa gets a new job as "Sneeze Detective Maho" (1 player choice altered,
  2 lines redone)
  Itsuki has the dialogue option
    "Maybe that gravure modeling helped"

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| Chapter 5 |
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- Muse Fes started and Itsuki goes to check on Tsubasa (1 player choice
  altered, 10 lines redone)
  Itsuki has the dialogue option
	"You're not in a swimsuit?"
  Tsubasa responds by asking Itsuki if he asks because he liked it but he says
  he just figured she'd have to wear it again. Tsubasa says she's on break right
  now so she can relax and walk around normally.

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| Chapter 6 |
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- Maiko announces her retirement and continuation of her gravure modeling career
  (3 lines redone)

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| Side Stories |
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- The topic announcement for Barry side stories had a typo, it read "A new side
  story in now available", this was fixed.
- On Tsubasa's first side story she practices for her meet-and-greet event by handing
  out "freebies", that was changed back to handing out "tissues". (5 lines redone)
- Some of the side stories had dialogue changes, like Tsubasa mentioning her age
  in some occasions. Luckily the original files also included the correct
  translations so nothing had to be changed here. It might have been leftovers
  from before they started to change things.
- Ayaha second side story were she is worried about a writer had a grammatical error,
  it read "hasn't been able to making any progress", the word "make" was used instead
  of "making".