0:01:52.82 	Ikoma-senpai is as admirable as you'd expect, right?
0:01:58.56 	Academy's name should be capitalized
0:02:22.55 	[You have one single go at the bat!\NIf you can't hit it, treat the game as lost!]
0:02:50.20 	same as previous
0:02:55.04 	different 'from' instead?
0:04:36.05 	punctuation
0:05:07.36 	[Downing that much is no good.]
0:05:58.57 	remove one of the 'buts'
0:06:56.73 	[Especially for our leadoff hitter, Academy.]
0:07:45.11 	[These are the outfits you selected as their training uniforms, sir.]
0:07:47.51 	[What if she catches a cold with that bare belly!?]
0:07:59.46 	[Then, for the last one...\NMiss Kirei, could you give us some fan service?]
0:09:49.93 	[That's it?\NIt's the same for Chopin and Kote, right?]
0:11:12.24 	[Marukyū, you have no idea how I feel!]
0:12:00.97 	[Make it more overgrown!]
0:12:17.71 	[Thanks.]
0:12:31.50 	typo, associate
0:16:24.16 	[So she comes here everyday and does this, to check her form.]
0:16:59.82 	'are' instead of 'were'
0:17:12.19 	[... everybody has things they're strong at and weak at.]
0:17:27.85 	typo, someone
0:21:08.21 	i'd shorten this to 'their opponents' instead 'the opponents they are facing'
0:22:08.87 	[And this body and soul-]
0:22:14.36 	[How terrifying! Come back!\NCome on, come back to us!]
0:22:54.05 	[We can turn this around in one hit. Who's batting next?]
0:27:02.12 	[A fly wouldn't be able to stop that ball.]
0:27:36.43 	typo, 'in'
0:27:40.94 	[... was approaching us.]