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Tayter_Kat

MrFister

Jun 29th, 2015
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  1. Hello MrFister, I am Tayter_Kat and I will Be reviewing your plot...
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from houses to towers to stalls, and many more buildings. Your building is nice, and I can tell you have improved on it from the last reviews you were given. so great job! One suggestion is that there are a lot of empty spaces on your plot. You can add small structures, like bridges or any other ideas you have. Depending on what you build, make sure it has depth as well. Depth is the layers within a structure/wall. You can add depth to any build be adding trap doors, fences, buttons, slabs, and stairs into or onto a building/structure.
  5. Organics:
  6. This is anything living, like trees and flowers. Your trees look very nice, but I suggest adding some variation of leaves to them. Make sure the leaves are proportioned to the trunk instead of a huge base of a tree, then two leaves on a branch. The leaves should also be smooth instead of boxy.
  7. Terrain:
  8. This is the ground the avatars walk on, including cliffs and ravine. Your plot is not flat and it flows well., so great job!!!
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  10. Good Luck!
  11. Tayter_Kat | Jr Mod
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