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R*Novice Review: Captain_Hd

Jun 20th, 2015
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  1. Novice Review:
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  3. Nice plot so far, but it needs a bit of work before it cant rank :)
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  5. First ill talk about your terrain.
  6. Right now its a little boxy and unnatural. Try to smooth it out a bit and make it transition nicer. Add some small hills to the flat parts of your terrain to break the flat spaces and give the plot more depth. The terrain in the give below the plot more depth.
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  8. Your structures are decent, but they lack detailing and depth. Try to add details to your build, by accenting parts of your build with stairs, slabs, fences, walls, buttons etc. By adding layers to your build, you give your build more depth! So do try to work on that!
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  10. Your trees (if in the same style) need to stay more or less consistent. Having so much glass in one and none in the other makes your plot seem unbalanced. Also, if you go for glass in a tree, i would recommend green glass instead of lime. Lime is too bright and makes your trees unrealistic. Adding more trees to your plot to break up the empty space is also recommended if you dont want to add more structures :)
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  12. Hope this helps! Good luck!
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