Nineage - Today at 2:18 PM
id add that you can support your team with rocks and knock off
in the overview
RandomChamps - Today at 2:18 PM
all right
Nineage - Today at 2:19 PM
so change these as i go
RandomChamps - Today at 2:19 PM
yeah
Nineage - Today at 2:20 PM
wait
your set order
is weird
shouldnt sturdysmash be last
id say solid rock smash > defensive > sturdysmash
no?
RandomChamps - Today at 2:21 PM
well I ordered it in the order of success I've had with them, and it's also the same order as the XY analysis
but I can change it for sure
Nineage - Today at 2:22 PM
yeah id go the order i just mentioned but let me finish looking through it frist
RandomChamps - Today at 2:22 PM
all right
Nineage - Today at 2:22 PM
so sturdy set
team options
i think onix is a better example than dril
for electric checks
though dril doesnt have a fight weakness so mention both i suppose
RandomChamps - Today at 2:23 PM
sturdy set?
cause I can't find examples of Electric-checks
Drilbur is there as a Spinner
that happens to also check Electrics
Nineage - Today at 2:24 PM
no im in the sturdyjuice set
team options
RandomChamps - Today at 2:24 PM
yeah me too
Nineage - Today at 2:24 PM
Drilbur can also help deal with Tirtouga's Electric-type weakness and set up Stealth Rock, which can help Tirtouga secure crucial KOes
oh thats a
RandomChamps - Today at 2:24 PM
Rapid Spin users such as Staryu and Drilbur or Defog users such as Vullaby are mandatory in order to preserve Tirtouga's Strudy. Drilbur can also help deal with Tirtouga's Electric-type weakness and set up Stealth Rock,
Nineage - Today at 2:24 PM
continuation
RandomChamps - Today at 2:24 PM
yeah
Nineage - Today at 2:25 PM
fair enough
i think it might be worth including pawn checks
you sort of have it
but like
pawn is especially annoying
to that set
because knock + sucker
RandomChamps - Today at 2:25 PM
yeah
Nineage - Today at 2:25 PM
id say like
Pawniard checks blah blah blah. CHecks to other common prio users...
and then talk abt timb and gunk
moving on
solid rock set
RandomChamps - Today at 2:26 PM
ok
Nineage - Today at 2:27 PM
yo the move descriptions
for this set
shouldnt be exactly identical
change up the wording just a little bit more
i dont think you emphasize how cool solid rock is enough
RandomChamps - Today at 2:28 PM
that's not easy
Nineage - Today at 2:28 PM
in your set details
RandomChamps - Today at 2:28 PM
when they are the exact same moves used for the same reason
but I'll try
Nineage - Today at 2:28 PM
i mean
the same examples
are probably fine
just like
change the sentence structure
on a few sentences
ok so
back to set details
just say like
something abt why solid rock is useful at the very beginning
and then keep everything else how it is
usage tips mention weakening opposing prio users
and emphasize that although you CAN set up on traditional tirtouga checks
its better not to because you still take damages
RandomChamps - Today at 2:31 PM
all right
you're going faster than me tho
Nineage - Today at 2:31 PM
yeah rest of that set is fine
so ill wait for you to catch up
lmk when you are there
RandomChamps - Today at 2:32 PM
cool
all right I'm there
btw, I went with this:
However, this is usually not recommended, as Tirtouga will still take significant damage from them, making it easier to be revenge killed by fast Choice Scarf users and priority users.
to say that it is usually bad to set up on Mienfoo and Gunk
I'm not sure if that's good tho
Nineage - Today at 2:37 PM
yeah thats fine
RandomChamps - Today at 2:37 PM
cool
Nineage - Today at 2:37 PM
ok final set
RandomChamps - Today at 2:38 PM
disclaimer: this is easily the set I've used the least (and like the least)
Nineage - Today at 2:38 PM
mention that ajet is pretty weak
RandomChamps - Today at 2:38 PM
ok
Nineage - Today at 2:39 PM
id take out the not very common line
in usage tips
just say it can bluff a shell smash set to surprise opponents
mention croa in team options
when you mention poison types
just because tirt + gunk
is such a godcore
RandomChamps - Today at 2:41 PM
ok
Nineage - Today at 2:41 PM
other than that
looks great as usual
RandomChamps - Today at 2:41 PM
thanks!