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- [Crunchyroll]
- *00:14 - Style(minor) / Translate "Ayakashi" or add TL note.
- *00:17 - Literal(minor) / "celebrity complex" -> "luxury condo/apartment"
- *00:38 - Context(minor) / "It's been that way since I was little[...]"
- 00:57 - Error(negligible) / I can't help but put [...] people."
- *01:28 - Error(minor) / "Don't worry about me."
- **01:42 - Error, WTF / "And join your stupid clique?", "I'm not desperate for friends"... anything but the original line.
- *2:12 - Dodge(minor) / "That's the official cover for it."
- *2:50 - Context(minor) / Worst case, italicize "Thank you", a sarcastic sounding liberal TL here would be nice.
- 05:09 - Consistency(negligible)
- / "Such kind words!"
- **05:30 - Context / "Don't bother!", "No, thanks!"
- *07:37 - Literal / "Don't give me that sad puppy look!"
- *08:05 - Error(minor) / "What you're doing even exceeds
- that."
- 08:14 - Literal(arguable, recurring) / "[...] trained dog?"
- *11:10 - Literal(minor) / "Oh, where's my manners?", talking about forgetting self-intro, not first reaction.
- **11:17 - Context(quirk) / vs 10:54
- **14:04 - Error / "I think my childhood experience triggered{OR was the source of} my bad habit."
- *15:39+15:42 - Error(recurring, Consistency) / "I can't let him flatter me." "If I get flattered, I'd only hurt myself in the end."
- **17:30 - Error, lol / "We're {genuine }human beings."
- *18:55 - Detail, Nuance(minor) / "Do you really want to be tied to a collar?"
- *19:13 - Error(minor) / "tip of the nail" -> "toe"
- **22:02 - Error(minor on critical line) / "It was the beginning of a long, long tale."
- [Commie], Difference vs CR.
- -08:14
- -14:04 - Downgrade to minor, better nuance.
- -15:39+15:42
- -22:02
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