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  1. Hello! Im TheScottie and i will be reviewing you!
  2. The review is split into three parts, Structure, Organics and Terrain.
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  4. Structure. The structure is good enough to pass you too ember, i wouldnt really do anything to it.
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  6. Organics. There are no organics in your plot and i feel around the bridge, its a bit empty. I'd love to see you add some sort of organics like custom trees around the bridge to add something there.
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  8. Terrain. I like the terrain and it is good enough to pass, but it would be nice to see a little bit more shape to it in your next plot :D
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  10. Main Points.
  11. ~Add Organics around the bridge.
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  13. Good Luck!
  14. ~ScHottie
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