Day Skiing Trip in Equestria(Friend Edited Version)

This is my bad version of the skiing trip story after a friend tried to edit it.

>Day Skiing Trip in Equestria.
>You are Anon.
>Fluttershy and her friends had invited you to a skiing trip scheduled for today.
>It was going to be at a very tall mountain.
>Perfect for a nice ski time.
>You wake up at the sound of your alarm clock, excited for today.
>You spend your time fixing yourself up.
>You shit, shave, and shower today. The first time you successfully pulled off the famous triple S!
>You feel accomplishment flowing throughout your body. Either that, or it’s the water from the shower.
>After drying yourself off using some luxurious shampoo Rarity generously gave, you put on your winter clothes then head for Twilight's.
>You meet up with the rest of the p0nies and leave for the mountain.
>When you get there, you jaws slam into the ground.
Holy crap!
>The mountain looks amazing.
>Twilight pulls out a book from her bag.
>"It looks as great as the pictures in my book!"
>Rainbow Dash pulls out her skiing equipment.
>"This is gonna be so awesome!"
>Pinkie Pie pulls out some ice skates and runs towards the frozen lake.
>Fluttershy starts tugging your leg.
>"Anon?"
>You look down at her, pulling out your skiing equipment with a smile.
What do you want, Fluttershy?
>"I-I was wondering if you could t-teach me how to ski? This is my first time."
>You give her a "seriously?!" face.
>"It's just that I don't have time for skiing unlike all of my friends."
>You sigh, and look at her.
I guess I could help you out. Could be fun.
>Her wings flutter and she gives you a hug.
>"Thank you Anon!"
>The two of you walk to a short snow hill to help Fluttershy practice the basics of skiing.
>You help her put on her gear.
>She giggles a couple times.
Alright, just stay calm and push yourself forward and you should be fine.
>Fluttershy attempts to ski down the hill, failing and rolling into a ball.
>You can't help but chuckle.
>This continues for hours, until you finally start to lose patience.
Can I please go down that giant mountain instead of stay here, wasting my time teaching you?!
>Fluttershy covers her head with her mane.
>"I-I'm sorry Anon. You don't have to stay with me. Have fun."
>You run off towards the top of the mountain wit a slight feeling of regret towards your sudden outburst.
She didn’t deserve that. Damn my impatience!
>When you finally reach there, you are tired as hell.
>"Anon! What are you doing?!"
>Rainbow dash picks you up, shoving your ski's into your arms.
Well sorry, but not all of us can go up mountains extremely fast.
>Rainbow Dash facepal-err facehoofed.
>"But Fluttershy did it!"
>She points at Fluttershy, who is just sitting there.
>She waves at the two of you.
>How did she get here that fast?
>"Hi Anon. Is being beating by me in a walk up a mountain your fetish?"
>You decide it would be best to ignore her.
>Rainbow Dash puts her skiing goggles over her eyes.
>"So Anon, ready for a race?"
>You equip all of your gear, and nod.
I'm always ready.
>Rainbow Dash draws a line in the snow.
>"We start here. First one down wins."
>The two of you walk onto the line, and get ready to start skiing.
>"We start in 3...2...1..."
>She pushes you into the snow.
>"GO!"
>Rainbow Dash rushes down the mountain, gaining her lead due to cheating.
>When you are about to go down, you hear a weird noise.
>You turn around to see Fluttershy freaking out.
>"AVALANCHE!"
>You grab Fluttershy and attempt to run.
>The avalanche quickly engulfs the two of you, making you both pass out.
>...
>You wake up hours later.
>You are buried under the snow, not know what is going to happen next.
>You look around, and find Fluttershy’s hair hanging out in the snow next to you.
>You frantically start digging her out.
>She is still unconscious.
>You start digging around more to find that you both conveniently were buried in front of a cabin.
>You carry Fluttershy into the cabin, putting her on the couch.
>You look around the cabin to see if anyone is here.
>You see a closed door, and proceed to open it.
AHHHH!
>A skeleton comes out of the door you opened.
Better hide that before Fluttershy sees it.
>You grab it and bury it in the snow outside.
>You hear some footsteps when you turn around.
>"Where am I?"
>Guess Fluttershy's awake.
Fluttershy, we were in an avalanche and I brought us to this cabin.
>Fluttershy starts looking at you with concern.
>"An avalanche?!" How are our friends going to find us?! How are we going to surviv-"
>You put your hand over her hoof.
I don't know how we're going to get out, but I have a ton of food and water. Survival shouldn't be a problem. Well, except for the cold."
>Fluttershy starts moving close to you.
>"I heard cuddling helps with the cold."
>You look at her in the eyes.
>With thoughts creeping into your mind of the idea, you push it out of your mind.
Yeah, no. We are not cuddling.
>Fluttershy's ears start to lower.
>"Oh."
>You feel a little guilty considering she is a good friend of yours.
>You walk away from her and find a bookshelf filled with books from top to bottom.
>You grab a book and start reading it feeling like Twilight Sparkle in her free time.
>...
>After a couple of hours, you check on Fluttershy.
>When you see her, she is starting to shake a little.
>She notices you, smiling
>"Hi Anon."
Hi Fluttershy.
>You notice that her teeth are shaking lightly.
Do you want my coat or something? I'm sure it would help you.
>You take your coat off and wrap Fluttershy with it.
>The idea of cuddling creeps up into your mind again, but you find the will power to push it away again.
>Her shaking has stopped after that.
>"Thanks Anon."
>You notice that there is a fireplace, so you pull put your lighter and burn the wood.
>The room starts to brighten up.
>Sadly, the wood was limited, so the fire lasted only for a few minutes.
>Everything starts to get cold again.
>Fluttershy starts poking you.
>She is starting to shake a lot.
>"A-A-Anon? I-I'm not trying to hit on you or anything of the like, but I'm really cold. Can we please cuddle?"
No.
>Thinking back to the book you read which happened to have some strategy in keeping warm, you recite what you read to Fluttershy in hopes that it helps.
You know, I read in that book that it’s best to keep your body moving. The blood flow warms the body a little.
>”Oh, that’s interesting. I’ll try that.”
>Fluttershy starts performing basic pony stretches, her shivering dieing down a little, but not completely.
>An hour passes by.
>Fluttershy looks really cold right now.
>She is shaking a lot.
>She stutters all of her words, and has trouble moving.
>Guess it's time to accept the cuddle.
>You move in close to her and wrap your arms around her.
>She smiles at you.
>" T-Thanks Anon."
>She starts to wrap her hooves around you.
>It actually feels nice and warm.
>Guess she wasn't making this up.
>...
>A bunch more hours pass by, and it is nighttime.
>There was only one bed, so you just share it with Fluttershy.
>She moves in really closely to you.
>Her soft hair is in your face.
>She moves to nuzzle you.
>Did she plan this or something?
>When you wake up, you notice that Fluttershy is holding you tightly.
>She looks unhappy, and very cold.
>"Anon?"
>You look at her.
>"How long do we have to endure this cold until our friends find us?"
>You shake your head.
I don't know Fluttershy. We can only hope for the best.
>She looks up to you.
>"I hope they can find us."
I hope so too.
>Two days later...
>The weather has been getting worse by each minute.
>Both of you are shivering a lot.
>Cuddling helps, but doesn't get rid of all of the cold.
>"Anon?"
>You look at her.
Yes Fluttershy?
>"I-I don't think that I'm go-"
>She lets go of you.
>Oh no. Not the hypothermia!
>You start shaking her.
Fluttershy? Are you ok?!
>She is not responding.
>No.
>You start shaking her even more.
Fluttershy! Answer me!
>Still no response.
>You refuse to believe she’s dead and feel her heart for a beat.
>Your hopes rise as you feel an ever so gentle beat.
>You start frantically running around the cabin, searching for things to burn to keep her warm.
>You find a broken, wood table in the storage.
>You bring the wood into the fireplace.
>After that, you take Fluttershy and place her in the warmth of the fire.
>You hold Fluttershy in your arms very tightly.
>Tears start running down your face.
Don’t worry Fluttershy. I won’t let anything happen to you.
>You feel Fluttershy weakly shifting in your grasp.
>”Th…Thanks…Anon…”
>Her voice sounds really dry and weak, almost quieter than she usually speaks.
>This can't be happening.
>Fluttershy doesn't deserve this.
>She may have been annoying with her crush on you, but she was still the nicest p0ny you've ever met.
>She was the only that that didn't discriminate against you when you first arrived here.
>She offered you a room in her cottage when you had no place to stay.
>She was always fun to hang out with.
>And now she is on the verge of death.
>Fluttershy drifts into a deep sleep in your arms, shifting about a little bit to make herself comfortable.
>You feel slightly warmed
>God I hope we get out of here before…
>The door to the cabin slams open.
>"Anon! Fluttershy! We're here to rescue you guys!"
>That was Rainbow Dash.
>This is not going to be easy for her to see.
>"There you are! I was so wor-"
>She looks down, seeing Fluttershy lying there weakly.
>"Fluttershy?"
>Fluttershy opens her eyes slightly to see Rainbow Dash.
>”H…help…”
>She grabs Fluttershy and flies off as fast as she can to Ponyville.
>Twilight soon enters the cabin and retrieves you.
>After what you’ve been through, knowing Fluttershy is most likely not going to make it, you start to form tears in your eyes.
>Why her...
>Hours pass by when you wake up in a bed, at first not remembering where you are.
>After examining the white walls, ceilings, and floors, you remember you’re in the hospital.
>You sit up straight in a rather swift motion, only to be held back by twilight.
>”Easy there, Anon. You need rest. Doctor’s orders.”
>You look at Twilight with huge worry.
Fluttershy, how’s she doing?
>They’re doing everything they can to save her. Right now, things are very bleak.
>Twilight sighs
>”Anon, thank you for trying to help her out. She’s one of my closest friends and knowing you tried your best to help her out when her life depended on it, I just can’t think what might have happened if you weren’t there. Thank you, deeply.”
>Taking in Twilight’s words, you feel you really don’t deserve her thank you.
I was just doing what any…pony, I guess, would do in that kind of situation.
>Anon, it’s more than that! You may have just saved a pony’s life, despite being incredibly different!
And you think being different, I may not have had just the same capabilities as any pony in this world?! Damn it, why do you discriminate? Being me doesn’t mean I can do any less! Haven’t you ever learned through your studies in friendship or at least any of those books you stick your nose in 24/7?!
>Twilight is about to open her mouth to say something, but closes it in realization that you’re right.
Just…tell me how Fluttershy is doing.
>Days pass by and you can’t help the anxiety rising up in you.
>Today is the last day Fluttershy remains in the hospital.
>It’s a day that determines whether she lives or dies.
>You’re sitting in the waiting room, opposite of the mane 6, staring down the halls, waiting for Nurse Redheart.
>Your heart leaps as you see her coming down the hallway.
>”You 6 here for Fluttershy?”
>You and the other 5 nod yes in unison.
>”Well, I will be glad to report that Fluttershy is doing a lot better than before. She will is going to survive.”
>At that moment, the world seems to stop as you feel a tsunami of relief crashing against you with immense force like a piano dropping from the sky onto some unsuspecting pony’s head.
>”She just needs a little bit of rest for about 5 hours, then she can return home.”
>Nurse Redheart walks off with Twilight explaining more details about what they should and shouldn’t do with Fluttershy yet.
>”Hey! You know what this calls for?” Pinkie Pie starts with a bounce.
>”A PARTY!”
>You and the other 5 are somehow at Sugarcube Corner with decorations all set up for a party.
>You feel a pit in your stomach and decide to sit at a corner table in isolation.
>Twilight notices and walks over to you.
>”You okay, Anon?”
>You look over to Twilight before looking down at your cupcake.
No. It should have been me in that hospital. I should have been the one freezing to death.
>Twilight sits down next to you.
>”Don’t say that. You saved a life. That’s all that matters.”
>You just sigh.
>”I’m sorry for what I’ve said earlier. What I’ve done. Saying what you said earlier has taught me a lesson I will not soon forget. Thank you.”
>You look at Twilight who is gratefully smiling at you.
>After an awkward moment, you decide there is one last thing left to do. Party.
>A few hours pass by and you all gather at the hospital to see Fluttershy, finally back up on her hooves.
>As soon as she leaves her room, the others open up to her to join in a group hug, only to be surprised as she flies right past them.
>She’s coming straight for you!
>You fall to the ground as she tackles you with a hug so tight, you feel like you can’t breathe.
>”Thank you so much, Anon! I’m so glad you were there, I l…”
>You can see she’s holding back something.
>She breaks away from you and backs away shyly.
>”Umm…I’m sorry. I wasn’t really going to say anything like… you know. Right?”
>Now you believe it’s the time to say something that’ll either make or break your friendship.
>Fluttershy looks at you in worry of what you might say.