My fanfic intro and prologue

Fanfic Project Shadowblade,

Intro:

[In the main conference room at the Science and Research department]
>"Okay, I have something very important, to tell, so take a seat gentleponies"
>It was a large white earth pony with a black mane. His looks told you that though his behavior was calm, he was accustomed
to be obeyed.
> This was not somepony to trifle with.
> Everypony took a seat at the big conference table, while the big earth pony proceeded to sit down at the front of the table.
> "As you all might know the changelings form an ever increasing threat to our society. Their ability to camouflage themselves makes
it possible for them to infiltrate at the highest levels of pony society."
>"We are tasked to counter this treat. From now on this project will be called project Shadowblade."
>"Does anypony have an idea how to counter those dang changeling spies"
>A green pegasus rose from his chair:
>"Well our unicorn scientists could make a device wich will enable our agents to spot them, or otherwise disable their ability to
camouflage"
>"Good idea but that won't work" A blue unicorn said. "Our magic seems to be ineffective agains them"
>And the suggestions went on for an hour. Until the white earth pony silenced them and said:
>"You" pointing at the small orange pony at the back of the table.
>"Ehm me sir?" The pony asked nervously.
>"Yeah of course you. I haven't heard anything coming from you since the start of this meeting. Do you have any suggestions?"
>"Well I might have one but it isn't that good you see I really th..."
>"Cut the talk, and tell us your idea"
>"Ehm okay, so I thought if we couldn't spot them right away, we might spot them if we had an agent who keeps an eye on everypony.
He could notice strage behavioral patterns at certain employees. And so he might spot the changelings.
>The big pony was smiling
>"Well that is an excellent idea. But how will we get everypony spied on by agents without raising general suspicion that something
might be going on?"
>"Well we could always infiltrate our own agents.
>"Well how are we supposed to do that then?"
>"We can making him change appearance just like changelings!" A red pony said enthusiastically.
>The big earth pony raised from his chair:
>"Okay ponies. It sounds like we have got a plan. Tell our science department to get started right away. You are authorised to
search for eligible subjects amongst the pony population. This meeting is now closed!"

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Prologue:
[It was a cold and dark night. 2 black dressed ponies are walking to a house somewhere in Equestria.
>"Target is straight ahead. Let's go Blackhawk."
>"He should be at the first floor, the room facing us." It was the biggest of the 2, a pegasus.
>The other one was a thin unicorn. He really looked like the sneaky type
>"Ok give me a sec. to open the window"
>As the unicorns horn lit up, you could hear a click coming from the window.
>As the pegasus silently flew towards the window and opened it rather rude, a soft squeak could be heard coming from the room.
>"Careful!" the unicorn hissed. We really shouldn't let anypony hear it.
>"Calm down man, the kid just squeaked, nopony's gonna wake up from that."
>"Yeah, just get me inside."
>The pegasus picked up the unicorn and dropped him trough the window.
>As they approached the bed, a pitch black colt could be seen. Not older much older then 6 years.
>The pegasus didn't seem to be comfortable with the situation. "Do we really need to kidnap a little 6 year old colt"
>"Orders are orders Blackhawk, we're just supposed to follow then up. Besides, he's the first eligible one we found in the 4 years,
we are working on this project. Exactly the right color and enough neural capacity for moderations.
>"What did I sight up so."Sighed the pegasus.
>Then the colt opened his eyes and started screaming like never before. The 2 ponies jumped 3 feet in the air.
>"DAMM QUICKLY CATCH HIM AND LEAVE NOW!" The unicorn shouted shouted.
>2 worried looking parent ponies stormed inside the room.
>"WHAT IN CELESTIA'S NAME ARE YOU 2 DOING HERE!!!" A big earth pony stallion shouted.
>"Well I can see from who the kid got his incredible volume." the pegasus whispered.
>"I'm sorry, but I think this is all a misunderstanding." The unicorn said calmly.
>"A misunderstanding, you are walking in our house, GET OUT" That was probably the mother.
>"I'm afraid we can't do that sir."
>As the unicorn finished his sentence, the earth pony tried to tackle him. But was stopped mid air, when he was hit straight in the
chest by a magic spell.
>He was lying at the floor, not moving at all.
>"You KILLED him you bastard!"
>As the mother got hit by a spell too, the unicorn said  a grin present on his face:
>"Nah Miss, he's just paralyzed, as are you." He chuckled: "And I forgot to say, slight amnesia might occur".
>"Blackhawk I think you should need to go back and report to the staff at once!"
>"No way, I'm reporting to the guard! Those spells are the banned in all of Equestria and for a dang good reason too! I'm outta
this project."
>As the pegasus flew out of the window the unicorn stepped to the window and shot a spell.
>The pegasus smacked to the ground and a sickening crack could be heard.
>"I'm sorry mate, but I'm afraid that wouldn't be possible." He said while leaving the house.
[The next morning 2 ponies woke up in their house]
>"So darling, you know what I would like?"
>"Tell me sugar."
>"A colt!"
>The door slammed open as as a pony, crashed in.
>"HEY, YOU SHOULD REALLY SEE THIS THERE'S A DEAD PEGASUS LYING AT THE ROAD. EVERYPONY'S TALKING ABOUT IT."
>"And you should have a colt, you're the perfect couple!"
>.............

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