2019-09-26 Writing: room pictures

Greg Malivuk
gmalivuk@staffordhouse.com
http://www.pastebin.com/u/gmalivuk - Notes from all classes
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Read your partner’s paragraph and draw the room they described. (You can draw a simple floor plan.)

Then check your partner’s drawing. Does it match the room?

Then find and fix mistakes in your partner’s writing.
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Next to the door there is a closet.
Next to the door is a closet.
*Next to the door there is my closet. (WRONG)
Next to the door is my closet.

On my bed there are several pillows and a warm thick blanket.
On my bed there is a warm thick blanket and several pillows.
My bed has several pillows and a warm thick blanket.
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Homework: fix your mistakes and email me a “perfect” version of your paragraph. You can send me the text or take a photo of your paper.