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- [2014-06-21 16:04:25] <Zyn> HEEY
- [2014-06-21 16:04:27] <Zyn> So
- [2014-06-21 16:04:31] <Zyn> I finally got to writan
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- [2014-06-21 16:52:36] <thedeadlymoose> Okay!
- [2014-06-21 16:52:40] <thedeadlymoose> I...
- [2014-06-21 16:52:50] <thedeadlymoose> ...am cheating on our group, along with dex, at the moment. hahaha
- [2014-06-21 16:53:02] <thedeadlymoose> it's that time of the week when Light is online, so eschatology discussion is happening
- [2014-06-21 16:53:24] <thedeadlymoose> What's your approximate weekend schedule, if you have one? :o
- [2014-06-21 16:53:45] <Zyn> guh
- [2014-06-21 16:53:45] <thedeadlymoose> I should be on off and on today, and same tomorrow; I can be texted as well (and can respond saying 'not now' if that's the answer)
- [2014-06-21 16:53:46] <Zyn> busy
- [2014-06-21 16:53:49] <thedeadlymoose> hahahaha, damn
- [2014-06-21 16:53:55] <Zyn> well
- [2014-06-21 16:53:58] <Zyn> actually, sort of like yours
- [2014-06-21 16:54:00] <Zyn> on and off
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- [2014-06-21 16:54:14] <Zyn> when my parents are home, I need to either be up to my hairline in work, eating, doing chores, or sleeping.
- [2014-06-21 16:59:00] <thedeadlymoose> okay, that's cool
- [2014-06-21 16:59:20] <thedeadlymoose> We still need to work out an exact format
- [2014-06-21 16:59:37] <thedeadlymoose> We also didn't finish discussing what Tales to do, but... I think we could just start writing some tales, really
- [2014-06-21 16:59:51] <thedeadlymoose> we have enough to get going atm
- [2014-06-21 17:00:07] <thedeadlymoose> we can do more discussion in between with whoever can sign online
- [2014-06-21 17:00:18] <thedeadlymoose> I will try to sign on whenever possible throughout the weekend
- [2014-06-21 17:12:36] <thedeadlymoose> Oh btw
- [2014-06-21 17:12:36] <thedeadlymoose> https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B6G6fFlLELG9SzRNZ0RoUm1XX3c/edit
- [2014-06-21 17:12:39] <thedeadlymoose> Vivax is working on that
- [2014-06-21 17:12:58] <thedeadlymoose> I'm concerned with him making it a word/google document unless he plans to print it out and do fancy things with it
- [2014-06-21 17:13:06] <thedeadlymoose> Because it would be neat for people to be able to write more
- [2014-06-21 17:13:22] <thedeadlymoose> Also not sure it's got enough spaces for info, but either way, a good start
- [2014-06-21 17:25:14] <Zyn> Mhm.
- [2014-06-21 17:25:31] <Zyn> Oh, does the hub need to be posted first?
- [2014-06-21 17:25:41] <Zyn> Or can we have contest stuff up without a hub?
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- [2014-06-21 17:57:43] <thedeadlymoose> copying for log purposes
- [2014-06-21 17:57:53] <thedeadlymoose> [17:56] Nala From Zyn in channel Zyn: http://wanderers-sandbox.wikidot.com/zyn-s-sandbox Second tab is basic text for the spirit staff GOI SCP. If it looks alright, I'll write up the journal versions. I'm thinking we could have multiple formats, for apparatus, entity/individual, phenomenon, location, etc (received at 2014-06-21 16:03:49 PDT, 1 h 52 m 38 s ago)
- [2014-06-21 17:57:53] <thedeadlymoose> [17:57] thedeadlymoose .tell Zyn I like that idea -- we can combine it with a consistent central format. We can have sections like FOR APPARATUS: FOR PHENOMENON: FOR X
- [2014-06-21 17:57:53] <thedeadlymoose> [17:57] Nala Acknowledged.
- [2014-06-21 17:57:53] <thedeadlymoose> [17:57] thedeadlymoose .tell Zyn The in-character style guide can explain this!
- [2014-06-21 17:57:53] <thedeadlymoose> [17:57] Nala I'll let them know.
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- [2014-06-21 23:30:31] <thedeadlymoose> okay cool
- [2014-06-21 23:30:38] <thedeadlymoose> alright so you gotta sleep soon
- [2014-06-21 23:30:54] <Zyn> Yeah.
- [2014-06-21 23:30:54] <Zyn> So.
- [2014-06-21 23:30:58] <thedeadlymoose> first, you get my PMs?
- [2014-06-21 23:31:02] <Zyn> I have the text up for the first GOI thing
- [2014-06-21 23:31:03] <Zyn> Yeah
- [2014-06-21 23:31:09] <Zyn> I can get to work on the in-character guide
- [2014-06-21 23:31:12] <thedeadlymoose> cool cool
- [2014-06-21 23:31:21] <thedeadlymoose> I think we need to connect with Vivax on that, but---
- [2014-06-21 23:31:23] <thedeadlymoose> actually, heh
- [2014-06-21 23:31:28] <thedeadlymoose> we can just do drafts at this point
- [2014-06-21 23:31:34] <Zyn> Yeah.
- [2014-06-21 23:31:38] <thedeadlymoose> Like, I think we're at the stage where we should start doing drafts
- [2014-06-21 23:31:42] <thedeadlymoose> And THEN remake them
- [2014-06-21 23:31:50] <Zyn> Yeah.
- [2014-06-21 23:31:58] <Zyn> Well, I'd like to get the text of my draft looked at
- [2014-06-21 23:32:02] <thedeadlymoose> I'm gonna work on two stories I have in mind, trying to work through them
- [2014-06-21 23:32:05] <thedeadlymoose> I'll do that right niw
- [2014-06-21 23:32:06] <thedeadlymoose> *now
- [2014-06-21 23:32:09] <Zyn> so I can start doing the actual hard copy "journal entries"
- [2014-06-21 23:32:11] <Zyn> Great
- [2014-06-21 23:32:29] <thedeadlymoose> Also copy/pasting a thing
- [2014-06-21 23:32:48] <thedeadlymoose> Zyn: I'm thinking we could have multiple formats, for apparatus, entity/individual, phenomenon, location, etc
- [2014-06-21 23:32:48] <thedeadlymoose> Me: I like that idea -- we can combine it with a consistent central format. We can have sections like FOR APPARATUS: FOR PHENOMENON: FOR X The in-character style guide can explain this!
- [2014-06-21 23:32:53] <thedeadlymoose> ^ For Dexanote persual
- [2014-06-21 23:33:01] <thedeadlymoose> Zyn: Wait, you wanna do the hardcopy ... I'm confused
- [2014-06-21 23:33:16] <thedeadlymoose> The hard copies are the journal entries, not the things done via the format, right?
- [2014-06-21 23:33:17] <Zyn> thedeadlymoose: I'm writing out the "GOI SCP"?
- [2014-06-21 23:33:29] <thedeadlymoose> Because we gotta actually get down the format before we finalize it
- [2014-06-21 23:33:36] <thedeadlymoose> Wait
- [2014-06-21 23:33:44] <thedeadlymoose> Is this what we were talking about with, like
- [2014-06-21 23:33:47] <Zyn> I'm writing out the GOI "article"
- [2014-06-21 23:33:53] <thedeadlymoose> Drafts that are like that
- [2014-06-21 23:34:02] <Zyn> the spirit staff.
- [2014-06-21 23:34:09] <thedeadlymoose> Yeah, I know. But the GOI "articles" have to be replicable on the website. We need a format that is wikidot.
- [2014-06-21 23:34:24] <thedeadlymoose> So they can't be /solely/ handwritten and photographed
- [2014-06-21 23:34:26] <thedeadlymoose> Make sense?
- [2014-06-21 23:34:31] <Zyn> Yeah?
- [2014-06-21 23:34:39] <Zyn> Haven't we had an article that's just a picture?
- [2014-06-21 23:34:43] <Zyn> Like, mainsite SCP.
- [2014-06-21 23:34:53] <thedeadlymoose> 682-J is a photoshop piece
- [2014-06-21 23:35:00] <Zyn> Yeah, like that.
- [2014-06-21 23:35:07] <Zyn> Not everything needs to be handwritten
- [2014-06-21 23:35:12] <Zyn> But I would like to have at least one
- [2014-06-21 23:35:14] <thedeadlymoose> Yeah, but no one can duplicate that except Faminepulse -- and the format has to be consistent
- [2014-06-21 23:35:19] <thedeadlymoose> I'm cool with that
- [2014-06-21 23:35:22] <Dexanote> ok wait
- [2014-06-21 23:35:23] <Dexanote> what
- [2014-06-21 23:35:25] <Dexanote> sigh
- [2014-06-21 23:35:25] <Dexanote> fehfge
- [2014-06-21 23:35:27] <thedeadlymoose> But we have to do one of two things
- [2014-06-21 23:35:30] <Zyn> Format is consistent
- [2014-06-21 23:35:34] <thedeadlymoose> Okay
- [2014-06-21 23:35:37] <Zyn> mine will just happen to be written out?
- [2014-06-21 23:35:39] <Zyn> Orrrrr
- [2014-06-21 23:35:39] <thedeadlymoose> But we haven't decided on format
- [2014-06-21 23:35:48] <Zyn> If you want, I can just have that last blurb be handwritten
- [2014-06-21 23:35:54] <Zyn> the rest will be in a quote box
- [2014-06-21 23:36:13] <thedeadlymoose> The other option would be to have all the articles be written with wikidot formatting, but some of them are based off 'original materials'
- [2014-06-21 23:36:22] <thedeadlymoose> the original materials are the proto-article that doesn't need to follow format
- [2014-06-21 23:36:50] <thedeadlymoose> We COULD write out the entire thing, but if so, you + whoever else does that will have to wait til we actually get down the format.
- [2014-06-21 23:36:59] <thedeadlymoose> Because we haven't decided it firmly yet
- [2014-06-21 23:37:00] <Zyn> Yeah, that's fine with me.
- [2014-06-21 23:37:05] <Zyn> Okay.
- [2014-06-21 23:37:07] <thedeadlymoose> Which version? XD
- [2014-06-21 23:37:09] <thedeadlymoose> *option
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- [2014-06-21 23:37:27] <Dexanote> Is it okay that i /still don't know what content we are supposed to be producing/
- [2014-06-21 23:37:38] <Dexanote> or am i hilariously, insanely behind
- [2014-06-21 23:37:47] <thedeadlymoose> Dex: I dunno!
- [2014-06-21 23:38:03] <Dexanote> o k
- [2014-06-21 23:38:10] <Zyn> Oh, I'm uploading the picture of the spirit staff
- [2014-06-21 23:38:12] <thedeadlymoose> I'm... confused by your confusion, I mean, I don't know how to answer that question
- [2014-06-21 23:38:14] <thedeadlymoose> Cool, Zyn
- [2014-06-21 23:38:37] <Dexanote> Moose i feel like i have no fucking idea what i'm supposed to be writing
- [2014-06-21 23:38:44] <thedeadlymoose> But Dex: I think all of us are confused to a certain extent because it's been so hard to get online at the same time and then we have to just, like, gush shit out XD
- [2014-06-21 23:38:45] <Dexanote> and you guys are like, a week and a half ahead of me
- [2014-06-21 23:38:51] <thedeadlymoose> I think that's an illusion
- [2014-06-21 23:38:52] <thedeadlymoose> Hahaha
- [2014-06-21 23:39:01] <thedeadlymoose> However
- [2014-06-21 23:39:07] <thedeadlymoose> Actually, wait
- [2014-06-21 23:39:11] <Zyn> http://wanderers-sandbox.wdfiles.com/local--files/zyn-s-sandbox/Spirit%20Staff.JPG
- [2014-06-21 23:39:14] <thedeadlymoose> Dex, are you clear on what the contest requirements are?
- [2014-06-21 23:39:14] <Zyn> : D
- [2014-06-21 23:39:16] <Zyn> It's kinda big.
- [2014-06-21 23:39:22] <Zyn> But I'll resize for the article
- [2014-06-21 23:39:41] <thedeadlymoose> Zyn: That's pretty sweet
- [2014-06-21 23:39:48] <thedeadlymoose> Zyn: What if you had smaller photos that are 'details'
- [2014-06-21 23:39:51] <thedeadlymoose> of component parts
- [2014-06-21 23:39:54] <Dexanote> No.
- [2014-06-21 23:39:59] <thedeadlymoose> and the component parts have specific functions and reference things
- [2014-06-21 23:40:01] <Dexanote> see like
- [2014-06-21 23:40:02] <Zyn> I have some of those
- [2014-06-21 23:40:04] <Dexanote> whenever we talk at all
- [2014-06-21 23:40:10] <Zyn> Idk about how formatting it would go though
- [2014-06-21 23:40:13] <Dexanote> either i'm distracted by other people
- [2014-06-21 23:40:15] <Dexanote> or I'm at work
- [2014-06-21 23:40:16] <Zyn> since I want it to be wikidot-friendly
- [2014-06-21 23:40:18] <Zyn> Aw hell
- [2014-06-21 23:40:21] <Dexanote> and distracted by other people
- [2014-06-21 23:40:22] <thedeadlymoose> Damn, Dex. :x
- [2014-06-21 23:40:22] <Zyn> I'll probably just end up like
- [2014-06-21 23:40:25] <Dexanote> I KNOW
- [2014-06-21 23:40:31] <thedeadlymoose> It's cool, we can catch up
- [2014-06-21 23:40:36] <Zyn> Typing up the text, since writing it out would mean another picture that'd be hard to format
- [2014-06-21 23:40:39] <thedeadlymoose> Though that means I have to ask if now is a good time, haha
- [2014-06-21 23:40:44] <Zyn> At least the component things can be stacked...
- [2014-06-21 23:40:50] <Dexanote> well its 240 am for me
- [2014-06-21 23:41:22] <thedeadlymoose> Zyn: Format... Yeah. >_< But it would be awesome though if we can format it right
- [2014-06-21 23:41:25] <Dexanote> so why not
- [2014-06-21 23:41:28] <thedeadlymoose> Zyn: Like "Details" with paintings
- [2014-06-21 23:41:45] <thedeadlymoose> Except not just for art reasons, but, like
- [2014-06-21 23:42:04] <thedeadlymoose> "This segment of the staff makes use of X and Y principles and Z materials and magically relevant shapes/items"
- [2014-06-21 23:42:17] <thedeadlymoose> hell you could even reference the magical systems it's taking from
- [2014-06-21 23:42:30] <thedeadlymoose> Dex: Okay. First let's critique the content of Zyn's GOI SCP
- [2014-06-21 23:42:38] <thedeadlymoose> like "is this cool"
- [2014-06-21 23:42:59] <thedeadlymoose> Zyn can you link?
- [2014-06-21 23:43:16] <thedeadlymoose> wait, I have it: http://wanderers-sandbox.wikidot.com/zyn-s-sandbox 2nd tab
- [2014-06-21 23:43:35] <Zyn> Alright, "component" picture is uploading
- [2014-06-21 23:43:43] <Zyn> I don't want it to have more than 2 images, though
- [2014-06-21 23:43:45] <thedeadlymoose> " - elemental incorporation: wood, river crystals, rice straw twine" > I like it -- esp if it goes with a sort of 'what study/school of magic this falls under'
- [2014-06-21 23:43:52] <Zyn> Since it's supposed to be sort of like a journal entry snippet
- [2014-06-21 23:43:55] <thedeadlymoose> Your call, Zyn -- 1 would be enough
- [2014-06-21 23:43:57] <thedeadlymoose> Is it?
- [2014-06-21 23:44:09] <Zyn> Yeah, since people are actively keeping record of these things
- [2014-06-21 23:44:15] <thedeadlymoose> See, I'm not clear on that
- [2014-06-21 23:44:20] <thedeadlymoose> Are they all gonna be journal entry snippets?
- [2014-06-21 23:44:41] <Zyn> No. This one is a personal item, though, so the journal entry is sort of a failsafe.
- [2014-06-21 23:44:48] <Zyn> I imagine other things will be actual records
- [2014-06-21 23:44:53] <Zyn> like, for the craftsmanship section
- [2014-06-21 23:45:00] <Zyn> there'd be variants on "handmade"
- [2014-06-21 23:45:08] <thedeadlymoose> "- maintenance: none required, though handle with care." I like this too, also like the invocation
- [2014-06-21 23:45:12] <Zyn> so, "forged/smithed"
- [2014-06-21 23:45:22] <Zyn> for things like magic swords
- [2014-06-21 23:45:28] <thedeadlymoose> " - will change loyalty with strength of affinity with birdkin" > this seems excessively vague though I like it
- [2014-06-21 23:45:32] <Zyn> or alternatively, "summoned/ritual"
- [2014-06-21 23:45:40] <thedeadlymoose> the change loyalty thing seems like it needs elaboration
- [2014-06-21 23:45:47] <Zyn> thedeadlymoose: Yeah, gotcha.
- [2014-06-21 23:46:05] <Zyn> I figured that with every item the SH handles, they inherently want to respect the creator/original custodian
- [2014-06-21 23:46:16] <Zyn> whereas with Foundation it's all "screw previous owner, it's ours now"
- [2014-06-21 23:46:21] <Zyn> "let's run tests"
- [2014-06-21 23:46:32] <thedeadlymoose> Zyn: So this is gonna stay cliffs-notes-y, but other things following the format would be more fleshed out or fully written out?
- [2014-06-21 23:46:39] <Zyn> Yeah
- [2014-06-21 23:46:46] <Zyn> I'm currently working on my ideas for the format
- [2014-06-21 23:47:03] <Zyn> Like, I'll explain the maintenance/loyalty/invocation/craftsmanship sections
- [2014-06-21 23:47:07] <thedeadlymoose> man, the format's gonna either be really difficult or really easy. hahahaha
- [2014-06-21 23:47:13] <thedeadlymoose> in terms of how much we're gonna want to change
- [2014-06-21 23:47:17] <Zyn> Marp.
- [2014-06-21 23:47:21] <thedeadlymoose> but we should assume for now that you're gonna be writing draft 1, yeah?
- [2014-06-21 23:47:27] <Zyn> I can handle the Apparatus part?
- [2014-06-21 23:47:30] <thedeadlymoose> since you're already starting~
- [2014-06-21 23:47:48] <Zyn> We should have Apparatus, Entity, and Location
- [2014-06-21 23:47:57] <Zyn> Phenomenon can be based on Location, I think
- [2014-06-21 23:48:04] <Zyn> since spells and magic aren't really anomalies
- [2014-06-21 23:48:24] <Zyn> or heck
- [2014-06-21 23:48:36] <Zyn> Apparatus, Entity, Location, Enchantment
- [2014-06-21 23:48:38] <thedeadlymoose> I don't know how spells or magic would fit there
- [2014-06-21 23:48:41] <thedeadlymoose> ahh
- [2014-06-21 23:48:46] <thedeadlymoose> one sec though
- [2014-06-21 23:48:57] <thedeadlymoose> our overall problem is that this requires complexity for coolness
- [2014-06-21 23:49:14] <thedeadlymoose> but it /has/ to be intuitive and easy to use
- [2014-06-21 23:49:26] <thedeadlymoose> let's come back to that tho
- [2014-06-21 23:49:28] <Zyn> I'm going to make it like a multiple choice thing
- [2014-06-21 23:49:30] <thedeadlymoose> b/c more critique~
- [2014-06-21 23:49:35] <Zyn> mkay.
- [2014-06-21 23:49:37] <Zyn> Oh
- [2014-06-21 23:49:37] <Zyn> http://wanderers-sandbox.wdfiles.com/local--files/zyn-s-sandbox/Spirit%20Staff%20Component.JPG
- [2014-06-21 23:49:39] <Zyn> component pic up.
- [2014-06-21 23:49:48] <thedeadlymoose> " - primary use is mental/astral communing over long distances with birds or greater birdkin (does not appear to influence communication with ostrich or other flightless birds, will need to rectify)" > this is great, that last note
- [2014-06-21 23:49:59] <Zyn> :3
- [2014-06-21 23:50:09] <Zyn> btw "birdkin" is basically anyone that is part bird
- [2014-06-21 23:50:13] <thedeadlymoose> " - temperament is docile, if protective. Will disrupt communing connection if danger approaches either party" > this -- like the craftsmanship section about elements and focus -- requires further context
- [2014-06-21 23:50:21] <thedeadlymoose> (I think that could be clarified)
- [2014-06-21 23:50:25] <Zyn> "greater birdkin" would be anyone like that who can think and talk/read
- [2014-06-21 23:50:29] <Zyn> Okay
- [2014-06-21 23:50:34] <thedeadlymoose> Like, why are we meant to assume staff have temperaments
- [2014-06-21 23:50:48] <Zyn> it goes back to the "loyalty" thing
- [2014-06-21 23:50:54] <Zyn> ooh, I should mention that
- [2014-06-21 23:50:59] <Zyn> custom creations
- [2014-06-21 23:51:12] <thedeadlymoose> do all spirit staffs have temperaments? and why not something more specific, like "Apparatus Sub-Type: Nyz Spirit Staff"
- [2014-06-21 23:51:17] <Zyn> if items were commissioned or made to have one custodian in mind, they're finicky about who handles them
- [2014-06-21 23:51:18] <thedeadlymoose> Maybe not Sub-Type though
- [2014-06-21 23:51:27] <Zyn> like Excalibur
- [2014-06-21 23:51:48] <Zyn> Probably because I don't think that there would be specific terms for these things?
- [2014-06-21 23:51:58] <thedeadlymoose> "Enchanted Apparatus, Arthurian-Origin, Weapon"
- [2014-06-21 23:51:59] <thedeadlymoose> I dunno
- [2014-06-21 23:52:04] <thedeadlymoose> Uh
- [2014-06-21 23:52:15] <thedeadlymoose> There /would/ be. Like...
- [2014-06-21 23:52:21] <thedeadlymoose> I mean every single thing in real life, haha
- [2014-06-21 23:52:21] <Zyn> I figure it'd make more sense to just say something like "it's not gonna work for you if you weren't the one it was made for"
- [2014-06-21 23:52:30] <thedeadlymoose> That would be a good detail yeah
- [2014-06-21 23:52:36] <thedeadlymoose> But I mean the fact that it was made at all
- [2014-06-21 23:52:41] <thedeadlymoose> It must have some name and origin
- [2014-06-21 23:52:49] <Zyn> Idk about name
- [2014-06-21 23:52:51] <thedeadlymoose> My suggestion above is shitty, but Excalibur is a good example
- [2014-06-21 23:53:10] <Zyn> origin, yeah. Master Ishikawa made it from raw material
- [2014-06-21 23:53:11] <thedeadlymoose> it's a magical weapon of Arthurian origin. If it were real, scholars would've come up with categorizations for it
- [2014-06-21 23:53:20] <Zyn> Idk about naming the thing.
- [2014-06-21 23:53:27] <Zyn> Ohhh.
- [2014-06-21 23:53:34] <Zyn> Well... I'm not sure, since SH is global?
- [2014-06-21 23:53:37] <thedeadlymoose> Hell, the entire Wikipedia page
- [2014-06-21 23:53:39] <thedeadlymoose> Well, that's the thing
- [2014-06-21 23:53:42] <thedeadlymoose> SH is global
- [2014-06-21 23:53:51] <thedeadlymoose> Magical traditions are /always/ location and culture specific
- [2014-06-21 23:53:55] <thedeadlymoose> http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Excalibur
- [2014-06-21 23:54:00] <thedeadlymoose> Check out the intro to the Wikipedia page there
- [2014-06-21 23:54:18] <thedeadlymoose> It's extremely specific to Welsh and greater British origins
- [2014-06-21 23:54:23] <Zyn> Hmm.
- [2014-06-21 23:54:27] <Zyn> Maybe something simple, then?
- [2014-06-21 23:54:36] <Zyn> A "loyalty" section
- [2014-06-21 23:54:43] <thedeadlymoose> Well what I'm talking about here is 'fluff'
- [2014-06-21 23:54:47] <Zyn> and it'd be either "custodian-specific/commissioned"
- [2014-06-21 23:54:55] <Zyn> or "won in battle"
- [2014-06-21 23:55:04] <thedeadlymoose> A generic magic staff isn't very interesting beyond the ultra cool picture. Your details add it character but there should be context too
- [2014-06-21 23:55:12] <thedeadlymoose> What fictional school of thought in magic produced this?
- [2014-06-21 23:55:37] <Zyn> Hmm. I was thinking Eastern wizardry?
- [2014-06-21 23:55:40] <thedeadlymoose> Sure!
- [2014-06-21 23:55:45] <Zyn> Focus on zen and connection with spirits, etc.
- [2014-06-21 23:55:49] <thedeadlymoose> Yesss
- [2014-06-21 23:55:54] <thedeadlymoose> It's also helpful if more specific
- [2014-06-21 23:55:54] <Zyn> Basically it's like a cell phone for birds. :|
- [2014-06-21 23:55:59] <thedeadlymoose> Ahahahahaha
- [2014-06-21 23:56:00] <thedeadlymoose> ...
- [2014-06-21 23:56:04] <thedeadlymoose> HAVE SOMEONE COMMENT ON THAT
- [2014-06-21 23:56:05] <thedeadlymoose> lmao
- [2014-06-21 23:56:14] <thedeadlymoose> Get someone you know to write a notation on it
- [2014-06-21 23:56:20] <thedeadlymoose> "Basically this is like a cell phone for birds."
- [2014-06-21 23:56:33] <thedeadlymoose> Like in marker or something so it stands out. Like someone got ahold of that journal entry and commented :D
- [2014-06-21 23:56:44] <thedeadlymoose> You don't have to, but the idea is entertaining XD
- [2014-06-21 23:56:55] <Zyn> I can get my brother to do that. >.>
- [2014-06-21 23:56:57] <thedeadlymoose> Yessss
- [2014-06-21 23:57:09] <thedeadlymoose> Lemme explain further though on what I mean by history and context
- [2014-06-21 23:57:16] <thedeadlymoose> Let's take a real life type of staff
- [2014-06-21 23:57:50] <thedeadlymoose> Staff of office for example
- [2014-06-21 23:58:07] <thedeadlymoose> I think those came in part from shepherd's crooks
- [2014-06-21 23:58:12] <thedeadlymoose> That turned into a religious symbol
- [2014-06-21 23:58:14] <Zyn> caduceus
- [2014-06-21 23:58:32] <thedeadlymoose> A religious symbol of care for a flock + walking sticks
- [2014-06-21 23:58:48] <thedeadlymoose> Evolving ironically into a monarch's scepter in Western/Middle Eastern traditions
- [2014-06-21 23:59:06] <thedeadlymoose> Yeah, herald's staff for caduceus... from serpent worship, lmao
- [2014-06-21 23:59:28] <thedeadlymoose> This stuff doesn't have to be in your article of course
- [2014-06-21 23:59:43] <thedeadlymoose> But maybe something like commenting on other staffs out there that it's similar to
- [2014-06-21 23:59:57] <thedeadlymoose> "Probably / definitely derived from X tradition based on X thing"
- [2014-06-22 00:00:18] <thedeadlymoose> I mean, it's definitely not the only magic staff out there. It's an obvious enough idea that there's gotta be a lot of them.
- [2014-06-22 00:00:33] <thedeadlymoose> So details to make this specific, special, and placed in the context of the fictional world would help a lot
- [2014-06-22 00:00:53] <thedeadlymoose> (You're already part of the way there)
- [2014-06-22 00:01:16] <thedeadlymoose> Okay, back to more critique, lmao
- [2014-06-22 00:01:22] <thedeadlymoose> line editing I mean
- [2014-06-22 00:01:22] <Zyn> hurry
- [2014-06-22 00:01:26] <Zyn> gotta sleep soon
- [2014-06-22 00:01:27] <Zyn> >.>
- [2014-06-22 00:01:35] <thedeadlymoose> I love the feathers thing
- [2014-06-22 00:01:37] <thedeadlymoose> 'don't add more'
- [2014-06-22 00:01:56] <thedeadlymoose> I love the end note. It needs some cleanup for slight excess pretentiousness tho
- [2014-06-22 00:01:58] <thedeadlymoose> one sec
- [2014-06-22 00:02:07] <thedeadlymoose> which he idly suggested could be carried by “even the smallest of your friends”.
- [2014-06-22 00:02:08] <thedeadlymoose> cut idly
- [2014-06-22 00:02:15] <thedeadlymoose> that's an author intrusion, I think ;x
- [2014-06-22 00:02:41] <Zyn> oh lol
- [2014-06-22 00:02:48] <Zyn> whoops yeah, I'll take that out
- [2014-06-22 00:03:07] <thedeadlymoose> that segment is a bit where you could have his thoughts on where the staff came from -- his POV is too much "this is a generic magic thing I got b/c I'm expected to get it by genre tropes" -- think what your reaction would be, what you'd want to know about it
- [2014-06-22 00:03:17] <thedeadlymoose> remember the theme of knowledge --
- [2014-06-22 00:03:35] <thedeadlymoose> even if the master won't give away the knowledge, or won't unless he earned it, or how to make other staffs, etc -- he'd want to ask at least
- [2014-06-22 00:03:40] <thedeadlymoose> note some theories
- [2014-06-22 00:03:44] <Zyn> Oooh, okay.
- [2014-06-22 00:03:46] <thedeadlymoose> if he knows the right answer, maybe where he went wrong
- [2014-06-22 00:03:53] <thedeadlymoose> or hell
- [2014-06-22 00:03:57] <thedeadlymoose> even if he didn't question it then!
- [2014-06-22 00:04:01] <thedeadlymoose> though as a scholar he should have
- [2014-06-22 00:04:09] <Zyn> Yeah, it does seem pretty generic
- [2014-06-22 00:04:11] <thedeadlymoose> and maybe now he finds that embarrassing and gives theories / answers / both
- [2014-06-22 00:04:15] <Zyn> I'll make edits
- [2014-06-22 00:04:23] <thedeadlymoose> cool cool
- [2014-06-22 00:04:31] <Zyn> Sylvain /is/ supposed to sound a bit pretentious though
- [2014-06-22 00:04:32] <thedeadlymoose> I also think more of his persona could come across in the line edits
- [2014-06-22 00:04:36] <thedeadlymoose> Hahaha
- [2014-06-22 00:04:41] <thedeadlymoose> Well, if you can pull it off, definitely go for it
- [2014-06-22 00:04:46] <thedeadlymoose> Though pls do the cell phone thing lmao
- [2014-06-22 00:05:00] <Zyn> my headcanon is he's a Japanese red-crowned crane man who went to Paris and liked it so much he gave himself a French name
- [2014-06-22 00:05:02] <thedeadlymoose> It really helps to undercut pretentiousness if you have commentary joking on it
- [2014-06-22 00:05:03] <thedeadlymoose> Like
- [2014-06-22 00:05:04] <thedeadlymoose> Actually
- [2014-06-22 00:05:07] <thedeadlymoose> You read Djoric's recent stuff?
- [2014-06-22 00:05:19] <thedeadlymoose> Did you read the Saturn Deer / myth thing?
- [2014-06-22 00:05:25] <Zyn> The one with Able and Cain?
- [2014-06-22 00:05:42] <thedeadlymoose> http://www.scp-wiki.net/vision-at-betar
- [2014-06-22 00:05:43] <thedeadlymoose> That one
- [2014-06-22 00:05:56] <thedeadlymoose> Bookmark for later coz you gotta sleep soon unless you already read it
- [2014-06-22 00:06:03] <thedeadlymoose> It would've been gone /without/ the snarky commentary
- [2014-06-22 00:06:07] <thedeadlymoose> but the snarky commentary makes it amazing
- [2014-06-22 00:06:18] <thedeadlymoose> despite the mediocre +34 rating :P
- [2014-06-22 00:06:32] <Zyn> lol
- [2014-06-22 00:06:46] <thedeadlymoose> Zyn my headcanon is he's a Japanese red-crowned crane man who went to Paris and liked it so much he gave himself a French name
- [2014-06-22 00:06:47] <thedeadlymoose> I love this
- [2014-06-22 00:06:49] <thedeadlymoose> What if
- [2014-06-22 00:06:49] <Zyn> Yeah, and the journal is supposed to be a thing that's constantly being added to anyway
- [2014-06-22 00:06:53] <thedeadlymoose> what if we included a framing device
- [2014-06-22 00:06:58] <thedeadlymoose> commenting on the author of it
- [2014-06-22 00:07:03] <thedeadlymoose> explaining who S.A. is
- [2014-06-22 00:07:10] <thedeadlymoose> it doesn't have to be line notes
- [2014-06-22 00:07:15] <Zyn> "you're a prick, Syl."
- [2014-06-22 00:07:18] <thedeadlymoose> I mean, that's a great detail to include
- [2014-06-22 00:07:21] <Zyn> "you think birds are so cool"
- [2014-06-22 00:07:26] <Zyn> "I'M A CAT MAGE, BITCH"
- [2014-06-22 00:07:44] * Zyn kinda losing it right now
- [2014-06-22 00:07:46] <thedeadlymoose> "For those of you who don't know, Sylvain [last name] is a red-crowned crane man of Japanese origin who went to Paris and liked it so much he gave himself a French name"
- [2014-06-22 00:07:51] <thedeadlymoose> Hahahahahahaha :D
- [2014-06-22 00:07:52] <Zyn> Teehee
- [2014-06-22 00:07:57] <thedeadlymoose> I'm trying to hurry, sorry~
- [2014-06-22 00:08:08] <Zyn> plzto be hurry I need to sleep
- [2014-06-22 00:08:10] <Zyn> anything else?
- [2014-06-22 00:08:11] <thedeadlymoose> Basically I think you have a good thing here and I want to make it amazing XD;
- [2014-06-22 00:08:27] <thedeadlymoose> Yeah, the format thing we were gonna discuss :X
- [2014-06-22 00:08:29] <thedeadlymoose> Actually, you know
- [2014-06-22 00:08:33] <thedeadlymoose> why don't we discuss that more tomorrow
- [2014-06-22 00:08:47] <thedeadlymoose> the tl;dr is I agree with multiple choice but want to shift how we handle it
- [2014-06-22 00:08:58] <thedeadlymoose> make it more intuitive, idiot-proof it to a degree
- [2014-06-22 00:09:02] <thedeadlymoose> shall we pick that up again tomorrow?
- [2014-06-22 00:09:09] <Zyn> Yeah, sounds good.
- [2014-06-22 00:09:12] <Zyn> Goodnight, Moose!
- [2014-06-22 00:09:14] <thedeadlymoose> (also, feel free to hammer at my shit just as much)
- [2014-06-22 00:09:16] <thedeadlymoose> Goodnight! :D
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- [2014-06-22 00:09:34] <thedeadlymoose> okay
- [2014-06-22 00:09:35] <thedeadlymoose> Dexanote
- [2014-06-22 00:09:38] <thedeadlymoose> You around?
- [2014-06-22 00:09:39] <thedeadlymoose> Haha
- [2014-06-22 00:10:37] * thedeadlymoose guessing it's now 3:09 ._.
- [2014-06-22 00:12:12] <thedeadlymoose> Noting something in here for logging purposes that I sent in a tell to Zyn and will bring up again later: "A side note -- we really want a section that emphasizes how an object can be used safely, or person interacted with safely, etc. We need to counter the SCP Foundation's narrative of "the universe is scary and horrible and unknowable and the ONLY answer is to contain it and remain in...
- [2014-06-22 00:12:12] <thedeadlymoose> ...terror, else humanity goes bye-bye or has a horrible eternal hell-fate""
- [2014-06-22 00:12:13] <Dexanote> 312
- [2014-06-22 00:12:36] <thedeadlymoose> Shall we try and clear up your confusion?
- [2014-06-22 00:12:47] <thedeadlymoose> I am really anxious about being either confusing, condescending, or both :[
- [2014-06-22 00:12:53] <thedeadlymoose> But if you're awake enough we can go for it
- [2014-06-22 00:13:06] <Dexanote> Ughhhhh
- [2014-06-22 00:13:12] <Dexanote> when are you gonna be available tomorrow
- [2014-06-22 00:16:26] <thedeadlymoose> Off and on throughout the day
- [2014-06-22 00:16:55] <Dexanote> ok then on and off through the day can we discuss it :(
- [2014-06-22 00:17:09] <Dexanote> also moose
- [2014-06-22 00:17:26] <Dexanote> the only times youve come across as condescending is when you chain-smiley and hahahahaahaha in between
- [2014-06-22 00:17:31] <thedeadlymoose> :(
- [2014-06-22 00:17:32] <thedeadlymoose> But
- [2014-06-22 00:17:37] <thedeadlymoose> But I do that near constantly
- [2014-06-22 00:17:38] <thedeadlymoose> :(
- [2014-06-22 00:17:40] <Dexanote> its not every time but a few times when im mad i take it badly
- [2014-06-22 00:17:48] <Dexanote> also jesus you just did it XD
- [2014-06-22 00:18:12] * thedeadlymoose has no idea what to type that isn't one of those things D:
- [2014-06-22 00:18:23] <thedeadlymoose> or /me cries
- [2014-06-22 00:18:30] <thedeadlymoose> but that reminded me of Bunton
- [2014-06-22 00:18:33] <thedeadlymoose> and I wanted to die
- [2014-06-22 00:18:33] <thedeadlymoose> lol
- [2014-06-22 00:19:14] <thedeadlymoose> oh shitz
- [2014-06-22 00:19:15] <Dexanote> lol
- [2014-06-22 00:19:19] <thedeadlymoose> Dex have you read Troy's hub page
- [2014-06-22 00:19:20] <Dexanote> but yeah most of the time you're fine
- [2014-06-22 00:19:22] <thedeadlymoose> I didn't think to ask
- [2014-06-22 00:19:23] <Dexanote> just one or two times
- [2014-06-22 00:19:26] <thedeadlymoose> okay phew lol
- [2014-06-22 00:19:28] <Dexanote> yes
- [2014-06-22 00:19:36] <thedeadlymoose> ah, but had trouble processing it?
- [2014-06-22 00:19:53] <thedeadlymoose> ugh I need to calm down so I can sleep soon
- [2014-06-22 00:19:56] <thedeadlymoose> hard to switch off
- [2014-06-22 00:20:13] <Dexanote> also yes
- [2014-06-22 00:20:14] <Dexanote> YOURE FINE MOOSE
- [2014-06-22 00:20:19] <Dexanote> WE WILL TALK TOMORROW
- [2014-06-22 00:20:22] <Dexanote> I AM NO MAD WIT U
- [2014-06-22 00:20:25] * Dexanote huggles
- [2014-06-22 00:20:43] * thedeadlymoose hugs!
- [2014-06-22 00:20:45] <thedeadlymoose> hahahaha
- [2014-06-22 00:21:25] <thedeadlymoose> okay tomorrow we'll pick up and try to explain all this junk, hopefully Vivax makes an appearance
- [2014-06-22 00:21:44] <thedeadlymoose> if anything is gonna kill us it's that we can't get everyone online at the same time, lol
- [2014-06-22 00:24:28] <Dexanote> yep!
- [2014-06-22 00:24:30] <Dexanote> kill
- [2014-06-22 00:24:31] <Dexanote> death
- [2014-06-22 00:24:33] <Dexanote> maim
- [2014-06-22 00:24:37] <Dexanote> time 2 GOC
- [2014-06-22 00:25:25] <thedeadlymoose> lmao
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- [2014-06-22 19:45:03] <Dexanote> thedeadlymoose:
- [2014-06-22 19:45:26] * thedeadlymoose tabs over
- [2014-06-22 19:45:37] <Dexanote> ok
- [2014-06-22 19:45:42] <Dexanote> so
- [2014-06-22 19:45:47] <Dexanote> if we'd gone over what was required
- [2014-06-22 19:45:51] <Dexanote> and assigned things to do
- [2014-06-22 19:45:56] <Dexanote> i would have freaked out less
- [2014-06-22 19:46:04] <Dexanote> because there are a couple things i'm interested in here
- [2014-06-22 19:46:50] <Dexanote> specifically the scp as SH document, and encounter between another goi and SH
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- [2014-06-22 19:47:34] <Zyn> OKAY
- [2014-06-22 19:47:34] <Zyn> http://wanderers-sandbox.wikidot.com/zyn-s-sandbox
- [2014-06-22 19:47:37] <Zyn> SECOND TAB
- [2014-06-22 19:47:38] <Zyn> FORMAT
- [2014-06-22 19:47:40] <Zyn> I AM STARVING
- [2014-06-22 19:47:41] <Zyn> bbl
- [2014-06-22 19:47:48] <thedeadlymoose> lmao
- [2014-06-22 19:48:27] <thedeadlymoose> I think we need Vivax for the format junk although maybe I'm just being cowardly >:P
- [2014-06-22 19:48:32] <thedeadlymoose> I'll think on it
- [2014-06-22 19:49:00] <thedeadlymoose> summarizing prev convo so you can read up: Dex was mentioning we need to go over what's required & assign things to do
- [2014-06-22 19:49:08] <thedeadlymoose> [19:46] Dexanote because there are a couple things i'm interested in here
- [2014-06-22 19:49:08] <thedeadlymoose> [19:46] Dexanote specifically the scp as SH document, and encounter between another goi and SH
- [2014-06-22 19:49:15] <thedeadlymoose> sounds fine
- [2014-06-22 19:49:30] <thedeadlymoose> we're at the stage where we can write a draft, esp of tales
- [2014-06-22 19:49:51] <thedeadlymoose> the scp as SH document -- feel free to go for it, but we have not totally worked the format out yet.
- [2014-06-22 19:49:58] <Dexanote> I'll make shit up
- [2014-06-22 19:49:58] <thedeadlymoose> Zyn has the draft in the sandbox, but it's not final
- [2014-06-22 19:50:02] <Dexanote> i see it
- [2014-06-22 19:50:04] * thedeadlymoose nods
- [2014-06-22 19:50:19] <thedeadlymoose> If you're cool writing a thing that needs reworking, go for it, make shit up, try to hit points already mentioned
- [2014-06-22 19:50:27] <Dexanote> kind of having... like
- [2014-06-22 19:50:33] <Dexanote> a fairly different idea of what i wanna go for
- [2014-06-22 19:50:37] <Dexanote> but i'll see what i can do
- [2014-06-22 19:50:50] <thedeadlymoose> Pitch the idea
- [2014-06-22 19:50:56] <thedeadlymoose> We can see if we can make an amalgamation
- [2014-06-22 19:50:59] <thedeadlymoose> What do you have in mind?
- [2014-06-22 19:52:04] <Dexanote> no i like
- [2014-06-22 19:52:10] <Dexanote> well
- [2014-06-22 19:52:23] <Dexanote> More like a diary/bestiary/almanac style piece on an SCP
- [2014-06-22 19:53:01] <Dexanote> i mean looking at the proposed format points it could work, but I can't see the Hand using this kind of format for every SCP
- [2014-06-22 19:53:02] <thedeadlymoose> Vivax mentioned something similar, yeah
- [2014-06-22 19:53:11] <Dexanote> or every piece/entry
- [2014-06-22 19:53:12] <thedeadlymoose> Ffff
- [2014-06-22 19:53:13] <Dexanote> you know?
- [2014-06-22 19:53:13] <Dexanote> Like
- [2014-06-22 19:53:22] <Dexanote> as an example
- [2014-06-22 19:53:42] <Dexanote> an alchemist is not gonna describe Able in the same manner as Eternal Flame
- [2014-06-22 19:53:55] <Dexanote> or my money dragons in the same way as 093
- [2014-06-22 19:54:13] <Dexanote> (i say alchemist but really mean 'general Hand scholar')
- [2014-06-22 19:58:22] <Dexanote> anyway
- [2014-06-22 19:58:25] <Dexanote> i'll figure out something
- [2014-06-22 19:59:00] <Dexanote> also I have an idea for the inter-GOI tale but i think Id like to do that alone
- [2014-06-22 20:04:49] <thedeadlymoose> go for it
- [2014-06-22 20:04:54] <thedeadlymoose> we'll likely do more than one btw
- [2014-06-22 20:05:04] <thedeadlymoose> regarding the format -- we're definitely gonna need to change from the example
- [2014-06-22 20:05:15] <thedeadlymoose> but the example is so we have something to start from
- [2014-06-22 20:14:02] <Zyn> HELLO
- [2014-06-22 20:14:04] <Zyn> I AM BACK
- [2014-06-22 20:14:07] <Zyn> AND FULL OF SUSHI
- [2014-06-22 20:14:12] <Zyn> asdfghjkl;
- [2014-06-22 20:14:14] <Zyn> anyway
- [2014-06-22 20:14:17] <thedeadlymoose> Hiiiiiiiii
- [2014-06-22 20:14:18] <thedeadlymoose> Okay
- [2014-06-22 20:14:20] <thedeadlymoose> So
- [2014-06-22 20:14:22] <Zyn> I agree with Dexaboat
- [2014-06-22 20:14:35] <thedeadlymoose> Do you wanna talk format now or do you wanna shift to some Tales? ---oops, continue
- [2014-06-22 20:14:46] <Zyn> I do not see everyone as writing things in same format
- [2014-06-22 20:14:47] <Zyn> though
- [2014-06-22 20:15:01] <Zyn> I do believe that there should be some info kept consistent
- [2014-06-22 20:15:09] <Zyn> if not terminology
- [2014-06-22 20:15:12] <Zyn> Did you look at the draft
- [2014-06-22 20:15:17] <Zyn> it was kind of hurried
- [2014-06-22 20:15:49] <thedeadlymoose> I did. I'm thinking
- [2014-06-22 20:15:54] <thedeadlymoose> Part of it is that I'm starving :[
- [2014-06-22 20:17:03] <Zyn> :<
- [2014-06-22 20:17:05] <Zyn> I'm sorry
- [2014-06-22 20:17:07] <thedeadlymoose> Let's talk though
- [2014-06-22 20:17:13] <thedeadlymoose> I'll say what I already think and we'll start food
- [2014-06-22 20:17:15] <Zyn> you should eat, man
- [2014-06-22 20:17:22] <thedeadlymoose> *I'll start food
- [2014-06-22 20:17:26] <thedeadlymoose> then come back to see replies
- [2014-06-22 20:17:37] <Zyn> okies
- [2014-06-22 20:18:15] <thedeadlymoose> #1 -- I'm confused, looking at this, as to how it should be followed. The example I have is the Spirit Staff -- but that bullet point format is actually bothering me a lot. I would like the same info in a more diary/almanac/field guide format much better
- [2014-06-22 20:18:21] <thedeadlymoose> possibly even with elements from dossiers
- [2014-06-22 20:18:27] <thedeadlymoose> one sec I'll get example
- [2014-06-22 20:19:12] <Zyn> it doesn't have to be bullets
- [2014-06-22 20:19:23] <thedeadlymoose> the examples aren't as good as I thought they were lol
- [2014-06-22 20:19:26] <Zyn> I didn't really know how else to convey notes
- [2014-06-22 20:19:31] <Riemann> It could be flowers.
- [2014-06-22 20:19:34] <Riemann> Make love not war
- [2014-06-22 20:19:52] <thedeadlymoose> I think for the spirit staff, more of it should be written out
- [2014-06-22 20:19:57] <thedeadlymoose> the main body of it
- [2014-06-22 20:20:01] <thedeadlymoose> THEN we could add on notes
- [2014-06-22 20:20:07] <Zyn> ah, okay
- [2014-06-22 20:20:20] <Zyn> I put the format in bullets because those are things to include
- [2014-06-22 20:20:26] <thedeadlymoose> As for the style guide -- I still dunno how to follow it. :X I think it would help if we got some examples of what we mean by diary/almanac/field guide format
- [2014-06-22 20:20:30] <thedeadlymoose> I know all of us agree on that
- [2014-06-22 20:20:40] <Zyn> The style guide was more for info
- [2014-06-22 20:20:42] <thedeadlymoose> and I'll work on getting some in a bit, too
- [2014-06-22 20:20:47] <Zyn> like, the what to include
- [2014-06-22 20:20:50] <Zyn> not so much the how
- [2014-06-22 20:20:51] <thedeadlymoose> Yeah -- I mean looking at it, I have no clue how to follow it :X
- [2014-06-22 20:20:54] <thedeadlymoose> Ahhh kk
- [2014-06-22 20:20:58] <thedeadlymoose> Okay cool
- [2014-06-22 20:21:04] <Zyn> that's why bullets, lol
- [2014-06-22 20:21:09] <thedeadlymoose> I maybe got the wrong impression from the Spirit Staff example
- [2014-06-22 20:21:15] <thedeadlymoose> because it follows it v. literally XD
- [2014-06-22 20:21:21] <thedeadlymoose> That leads to my second thing
- [2014-06-22 20:21:30] <thedeadlymoose> #2 -- wait, this was my tell from last night
- [2014-06-22 20:21:33] <thedeadlymoose> I'll copy
- [2014-06-22 20:21:59] <thedeadlymoose> "A side note -- we really want a section that emphasizes how an object can be used safely, or person interacted with safely, etc. We need to counter the SCP Foundation's narrative of "the universe is scary and horrible and unknowable and the ONLY answer is to contain it and remain in terror, else humanity goes bye-bye or has a horrible eternal hell-fate""
- [2014-06-22 20:22:18] <thedeadlymoose> Approach might be a large part of that, but ... hmmmm
- [2014-06-22 20:22:56] <thedeadlymoose> afk tho
- [2014-06-22 20:32:09] <thedeadlymoose> back
- [2014-06-22 20:32:17] <thedeadlymoose> Maybe Approach could include that
- [2014-06-22 20:33:40] <thedeadlymoose> #3 is an issue with the Apparatus/Entity/Location thing -- it forces us to split things up into multiple partially identical sections. That's confusing to follow. As opposed to, for example, an "Object Class"
- [2014-06-22 20:33:43] <Zyn> That's what I was thinking
- [2014-06-22 20:33:58] <Zyn> Although
- [2014-06-22 20:34:17] <Zyn> I originally had one giant compiled thing
- [2014-06-22 20:34:23] <Zyn> but the information got hard to organize
- [2014-06-22 20:34:40] <Zyn> once we have a better idea of the format, we can pare down the required info
- [2014-06-22 20:34:51] <Zyn> do you get a better idea of the "loyalty" aspect, though?
- [2014-06-22 20:35:11] <Zyn> the thing is, for apparatus, there's more info because those things can be "used" d:
- [2014-06-22 20:35:42] <thedeadlymoose> That's not really loyalty so much as being 'in sync' with a user <.<
- [2014-06-22 20:35:43] <Zyn> But I was trying to go for a different take, like... these things should be respected. They can be companions, keys to unlock your inner potential, some people /need/ them to realize their true strengths
- [2014-06-22 20:35:57] <Zyn> "Synchronicity" seems too... flowery?
- [2014-06-22 20:36:02] <thedeadlymoose> We could do that, but -- we shouldn't have something like Apparatus: X Title -- because it makes the formatting less intuitive
- [2014-06-22 20:36:09] <Zyn> mkay
- [2014-06-22 20:36:13] <Zyn> You want to like
- [2014-06-22 20:36:14] <thedeadlymoose> We could have, for example Name: X / Type: Apparatus
- [2014-06-22 20:36:20] <Zyn> take the text I have
- [2014-06-22 20:36:22] <Zyn> and edit it
- [2014-06-22 20:36:25] <Zyn> ?
- [2014-06-22 20:36:32] <Zyn> That way we don't have to discuss things one by one
- [2014-06-22 20:36:35] <thedeadlymoose> I can do that sure, though I'm still floundering haha
- [2014-06-22 20:36:42] <Zyn> since what I gave is pretty rough, lol
- [2014-06-22 20:36:54] <thedeadlymoose> I need to get examples of field guide / almanac / diary description junk
- [2014-06-22 20:37:01] <thedeadlymoose> well I guess the diary description stuff is obvious
- [2014-06-22 20:37:12] <thedeadlymoose> Oooh
- [2014-06-22 20:37:21] <thedeadlymoose> We could have a section for 'Thoughts' or something
- [2014-06-22 20:37:30] <thedeadlymoose> Different peoples' opinions on a thing
- [2014-06-22 20:37:39] <thedeadlymoose> Since Notes seems to be mainly pragmatic?
- [2014-06-22 20:37:42] <thedeadlymoose> Or... Hmmmm
- [2014-06-22 20:39:38] <Zyn> Idk if all the stuff really needs to be labeled
- [2014-06-22 20:40:09] <thedeadlymoose> Honestly I think what we should do now is try to get those examples
- [2014-06-22 20:40:11] <thedeadlymoose> Let's go for it
- [2014-06-22 20:40:24] <thedeadlymoose> (though I'm going afk first coz foodz!)
- [2014-06-22 20:40:42] <thedeadlymoose> And, you're right -- some can be "Labeled Section" and some can be a suggested inclusion
- [2014-06-22 20:40:50] <thedeadlymoose> like diary sections / etc could be under Notes
- [2014-06-22 20:41:04] <thedeadlymoose> section suggestion: "Observations"
- [2014-06-22 21:30:42] <thedeadlymoose> Zyn, you around?
- [2014-06-22 21:33:32] <Zyn> ish
- [2014-06-22 21:33:34] <Zyn> what's up?
- [2014-06-22 21:35:59] <thedeadlymoose> are you able to look for examples of field guide-y almanac-y stuff?
- [2014-06-22 21:36:02] <thedeadlymoose> same question, Dexanote
- [2014-06-22 21:36:07] * thedeadlymoose just starting to google
- [2014-06-22 21:37:26] <Dexanote> http://www.nhbs.com/images/jackets_resizer_xlarge/15/153816_2.jpg
- [2014-06-22 21:37:40] <thedeadlymoose> http://www.earlyamerica.com/review/2003_winter_spring/images/Almanac.jpg
- [2014-06-22 21:39:07] <thedeadlymoose> http://drtlibrary.files.wordpress.com/2009/01/sc-old-rough-and-ready-almanac-1849wtmk1.jpg
- [2014-06-22 21:39:16] <thedeadlymoose> Zyn: Did we think of events? Above example is an event
- [2014-06-22 21:40:53] <thedeadlymoose> next 2 examples are a bit too fantasy ish but still
- [2014-06-22 21:40:54] <thedeadlymoose> http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2010/132/2/c/Bestiary___Manticore_by_D_Oedinger.jpg
- [2014-06-22 21:41:20] <thedeadlymoose> http://th05.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2010/132/d/f/Bestiary___Wendigo_by_D_Oedinger.jpg
- [2014-06-22 21:41:36] <thedeadlymoose> though that's a neat wendigo. pity they're basically art pieces
- [2014-06-22 21:42:47] <thedeadlymoose> http://www.ebooktreasures.org/a-medieval-bestiary/ < linked for the descriptions; 'It combines description of the physical nature and habits of animals with elaboration on the moral or spiritual significance of these characteristics." " The text and images of the bestiary work together and individually to communicate morally edifying material, such as might be included in medieval sermons,...
- [2014-06-22 21:42:47] <thedeadlymoose> ...in an appealing and accessible manner."
- [2014-06-22 21:44:59] <thedeadlymoose> http://www.imagocorvi.com/images/bestiary4.jpg best eagle lol. the nice thing with Hand Objects is that they can include illustrations an' stuff
- [2014-06-22 21:45:03] <Zyn> hurr
- [2014-06-22 21:45:54] <Zyn> I still have that butterfly shark
- [2014-06-22 21:46:01] <Zyn> I'll upload the image sometime
- [2014-06-22 21:46:12] <thedeadlymoose> http://www.imagocorvi.com/bestiary.htm more pix
- [2014-06-22 21:48:21] <thedeadlymoose> tho really google image search for 'bestiary' has an amazing amount of shtuff
- [2014-06-22 21:49:40] <thedeadlymoose> of course so is the wiki article http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bestiary
- [2014-06-22 21:49:49] <thedeadlymoose> "A few observations found in bestiaries, such as the migration of birds, were discounted by the natural philosophers of later centuries, only to be rediscovered in the modern scientific era." > Hahaha. Wow.
- [2014-06-22 21:50:25] <thedeadlymoose> "even if the bestiary accounts of certain animals was found to not exist, it was crucial to continue believing in the animal because of the claim the Church made to its existence." > this gives me ideas for animals that only exist b/c belief
- [2014-06-22 21:57:01] <Zyn> marp
- [2014-06-22 22:00:19] <thedeadlymoose> http://bestiary.ca/ well we won't run out of ideas for animals lol
- [2014-06-22 22:00:45] <thedeadlymoose> though
- [2014-06-22 22:00:52] <thedeadlymoose> I think I should look for field guide stuff for format
- [2014-06-22 22:00:57] <thedeadlymoose> dex's picture is still the primary format
- [2014-06-22 22:01:16] <Zyn> hrrr
- [2014-06-22 22:01:35] <thedeadlymoose> http://www.nhbs.com/images/jackets_resizer_xlarge/15/153816_2.jpg > Remark (Optional) Description, Habits, Calls, Conservation Status
- [2014-06-22 22:02:11] <thedeadlymoose> interesting that they don't use Enter
- [2014-06-22 22:02:15] <thedeadlymoose> b/c space, obviously
- [2014-06-22 22:03:05] <thedeadlymoose> http://birdandmoon.com/images/christmasfieldguide.jpg haha
- [2014-06-22 22:03:11] <thedeadlymoose> no format but cute
- [2014-06-22 22:04:08] <thedeadlymoose> http://10000birds.com/kaufman-field-guide-to-nature-of-new-england-a-field-guide-review-by-an-aspiring-naturalist.htm another format
- [2014-06-22 22:04:37] <thedeadlymoose> http://10000birds.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/12/kk.herons3.jpg relevant pic
- [2014-06-22 22:04:46] <thedeadlymoose> check out the format
- [2014-06-22 22:05:24] <thedeadlymoose> COMMON NAME [space] /Latin name
- [2014-06-22 22:06:00] <thedeadlymoose> then a description, again unlabled, segueing again Adult/Juvenile physical descriptions
- [2014-06-22 22:06:34] <thedeadlymoose> Note also that in both cases there are multiple animals [objects/etc?] described -- at the top is a section describing generalities
- [2014-06-22 22:06:50] <thedeadlymoose> We could expand on that for cases where there are multiple variations of a thing
- [2014-06-22 22:07:15] <thedeadlymoose> it could be interesting to have two clearly separate guides tacked together with contradictory information
- [2014-06-22 22:07:50] <thedeadlymoose> and/or notes supplementing another author's insufficient information
- [2014-06-22 22:08:18] <thedeadlymoose> [22:07] thedeadlymoose it could be interesting to have two clearly separate guides tacked together with contradictory information > Forgot to add "on the same subject matter / creature / object / event / etc"
- [2014-06-22 22:08:26] <thedeadlymoose> Or alternatively reference other contradictory info
- [2014-06-22 22:09:04] <thedeadlymoose> re: the insufficient information -- for example, imagine if that page on herons was missing the pix and didn't explain what a heron actually was, and people from Earth didn't know what herons were
- [2014-06-22 22:09:10] <thedeadlymoose> someone else could annotate and add that info
- [2014-06-22 22:09:23] <thedeadlymoose> Overall----
- [2014-06-22 22:09:55] <thedeadlymoose> I think it would be promising to go with the conceit that this is a computerized database being formed for Hand use, including scans of things and articles that only exist in cyberspace
- [2014-06-22 22:10:16] <thedeadlymoose> of course there's the problem of 'what if the Foundation/GOC/enemies get ahold of this'... so I dunno, hrm >_<
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- [2014-06-22 22:10:50] <thedeadlymoose> maybe it's under magical protection for Hand members only (not checking from a roster except for specific files created by specific groups -- but anyone identifying as Hand and NOT Foundation/GOC)
- [2014-06-22 22:11:21] <thedeadlymoose> Maybe their security clearance level stuff is layers of magical protection -- one must swear to do no harm to the Hand or subjects of what they're reading, etc
- [2014-06-22 22:11:31] <thedeadlymoose> or share with those who intend harm
- [2014-06-22 22:11:33] <thedeadlymoose> hrm
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- [2014-06-22 22:12:25] <thedeadlymoose> wb Dexanote
- [2014-06-22 22:12:32] <thedeadlymoose> what's the last thing you got?
- [2014-06-22 22:12:36] <thedeadlymoose> also, Zyn, thoughts?
- [2014-06-22 22:12:41] <Dexanote> i didnt disconnect
- [2014-06-22 22:12:52] <Dexanote> i gotta reboot CIRC sometimes to fix lag
- [2014-06-22 22:13:01] <Dexanote> give me the last like... two or three posts
- [2014-06-22 22:13:47] <thedeadlymoose> kk
- [2014-06-22 22:13:51] <Zyn> my thoughts are I have too many thoughts
- [2014-06-22 22:13:54] <thedeadlymoose> [22:09] thedeadlymoose Overall----
- [2014-06-22 22:13:54] <thedeadlymoose> [22:09] thedeadlymoose I think it would be promising to go with the conceit that this is a computerized database being formed for Hand use, including scans of things and articles that only exist in cyberspace
- [2014-06-22 22:13:54] <thedeadlymoose> [22:10] thedeadlymoose of course there's the problem of 'what if the Foundation/GOC/enemies get ahold of this'... so I dunno, hrm >_<
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- [2014-06-22 22:13:54] <thedeadlymoose> [22:10] thedeadlymoose maybe it's under magical protection for Hand members only (not checking from a roster except for specific files created by specific groups -- but anyone identifying as Hand and NOT Foundation/GOC)
- [2014-06-22 22:13:54] <thedeadlymoose> [22:11] thedeadlymoose Maybe their security clearance level stuff is layers of magical protection -- one must swear to do no harm to the Hand or subjects of what they're reading, etc
- [2014-06-22 22:13:54] <thedeadlymoose> [22:11] thedeadlymoose or share with those who intend harm
- [2014-06-22 22:13:54] <thedeadlymoose> [22:11] thedeadlymoose hrm
- [2014-06-22 22:14:00] <thedeadlymoose> Zyn: Start blabbering! XD
- [2014-06-22 22:14:02] <thedeadlymoose> Hahaha
- [2014-06-22 22:14:09] <thedeadlymoose> Well, if that works for you, anyway
- [2014-06-22 22:14:19] <Dexanote> well
- [2014-06-22 22:14:19] <Dexanote> ok
- [2014-06-22 22:14:27] <Dexanote> thedeadlymoose [22:11] thedeadlymoose Maybe their security clearance level stuff is layers of magical protection -- one must swear to do no harm to the Hand or subjects of what they're reading, etc
- [2014-06-22 22:14:30] <Dexanote> i don't like this at ALL
- [2014-06-22 22:14:54] <Zyn> s.gnd.kgxdng fcj
- [2014-06-22 22:14:55] <Dexanote> its free information at the library. anyone can read it. Thats the beauty of it - and why the Foundation fears them, in my mind. One of the reasons.
- [2014-06-22 22:15:39] <Dexanote> Now... we can have a similar concept, but I'm a bit against having a 'clearance level' of any kind for the Hand.
- [2014-06-22 22:15:40] <thedeadlymoose> Dex: I meant for very specific, personal shit
- [2014-06-22 22:15:53] <Dexanote> Can you give an example?
- [2014-06-22 22:15:57] <thedeadlymoose> Zyn's Bird Staff
- [2014-06-22 22:16:19] <thedeadlymoose> Like if that staff had other, even more personal details included -- it might be magically protected info
- [2014-06-22 22:16:29] <thedeadlymoose> To protect the staff's custodian
- [2014-06-22 22:16:48] <thedeadlymoose> also don't take me literally with security clearance level
- [2014-06-22 22:16:59] <thedeadlymoose> just talking equivalents and such
- [2014-06-22 22:17:40] <Dexanote> I'd just think the custodian wouldn't actually be presented as a point of information, tbh. Maybe significant weilders through history, but i'm not sure if it'd hold up to date information on the holder (unless it was a single person through history)
- [2014-06-22 22:17:42] <Dexanote> OR
- [2014-06-22 22:18:23] <thedeadlymoose> errrrrrrr
- [2014-06-22 22:18:31] <thedeadlymoose> in Zyn's Bird Staff it's made uniquely for the wielder
- [2014-06-22 22:18:36] <thedeadlymoose> who is still alive
- [2014-06-22 22:18:38] <thedeadlymoose> it's a recent creation
- [2014-06-22 22:18:50] <Dexanote> Hm.
- [2014-06-22 22:19:15] <thedeadlymoose> it seems case by case, it's just that inevitably there's gonna be personal info in there, I think
- [2014-06-22 22:19:27] <Dexanote> "Additional information on [person] can be found in [other book on this kind of information, volume xx]?
- [2014-06-22 22:19:51] <Dexanote> Like, its a scholarly work. Crossreferencing is likely common.
- [2014-06-22 22:20:14] <Dexanote> I mean
- [2014-06-22 22:20:24] <thedeadlymoose> Sure, although keep in mind these aren't books
- [2014-06-22 22:20:28] <thedeadlymoose> unless we frame them that way
- [2014-06-22 22:20:38] <thedeadlymoose> and many of them aren't scholarly works by scholars
- [2014-06-22 22:20:47] <Dexanote> Excerpts from specific works, perhaps...
- [2014-06-22 22:20:52] <thedeadlymoose> yeah that'd be awesome
- [2014-06-22 22:20:58] <Dexanote> No I'm peaking on Zyns piece speficially, i dunno how that happened
- [2014-06-22 22:21:06] <Dexanote> like a photocopy of that particular page, i mean
- [2014-06-22 22:21:28] <thedeadlymoose> certainly a lot of them are scholars and presumably the format they're trying to follow is influenced by scholars
- [2014-06-22 22:21:30] <thedeadlymoose> ...I'm confused
- [2014-06-22 22:21:45] <thedeadlymoose> regardless, also --- crossreferencing should be common yeah
- [2014-06-22 22:21:51] <Dexanote> I mean from what I recall (from reading it over seven hours ago) the bird staff was framed as an entry in an encyclopedia type work
- [2014-06-22 22:22:12] <Dexanote> thats the angle im approaching it from i might be wrong
- [2014-06-22 22:23:26] <Dexanote> :( sorry
- [2014-06-22 22:25:32] <Dexanote> guys?
- [2014-06-22 22:28:59] <thedeadlymoose> I had to get laundry
- [2014-06-22 22:29:01] =-= Riemann is now known as rewrite
- [2014-06-22 22:29:11] <Dexanote> ok yeah i thought i'd pissed you both off
- [2014-06-22 22:29:25] <Dexanote> "jesus christ dex keep up holy fuck we went through this twice now"
- [2014-06-22 22:29:26] <Dexanote> etc
- [2014-06-22 22:29:27] <thedeadlymoose> lol
- [2014-06-22 22:29:29] <thedeadlymoose> no
- [2014-06-22 22:29:44] <thedeadlymoose> we weren't framing it as an entry in an encyclopedia type work
- [2014-06-22 22:29:47] <thedeadlymoose> but we could
- [2014-06-22 22:29:53] =-= rewrite is now known as Riemann
- [2014-06-22 22:29:56] <Dexanote> COMING SOON TO A THEATRE NEAR YOU. "RAGIN MOOSE AND ZYN THE FIEND."
- [2014-06-22 22:29:58] <thedeadlymoose> lmao
- [2014-06-22 22:30:00] <Dexanote> anyway yeah
- [2014-06-22 22:30:00] <thedeadlymoose> our problems are twofold at the moment
- [2014-06-22 22:30:09] <thedeadlymoose> #1 narrowing down from the billion ideas
- [2014-06-22 22:30:18] <thedeadlymoose> #2 Vivax is gonna come in tomorrow and upend errything :[
- [2014-06-22 22:31:15] <thedeadlymoose> http://10000birds.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/12/kk.flowers.jpg this flowers page may be a good co-example with the herons page
- [2014-06-22 22:31:53] <Zyn> marp
- [2014-06-22 22:32:53] <thedeadlymoose> hrm
- [2014-06-22 22:33:05] <thedeadlymoose> have you guys seen the herman fuller stuff
- [2014-06-22 22:33:51] <thedeadlymoose> they made a template http://www.scp-wiki.net/component:hf-poster
- [2014-06-22 22:34:01] <thedeadlymoose> I haven't yet seen how it looks in practice
- [2014-06-22 22:34:26] <thedeadlymoose> oh man I'm so tired :[
- [2014-06-22 22:40:25] <Zyn> saaaaaaaaame
- [2014-06-22 22:41:27] <Dexanote> go to bed you two
- [2014-06-22 22:41:45] <Zyn> no
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